Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

Meeting Yondaime By narutofanninja2

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is stretched and a little blurred but other than that, it's an alright cover that can be used. It's colorful enough to capture potential readers' attention.

The title of your story is interesting and caught my eye which kudos to you because it is hard to create a title that not only hasn't been used but also captures your potential readers as well.

I feel as if your description is bland, boring, and needs a bit work on your grammar.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is interesting too the fact is rare to see a flip on the canon like you've done and created your own plotline. I also enjoy the Minato and Naruto moments cause Naruto deserves love!

I think some of your plot was rushed and not given enough time to develop. The chapters were long in some chapters but short in others. The grammar could use work as well while the descriptions need to be used a lot more. Descriptions are important so readers can connect with you and your story. Describing feelings, areas, and characters helps bring the story and the characters themselves alive.

Line-breaks are key things for stories to established when you've changed the scene and tone of the setting, I could not recall you using them at all.

Final verdict on your story

I think if you fix it up a bit you would definitely rise to become a popular writer in no time with your story.

Cheers mate!

-Crowe