Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that any negative critics I say are not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please for Kami' sake, remember you asked us to do this.

BOOK: For Nobara

AUTHOR: Naburi

First Impressions:

I do not know about other people but before I read the book I often judge it by the cover, title, and description. I know if it looks and sounds good, I usually read it right away. Though I think this might be a given for any avid reader. Your cover is basically the essence in what your story is going to be about in a way. The better the cover, the better the story because it means you are working hard for it to be so. I love the darken tones of your cover and what I have read so far of your story, it fits seamlessly with it. The only small problem I had was the fact the lettering was a little bit blurry.

Another way to catch a potential reader's attention is to have a catchy title. A title is just like a picture, meaning it can capture a thousand words about the story without giving anything away about the plot. I like the simplicity of your title as it drew me in wanting to know who or what Nobara was.

Writing a description of the story can be rather hard and I understand completely as a fellow writer myself. You don't want your description to be too long or even too short. You also don't want to give too much of your story away to the reader either. That being said, I think your description was on the point if maybe a little long in my opinion.

Your Story's Plot

I am completely intrigued with your plot as I have yet to see something quite like it before. I love the fact that you've made Kakazu a main character and seemingly put him in a grey light for us, showing us his more human side compared to the monster we see in the show. I cling in hope that the main character, finds peace as she is only a child.

Your Story's Structure

So far what I have seen, your stories structure seems on point. The flow of the chapters are decently placed and the details you've put are nicely done though make a little more description with emotions would be a great addition. I only found a few grammar mistakes, but all in all, wonderful.

Final Verdict on your story

I think you have a really good thing going for this story. If anyone is in for an angst and heartfelt pain story, then your writing one. I have my eye out for this.

Final words from Crowillow

I know I probably came off rather rude or harsh, but this is a review and the author consented to it. Also, please remember this is just my opinion and other readers or writers may not agree with me on it. A review is nothing but free advice sometimes taken and other times not okay. I'm hardly the perfect writer myself and I can guarantee you I'm learning something new about writing daily.

Cheer's mate!

-Crow