This story has 604 views.  well all I can say is that I really appreciate it and that you should feel free to leave comments and suggestions for the things I could do better at. It will help me improve on what I am doing as well as encourage me to continue.
I am also aware of the fact that I have taken a long time to update and for that I am so sorry I didn't mean to go so long without updating and will try my hardest to not do it again. One again thank you all for read this story.