Book: Life Goes on 2

Author: Mochi1316

Reviewer: Riya

Title: 4/10
I wished to see something different. Something more beautiful. Like " Life Stopped Without You" or something else, I know I am also not good at making titles for book but we can always try right?

Cover: 5/5
I like the cover. It was beautiful and meaningful.

Description: 2.5/5
Like I said in the previous book. Description is what a person reads first before reading your book. I gave the marks for the disclaimer but next time make sure you write a description, atleast try.

Reader's Interaction:5/5
You have quite a good amount of votes nd views, it can grow and it will with time. Don't worry. Keep it up!

Plot: 7/10
Plot formation is your strength. You tend to make beautiful and deep plots. But there were mistakes. There were a lot of parts where I didn't understand why it was even needed. Like, the part where Jin sends Jungkook V's video and then Jungkook instantly recruit Taehyung as a model. The story could have been different from this. Jungkook and Taehyung were probably reborn in the second book. You could have taken things slowly. Like, there meeting could have taken time. There were a lot of parts in your story that I have to read 2-3 times to understand because it was confusing. I think without these mistakes your plot would have been far better.

Grammar: 13/20
I think your grammar, vocabulary and typos were a lot better in the first part. There were a lot of mistakes in the vocabulary. To make sure that the reader stays interested in your book. You don't have to use those big heavy words. Just be simple and normal.

Plot twists and attraction: 10/10
Though your story ain't finished yet but I am interested to know how it ends and how things unfold in the next chapter. So that's good.

Emotions and Character Development: 9/10
The emotions in your book has always been amazing. All those beautiful, deep lines you write at the end really gets me.

Creativity and Way of Writing: 7/10
Your way of creativity can improve, you don't have to use big words but you can still write in a beautiful way with just those normal day-to-day words.

Your opinion about the book: 7/2
It was a good read till now, and hope in the future too. But there were things which are quite important and you have to pay attention to it.

Review:
I think you can improve more. I don't know what went wrong in this part, but I think that I liked the first part more. Pay attention to your mistakes, and I know that you will good and will be an amazing author.

Total: 69.5 You can do better. Keep improving. Nobody's born perfect right?

[ Sorry for the delay, the reviewer was  quite busy and was already done with the review so i thought it'd be better to upload it💜 We again apologize for the mistake and hope to see you in the upcoming batch too💜 Do let us know if you have any queries. Thank you. 💖✨

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