Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.
The Insanity of a Genius By Akuma-Sama
Reviewed by Crowillow
First Impressions
The cover of your book is visually stunning and the artwork is done in an artistic way. I love how it is tying both the title and the plot of your story together without giving it away. I would, however, consider using a different shade of red for the lettering as it is a bit blurred and I needed to strain my eyes a bit to read it.
The title of your book is amazing and it immediately captured my attention. I felt it was unique and simply one of a kind title.
I feel as if your description is done wonderful and gives a little peek into the plot but not too much to the readers. It is simple and I like how smooth the shade your oc seems to toss at Naruto. ^_^'
Your Story's Plot and Structure
The plot is interesting, to say the least, and I think it's cool twisting the plot where no one likes the Oc too much and the fact the oc does not like Naruto right away like others. Your grammar is alright even if it could be a tad better but hey I'm not an English professor, so.
Your line breaks are okay but I think you rush a lot throughout the plot to trying to speed it up to the next destination. Sometimes it felt as if you did not like to write certain chapters due to repetitiveness. I think description could have been done a bit more for both the characters and emotions.
Final verdict on your story
Your story is cool and interesting! I can tell you've put significant hard work into writing this story and to give your OC depth, while I won't read this story due to not reading much OC male's I know that you've written a winner.
Cheers mate!
-Crow
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