Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

It's Good To Be Bad By SizedSlim

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is stretched but not to the point where it would be unclear to see. The title is clear to read as well though I also think that while your cover is usable, I would also consider bland in my opinion. I will be honest and say if I was searching for Naruto fanfic's I would pass by it without a second thought due to the no eye-catching color to it.

The title of your story is interesting and really caught my eye. While I saw similar close titles it works because it caught my eye right away and made me wonder how it was good to be bad?

I feel as if your description is point on and catching, however, I would recommend you work a little better on your grammar. Also, take the warning away from the plot changes, it's your story, it's a fanfiction, we know that canon Naruto will not necessarily happen.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is bland and repetition of some Naruto stories of OC's I've read before. Your OC also contradicts herself as being both impatient and emotionless among other things.

I think some of your plot was rushed and not given enough time to develop. The chapters were short and just not given time to settle into a solid plot. The grammar could use work as well while the descriptions need to be used a lot more. Descriptions are important so readers can connect with you and your story. Describing feelings, areas, and characters helps bring the story and the characters themselves alive.

Line-breaks are key things for stories to established when you've changed the scene and tone of setting, I found none of these within the story.

Final verdict on your story

I think if you make the chapters longer with details and not so rushed that people will read it in no time if not right now!

-Crowe