Author : Bangtan_cute_person
Reviewer : saerlie &  Kittens_Bunny

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Title : 7/10
The title sounds so unique and it gives the book a thoughtful aura. However I am kind of confused about its relation to the story. I didn't really find any place where flowers are specified. It would be nice if the author mentions it, I am guessing it's kind of a metaphor maybe.

Cover : 7/10
The cover is quite appealing and the color scheme is not too flashy, just according to the mood. Using brighter colors as a contrast to her life, how Taehyung brought it is a nice representation.
The cover was very simple . It needed more creativity in it . It needed a better picture that suited the title . The font was good but writing the title twice made it seem congested.
The lip color of Taehyung seems a bit off, it's too dark. Otherwise the positioning of the text and the fonts are beautiful!

Description : 7/10
The description was interesting at first till I read the whole story. I am again puzzled about its connection with the story. From here I assumed that any of the guy would be in a serious situation at some part but the ending wasn't exactly it. Which is why I am not very satisfied with it.

Pace : 7/10
The pace was alright. Not hurried or slow, fits the story well. This part isn't included in pace but it is important so I am mentioning it. The author should give small gaps between those paragraphs, it becomes a little tiresome to read them continuously.

Plot and Concept : 7.5 /10
The concept was good, heartfelt actually. It showed us a glimpse of lives of people whose family broke after the passing of a certain important person. But the plot didn't do justice to the concept. It was incomplete and left many questions. All I wanted was to see our MC achieving things and moving on because everyone gets happiness one day. But the last part made it fuddled.

Character Development : 7/10
I expected to see a lot of character development with a person with so many flaws. The flaws aren't the problem, the problem is her unchanging attitude. I expected the MC to finally realize what Soobin has done for her and to acknowledge it with pure appreciation. Also I wanted to see development in her mother's character. How she later pays effort to improve their relationship and support her daughter. I didn't see much with made me a little disappointed.

The Female lead expressed strong yet fragile character . Her emotions , feels everything was expressed in a different way . She's not like the typical female character like in any other fanfictions . Her struggles of making friends or the block of hesitation between her and Aera expressed how she didn't want to make others feel burdened with her feelings. On the other hand, her often opening up to Taehyung or Soobin showed the need of a friend to hear her out . Her self consciousness and insecurity seemed similar to this day problems of teenagers which make her character relatable.

Choi Soobin .

There's nothing much to say about this character . He was like a best friend of Ha Eun who always tried to give her company and tried to be with her . He's like a support Ha Eun needed after all her problems and stress .

Kim Taehyung .

Lonely man who needed someone to talk to . A companion who isn't related to business or just a friend for money . Ha Eun was his support at their first meeting when she almost thrice called him and he spoke with her without leaving her or keeping the call . The talks between them seemed genuine and like there was a need to have each other on their side made them a great duo.

Grammar : 8.5/10
There were no errors or spelling issues in between the sentences. I appreciate the author's attention and carefulness towards editing. Purely perfect grammar as well as the vocabulary skills of the writer are impressive !  The use of different words rather than common words made the chapters look professional .
Also while using korean words I would like to say that don't use it more than twice. It kind of decreases its authenticity so.

Writing style : 7.5/10
The writing was descriptive but at some parts it was a little too much. About the environment and all. A quick recommendation that when you want to mention your characters don't do it in a single paragraph. You can mention it at different parts or different chapters. This thing makes the readers remember it well. Otherwise they just give it a read and don't consider it much.

The descriptions from the start to the end are really mesmerising and awesome . From her problems with her mom , her mental state , her struggles to her actual search for home was described very beautifully . The literary work of the author makes the book read worthy.

Overall impression : 6.5/10
Overall the story was going well and had formed a connection with the readers which broke at the end. Otherwise the chapters feel well and good. The ending can be changed to give the story the idea, justice.

Just a recommendation that you can add the music/pictures or anything extra at either the start of the end. It kinda breaks the flow of reading. Any note also.

Rating of the book : 6 /10
Well overall the book was impressive but the cover made it seem like a negative point to it . The cover needs some change and the book is perfect .
Would have given it a better number if the ending was according to the description. It kept me hanging till the end but didn't have a satisfactory completion. Still the actual ending remains a question. This thing should be paid attention to.

Total : 71 /100

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