OC reviews And Tips (Closed)

OC reviews And Tips (Closed)

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REQUESTS ARE CLOSED Designed a new character but want to know others thoughts on it? Want to get some tips on how to make a good character or to be pointed in the right direction? Well, you're in the right place! I'm here to check your guys' OCS and see what I think. Don't worry, I'm not going out of my way to be brutally honest and mean just because I can because honestly, that's just painful. I will be as honest as I possibly can without tearing your character to shreds and giving ways you can improve.I will review characters from existing universes as well, there's a list on the first page of fan bases I'm apart of. This is all for fun and you don't have to follow my critiques, if you think I'm wrong then that's fine, nothing here is meant to cause offence and I am simply here to help you all improve.…

Character and Writing Tips

Character and Writing Tips

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Yo! You looking for some advice and pointers in the right direction for your characters and universe? Then you're in the right place!I'm here to give advice on general worldbuilding and what to do and what not to do with characters and relationships.If you want me to tackle something, then you can request since there's so much to cover with character writing that it's hard to get to everything people want.…

Lucky Girl (BNHA OC Fanfic)

Lucky Girl (BNHA OC Fanfic)

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THIS STORY IS DISCONTINUED(Please stop reading this damn book and read one of my original pieces, yall are killing me.)Kiriko Hara has always been alone, maybe not physically, but emotionally. Especially after an incident a couple of years back that left her to fend for herself and her five year old sister, Aiko.For the past year and a half the girls have been on the run from villains trying to use Aiko's quirk for themselves. Luckily for them, a series of events lands them face to face with an infamous prohero and part time teacher at U.A. who wants to show the world that the entrance exam is unfair.Kiriko agrees to help and finds herself getting caught up in the antics of class 1A, and getting tangled up in a web of all new emotions along the way, especially regarding one of the most unattainable boys in the year.She quickly finds herself struggling with her definition of a hero and what it really means after tragedy strikes, realising that she has to find herself first. *Note: my character's (kinda)shipped with Todoroki in this, don't worry though, the plot is mostly about her, that's just part of it. I don't own the plot of BNHA, the fanart or the characters except my ocs. If ya really wanna you can put yourself in place of my character. Just don't claim it. *…

Petrichor // Admin Book \\

Petrichor // Admin Book \\

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°Petrichor°nouna pleasant smell that frequently accompanies the first rain after a long period of warm, dry weather.It's me, your Author, this book will be full of tags, random notes and a place to ask about me.…