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The given bar chart illustrates the information on how many hours were spent during leisure time by Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazillian tourists on holiday in Greece in August 2015. Overall, visiting places was the least appealing activities of 4 countries that they didn't pay much interest in.

In China tourists spend almost 8 hours per day on reading books which was become the highest fraction compared to 2 other activities: went to the beach and visited places. It also stay the same with American tourists. However, the reading book's hours of American tourists were much less than Chinese one. The number of hours Chinese tourists spent on reading books reached number of an 8, while in America, it just reached a 5. Moreover, the hours that were spent on visiting places were also much higher.

Regarding Turkish tourists and Brazillian tourists, the differences between them weren't very remarkable. Whereas in Brazil, they spent 6 hours at the beach, it was 5 hours in Turkey. The hours of relaxing activities from the highest to the lowest will go respectively: went to the beach, read books and finally visited places.