Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

A Hero's Fate By Gold_Roses_of_Winter

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is alright to use I guess but it is a little stretched and scrunched together. The lettering is also hard to read and I struggled to read the words of the title.

The title of your book is interesting and it captured my eye and made me wonder what type of fate did Naruto have? Is he going to struggle or have adventures? I think you picked a pretty good title.

I feel as if your description is point on! It is interesting and mysterious and does not give too much of the plot away. The grammar is decent and I could not find anything wrong with it.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is interesting as I have seen a few of these types of stories circling around the fanfic community. I also considered you brave for writing a fanfic where Naruto is the main character. ^_^' I do not think I could do that. I think you could work a little more on your grammar a bit and maybe try and use the line-breaks a little better because sometimes I had trouble finding them.

I think some of your plot was rushed a lot in certain places and sometimes the chapters were short. The description is important to allow your readers to connect with your story and to help them become one with the characters, being said, I think you could work some more on describing things. An example would be-

Naruto threw punch after punch at the wooden post ignoring the split skin and blood that trailed down from his knuckles in pain, "How dare they!" he hissed in uttered loathing and hatred. "HOW DARE THEY!" he roared azure-blue eyes brighten in cold fury.

Final verdict on your story

While I would not read your story because I don't read these types, I know you have a good one on your hands that will do well and perhaps even become ranked high on the fanfic list.

Cheers mate!

-Crow