Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

They abused us...and they will never use us. By sparkle123tt

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is too bunched together with a lot going on. It also is blurry, grainy and I cannot make out your title. I suggest either remaking the cover yourself or finding a cover shop here on Wattpad.

The title of your story is too long. Remember some stories do have long titles but they capture the reader's attention, an example of this would be-

Are you there God? It's me, Margaret

Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea: A Tour of the Underwater World

I feel as if your description is long and gives key plot points away and that your grammar for it could use some work.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is bland and repetitive to the stories I've come across before.

I think some of your plot was rushed and not given enough time to develop. The chapters were short and the grammar could use work as well while the descriptions need to be used a lot more.

Line-breaks are key things for stories to established when you've changed the scene and tone of the setting, I found none of these within the story.

Final verdict on your story

Spruce it up and maybe add something zesty and unique to it and I'm sure tons of more people will flock to it in no time.

Cheers mate!

-Crow