Before I begin the interview, I want everyone to know I'm not a bully and that anything I criticize is not to offend or hurt the author. We are only trying to help. I hope you enjoy and learn from this review and please remember you asked us to do this.

We All Go A Little Crazy Sometimes By Izaya_shizu-chan

Reviewed by Crowillow

First Impressions

The cover of your book is grainy, blurry, and dark making it hard to read the title. I recommend finding a cover shop to help or maybe remaking the cover yourself.

The title of your book is interesting and it immediately captured my attention even though I do considered a little to long.

I feel as if your description is a little sporadic and gives a bit too much of what the story is about leaving not much to the reader's imagination. The grammar could also use a touch up here and there.

Your Story's Plot and Structure

The plot is interesting, to say the least, and I think it's cool that you added songs to the elements of the plot as I have not seen many of those types of fanfictions. Descriptions of emotions, people, and areas could use a lot more details. An example would be-

Naruto felt hollow inside as if someone had carved his heart out of his chest and squeezed it roughly.

The plot felt rushed and the chapters seemed rather short as well. Line breaks are key things and I had trouble finding them. Grammar is decent but it could still use a little bit of work.

Final verdict on your story

Your story is cool and interesting! I can tell you've put significant hard work into finding songs that needed and fit into the story within the story you are trying to create. While I would not read it as I don't read these type of fics I know you have great potential for others to flock to it in the future if they have not done so now.

I also like to state putting up some warnings if it involves intent of harming the body. Cheers mate!

-Crow