No One Stands Alone

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Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

No One Stands Alone By Infinitely_Eternal

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is visually stunning and captures the reader's attention right away. I like how elegant and soft the colors are but instead of giving off a soft look of gentleness it shows heartache and melancholy.

The title of your book is amazing and it immediately captured my attention. I felt it drew the attention of not only my eye but other potential readers even if it was not completely unique.

I feel as if your description is done wonderful and gives a little peek into the plot but not too much to the readers. The description allows us to get a little glimpse of who are main OC is and where he comes from and a bit of his ideas.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is interesting to say the least and I think it's cool twisting the plot where this clan you've created seemly feels as if part of the actual Naruto universe. Your details in emotions, people, and areas are on point and I find no fault with your grammar either.

Your line breaks are okay and you do use them well and never once had I felt your plot was rushing by.

Final verdict on your story

Your story is cool and interesting! I can tell you've put significant hard work into writing this story and to give your OC depth along with his clan. I'm seriously considering reading the story myself one day.

Cheers mate!

-Crow

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