Everything Wrong with: The Many Faces of Har... er, Adira Potter

Everything Wrong with: The Many Faces of Har... er, Adira Potter

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I've been on a break from Wattpad for a while. *Ding!* But I couldn't stay away from my first love that is Harry Potter fanfiction. Here, for a change, is a story that's not found on Wattpad, but nonetheless has some sins in it.You can read the original here - https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11395728/1/The-Many-Faces-of-Har-er-Adira-Potter - but only on the condition that you DON'T go any leave a comment saying it's bad. If you want to do that, do it here.Now without further ado, the summary:Harry Potter is a wizard, which surprises him. But Harry Potter is also a Multiple, which surprises everyone. But that's not the end of the surprises. Note: Trans!Harry eventually.(Note: This fic was originally called The Many Faces of Harry Potter, but was later changed on some platforms to The Many Faces of Adira Potter when the title character came out as trans. I'm just going to use the title it has on FFnet so that people still know it's a Harry Potter fic.)…

Everything Wrong With: Hogwarts School of Prayer and Miracles

Everything Wrong With: Hogwarts School of Prayer and Miracles

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I've had several requests to sin this monstrosity of a book. Considered by many to be the polar opposite of legendary trollfic My Immortal, only this one is (supposedly) written by a Christian mother in an attempt to sanitize the Potterverse for her kids. So, let's see if this has as many sins in it as the Harry Potter fanfic that was the literal definition of sin.Oh, and I should mention that the BOLD AND UNDERLINED additions to my comments are from Donald J Trump, who took over the management of this account in 2016.Link to original:https://www.wattpad.com/story/60502436-hogwarts-school-of-prayer-and-miraclesAnd without further ado, the author's original description:Do you want your little ones to read books; and they want to read the Harry Potter Books; but you do not want them to turn into witches? Well-this is the story for you! This story has all the adventure of JKR's books; but will not lead your children astray. For concerned mommies everywhere! Blessings! Grace Ann…

Everything Wrong With: My Immortal

Everything Wrong With: My Immortal

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My Immortal: widely regarded as the worst piece of fanfiction ever written, EVER! But we here at StorySins weren't happy with that assumption, and so we decided to test it! Here are the results. No spelling mistake goes unpunished. No assault to the reader's basic human decency goes un-snarked at. So come on and join Harry Potter, Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way, Professor Snap [sic] and all your old favorites for EVERYTHING Wrong With My Immortal.…

Everything Wrong With: Anonymous

Everything Wrong With: Anonymous

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You've waited long enough, and we've put it off long enough. By popular request, here are all the sins we found in Wattpad's biggest celebrity heart-throb fanfic: Anonymous.https://www.wattpad.com/story/22285398Who said twitter couldn't save lives?We did. And we also said a whole bunch more, as we break down this story chapter by chapter to prove that NO story is without sin.New parts posted every week!…

A Cautionary Tale by StorySins

A Cautionary Tale by StorySins

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Inspired from the tradition of cautionary fables from Aesop and others, this story tells of the horrors that arise when an innocent boy succumbs to the temptation of not doing his homework.…

Make lament, not war - the story of an anonymous lieutenant

Make lament, not war - the story of an anonymous lieutenant

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A heart-rending historical drama from the height of the Vietnam War. Will hope triumph over despair? Read on and discover this gripping first-hand account of an officer who not only fought the Viet Cong, but was also fighting his own conscience. (Probably) based on a true(-ish) story. Plz comment and vote.…

Happenings in Holland

Happenings in Holland

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A gripping suspense story, which you'll want to read all in one sitting. Tremble in anticipation as one unsuspecting family goes to Holland, in the heart of the city of Amsterdam, and find something that they do not expect to encounter. Learn about secrets that even the author doesn't know!!(Lol I wrote this years ago, and I can't remember how it ends. I can't be bothered to read it.)…

James vs. the Bullies

James vs. the Bullies

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The tale of one child's struggle against adversity at a new school where he struggles to fit in, James vs. the Bullies tells a tale that is universally relatable to the human condition. As one of StorySins' earlier works, it shows the rudiments of the style that developed into their signature writing style. The first edition of this book was penned in 2006. It is being reproduced here for the first time as a collector's volume with annotations from the original author.(Yeah, as with all 'original' fiction I post here, this is pretty much just some crap I wrote for a school assignment. Sin it to hell and back.)…

Diary of Claudius the Roman

Diary of Claudius the Roman

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Take a journey back in time...Feel like you were actually there in the holy land in the final week in the life of Jesus of Nazareth: the Holy Week, before the man became the legend...Turn the pages of the diary of an ordinary Roman soldier when he witnesses the routine execution of a religious demagogue... or does he?…

The Secret Door: A Tale of Magic and Mystery

The Secret Door: A Tale of Magic and Mystery

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An ancient stone castle with lights in its windows, an even older stone cave through which a river flows, a gold key set with a ruby, and an innocent child who gets lost while walking the family dog. All these things are connected, through the Secret Door...A tale of journeys to far off places, of separation between loves, and of seemingly inescapable situations, The Secret Door is sure to leave readers in tears. Written over two years and presented in three spellbinding chapters. A real page-turner. Read it and be amazed!…

My First Protest

My First Protest

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Originally written in 2003, at the height of public protests against the Iraq War, this story tells the tale from a unique child's-eye perspective, of London's biggest protest march.That means the words you are about to see are at least 12 years old, perhaps even older than some readers alive today. Read it and be transported back in time.It is presented here as unedited, since I'd rather not interfere with the history. Any spelling/grammar errors are part of the historical context. But if you see any mistakes or inconsistencies, please don't hesitate to point them out! Thanks!…