When we look at our earth , we wonder that our eath has changed a lot due to industrialization and deforestation. It seems to me that people keeps them busy to fulfil their demand,they donot think about environmental damage, extinction of animal and global warming that have made our earth to face in great danger. Others think that our earth is a nice place to live due to technological innovation that has made our lives more convenient and comfortable.However,I believe that earth is now more damaged than before due to industrialization and pollution, and deforestation and global warming.

(When we look at our earth from the time we were born to the present day, we can see lots of changes by own eyes due to rapid deforestation and industrialization. I feel that people keep themselves busy in order to fulfill their demands but do not care about environmental damages, extinction of animals and global warming which are threatening every one of us. Though some people think that our earth is being a nice place to live due to technological innovations leading to sophisticated life styles, I believe that there has been more damaged due to deforestation, industrialization, pollution and global warming.)

First of all, people are trying to build more industry and cleaning up the forest . This has made some animals to extinct from our world. For instance, if people cut up all bamboo trees ,then all panda bears will die out because of the lack of their favourite food. Moreover, people will deprive from fresh air because smoke that emits from industry and water quality will go down due to mix up with industrial chemicals.

(First of all, people are cleaning up the forest (deforestation) in order to build more industries leading to extinction of some animals from our world. For instance, by cutting all bamboo trees, panda bears will get extinct due to the lack of their habitat. Moreover, people will be deprived of fresh air because of smoke emitting from industries. Similarly, water quality will degrade as it mix up with industrial chemicals making it hazardous for drinking.)

In addition, effects of deforestation is now tangible to everybody. We see that many areas are flooded by raised sea level and green house gas are gradually increasing that is responsible for global warming. For example, few developing country, such as Bangladesh gets flood every year and it causes lot of devastation .

(In addition, effect of deforestation is now tangible to everybody. We can see that many areas are flooded by increased sea level. For example, many developing countries such as India, Bangladesh, Nepal gets flooded every year and causes lots of devastation making many people homeless; and without food and sanitation. Furthermore, green house effects are gradually increasing due to Deforestation and Industrialization which in turn are responsible for global warming. Higher rate of melting of ice in Antarctica is the result of global warming.)

In summary, taking into consideration of all factors that have made our world being damaged rather than a beautiful place to live ,such as construction of new factory and clean up of forest and global warming are responsible for that. We can make our earth more beautiful with our great endeavour that will be beneficial for future generation.

(In conclusion, taking into consideration of factors such as deforestation and industrialization that are damaging our earth we can still make it a better place to live with our great endeavor which will be beneficial for us and our future generation.)