Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

The Great Medic By DeathByShyKid

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

Covers are important! Covers are meant to be like a beautiful predator trying to trap their prey! ^_^' Your cover is utterly wonderful, writer! The colors pop beautifully without blinding anyone and the title can be seen. Extra points for the talented piece you've drawn yourself.

Titles are nuisances we sadly need, saying that, your title is alright. I find nothing wrong if only in the slight repetitiveness of it.

Descriptions are the bane of every writer's existence. We need them to tell a miniature version of our story without giving our actual story away. The description of your story is done well and I like the quote you put in there.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

What I've read so far seems interesting and the flow of your plot is pretty decent even if it feels a tad rushed sometimes. Line breaks also need to be put in place so readers won't get confused. Grammar needs just a tiny bit of work as well. While your description is good in areas, it still could be made a little better with describing people, places, and emotions a bit more. Example-

If Shikamaru had not been staring intently at the Uzumaki he strangely called his crus-friend! He would have nearly missed the shrewd looked that had flashed in his azure-blue eyes.

The Nara forest was eerily silent as the shadows seemed to wrap themselves against the trees and the grass themselves like two lovers in the throws of passion.

Final verdict on your story

While your story is not something I would read as I rarely read maleXmale stories, I can tell once you tweak things here in and there, you'll become even more popular than me!

Cheers mate!

-Crow