Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

On Our Ways By utopianbabe

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is stretched and a little blurred causing your title to not even be seen properly which is not a good thing. I also think the cover while does have a little pop to it to capture the attention of readers, it could use a little more. It is important to your potential readers to see not only the title of your book of the design you made to show what your book is about. A cover is many things and one them is the fact it sheds light on what your story s going to be about without giving the plot away. So I would recommend either remaking the cover yourself or seeking help here on Wattpad.

The title of your story is interesting and caught my eye which kudos to you because it is hard to create a title that not only hasn't been used but also captures your potential readers as well.

I feel as if your description is too long and gives much of your plot away which is bad because it will make potential readers lose quick interest in your story. I would also recommend checking a little more on your grammar.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is interesting too the fact is rare to see a flip on the canon like you've done and created your own plotline.

I think some of your plot was rushed and not given enough time to develop. The chapters were long in some chapters but short in others. The grammar could use work as well while the descriptions need to be used a lot more. Descriptions are important so readers can connect with you and your story. Describing feelings, areas, and characters helps bring the story and the characters themselves alive.

Line-breaks are key things for stories to established when you've changed the scene and tone of the setting, You've used them well within your story.

Final verdict on your story

I think if you fix it up a bit you would definitely rise to become a popular writer in no time with your story.

Cheers mate!

-Crowe