Title: The Prep's Diary: How the prep became so preppy

Author: Superwicked

Reviewer: Sri_999

Title: ⅗

The title for me, was not very catchy but it does sum up what the story is about (A diary ofc). I prefer short and sweet titles and it's just that long titles kind of make me not want to read.

Cover: ⅘

The cover is very cute. I am a fan of the colour pink and other girly stuff so I liked it but I would suggest that you should probably do something more creative with it or you could even order a cover from a shop if you want.

Blurb: 7.5/10

The blurb is decent but very short and a little boring. I think you should write a few samples down and then compare them with each other to see which one fits the best. You see, the blurb is supposed to be catchy since it makes the readers want to read your story.

Opening Chapter: 8.5/10

I do not read a lot of books which have a diary format so I don't really know what to say about the opening but I guess that it was good enough to make the readers continue.

Flow: 8/10

The flow is decent, it is just like how diary entries should be. I don't find it abrupt or fast and it didn't confuse me so I am fine with it.

Writing Style: 6/10

Now this is where I would like to comment, I think that you should write a diary entry of the day and then maybe switch to real life because I saw how you wrote many dialogues in the diary entry and I find it a little weird. I don't know about others but I usually don't write many things that people say in my diary but I understand it is a story so there has to be a conversation between the characters and that's why I recommend you to do what I mentioned above.

Overall: 37/50

The story has potential and I believe that you too are a great writer so give your story a little more time and it will be great! Thank you for choosing and giving me a chance to review your book and I hope this was helpful. 

Have a wonderful day!