Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

Rin's True Story By kindheart2005

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is stretched and a tad blurry but I deem it usable. The lettering is alright but I suggest going with either a darker or lighter font next time when making a cover.

The title of your story is boring and repetitive, one I've come across several times before. Kudos however for writing a Rin story because there are so few of them out there compared to other Naruto stories.

I feel as if your description is simple and yet mysterious enough to capture my attention right away, again important for the potential readers. Grammar could also use a little bit of work

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is interesting and I would consider it a one of a kind because like I've said before there are so few Rin Nohara fanfictions out there.

I think some of your plot was rushed and not given enough time to develop. The chapters were short in some places and then rather long in others to the point it felt dragged out. The grammar could use work as well while the descriptions need to be used a lot more.

Line-breaks are key things for stories to established when you've changed the scene and tone of the setting, I found none of these within the story.

Final verdict on your story

I think if you make the chapters longer with details and not so rushed that people will flock to it in no time! Well, flock more than they already have!

Cheers mate!

-Crow