Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

thank you, i love you By 1997bunnysmile

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is dark, blurry, grainy, and I just struggled to see it including the title. I suggest either remaking the cover yourself or finding a cover shop here on Wattpad.

The title of your story is okay if a little bland in my opinion. I mean it will stand out a bit to readers but it feels a little repetitive.

I feel as if your description is simple and to the point which is good for descriptions but I feel it could use a little more zest and flare to capture other potential readers. The grammar could use much work as well.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is interesting and bitterly sweet and I would consider it a one of a kind because it's the first I have seen.

I think some of your plot was rushed and not given enough time to develop. The chapters were short and the grammar could use work as well while the descriptions need to be used a lot more.

Line-breaks are key things for stories to established when you've changed the scene and tone of the setting, I found none of these within the story.

Final verdict on your story

I think if you make the chapters longer with details and not so rushed that people will flock to it in no time!

Cheers mate!

-Crow