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A demon raven who goes by the name of Ray finds himself in the shoes of being an overlord. Recently, he's been gathering plenty of experience and now, his biggest challenge awaits: the Hazbin Hotel. As he stays there, he will go through different experiences as he gains more experience necessary in reaching the goal of being redeemed. He'll join alongside many sinners and overlords in the brewing rebellion against Heaven.Meanwhile, he will have to deal with playing both sides, on the thin line between Heaven and Hell. But he has to make that decision if he's gonna be redeemed, so he finds himself in an internal struggle. So now, he asks himself...Who is he really fighting for in this?===This story is a retelling of the Hazbin Hotel series, with a self-insert of one of my characters. This story switches between first and third person.This is the Wattpad version that is exactly the same as the original version on A03 under the same name, just reformatted for this site.It's best read alongside the pilot episode and the series for context, if you hadn't watched Hazbin Hotel. NOTE THAT SOME PARTS ARE INTENDED FOR 18+ READERS, READ AT YOUR DISCRETION.…

thepickman236

[PLEASE NOTE THAT THE ORIGINAL STORY IS HERE: https://www.wattpad.com/story/174782656-shadowside-hidden-secrets ]-----Proofread into Canadian English by me, original story and cover art by @artismusic.If you would like to know which chapters are marked as NSFW, find the [!] tag at the beginning of the chapter.-----Hello, everyone! I figured that because of the backlash Rachel was receiving on FanFiction, I decided to exclusively post my Canadian English version of the story. If you had been following me on my Tumblr account, you would have noticed a OneDrive link to a Word document I've been using recently. This was the result of such work.This 15-chapter story preserves most of the original story mentioned above, but because of the grammar mistakes that are prevalent in the original version, this version of the story has been proofread/corrected by me personally. Hopefully, this should be more legible to read for those who can't read the original story properly.Rachel, you've done yourself something that's gotten over 30k words. In my opinion, you should try to participate in NaNoWriMo yourself.-Just as an update, this story might contain some unseen errors. Also, don't worry if the proofread version (aka. this story) took a while to follow the original story. When I saw the new chapters, I did my best to catch up. So, sorry for the delays!------THIS STORY IS RATED MATURE, BECAUSE SOME OF THE CHAPTERS IN THE STORY MAY BE CLASSIFIED AS EXPLICIT. BY READING THIS STORY, YOU AGREE THAT YOU ARE OLD ENOUGH TO READ THIS STORY. READER'S DISCRETION IS ADVISED.…