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𝟝. Debbie's Vengeance by Nablai 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 17/20

It's a mix of fantasy and teen fic. It's a quite dark storyline. You get curious, intrigued and it makes you feel like you are watching a movie, it's so fluid. It will keep you engaged for sure.

Concept 9/10

Fresh concept but it has a pinch of cliché due to the Rags to Riches storyline, but all that apart it still manages to pull it off nicely with all the interesting elements- Fantasy and Mystery.

Cover 9/10

Don't get me started on this. It's dark and gorgeous. So gothic and wicked.

The book description 9/10

It's simple and promising. Mysterious in a way. People are bound to get curious just through the description.

Technicalities 36/50

The grammar needs some focus. As I kept reading the book further, I kept finding grammatical errors, some punctuation mistakes, and also spelling mistakes. The description is good. I like the writing style. The character development is slow and there is some confusion with the past and the present. I feel the first five chapters are more refined than the last five. This needs some editing. I think the storyline is great. All the Best!

Total 80/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 17/20

At first, I wasn't that thrilled to complete reading it. But now, Please, Update!! I liked the genre mix, teen fic, thriller, and fantasy.

Concept 8/10

As the author said, it is a mix of prompts, So it isn't exactly something new. It has the cliche 'rich people', who control everything. But other than that, It is a really great story. Definitely something new, for me at least.

Cover 8/10

When you look at the cover, you imagine a horror book. It is really dark, which fits the story perfectly. It is eye-catching, before I read it, I asked myself 'what is that thing on her back? I need to read this book.'.

The book description 5/10

It is interesting in a way that makes you want to read the book to find out what is going to happen. But honestly, it made me lost, and I still don't understand some parts of it. Maybe I will when I continue reading.

Technicalities 35/50

The story needs some heavy editing, there are lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. The story is mostly written in the third person, but there are some parts where the point of view changed (by mistake, I guess) to the point of view of the main character. Another point, you can't tell apart when it is the story events, or the MC talking to herself. I would recommend trying to make it more visible than they are thoughts. The plotline is unpredictable, and it has lots of ideas that might need ordering. The characters need more development and stability, their personality changes from one chapter to another.

Total 73/100

Total from both judges 153/200

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𝟜. Songs of the Sky by earlfangs 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 17/20

The story has an overall simple pace. I'll start with the prologue, it's a bit long but has a mysterious setting, it raises curiosity. The story was not rushed. It's easy to imagine the surroundings as the description is good. It can keep you engaged.

Concept 7/10

It's a bit cliché but it pulls off the storyline. Although a bit more development could have been there.

Cover 8/10

It's simple and nice.

The book description 8/10

The description is clipped with no extra information. So for me, that's a plus point. You get a straightforward idea

Technicalities 42/50

The author has a very distinct writing style. The characters are very well developed and it's easy to understand each one of them because of how different they are. The grammar and punctuation on the other hand need some work. I found a few spelling mistakes too. But overall, I like the story. It's enjoyable and fresh.

Total 82/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 19/20

A good hook was a great start, the prologue was amazing and full of suspense. I read the whole book and I am very not patiently waiting for season two.

Concept 8/10

It was refreshing, cliche, and amazing. IT is very interesting in a way that leaves you sitting at the end of your seat.

Cover 8/10

The cover is really beautiful and shiny. But I didn't like it that much, it doesn't show the real value of the story.

The book description 7/10

Well written, full of suspense. You wouldn't understand it unless you read the book. It didn't pull me in, though.

Technicalities 45/50

Well organized, you can tell that the author had a clear view of how they wanted the story to go. The characters have their basic personalities, each one is different from the other, yet most of them developed positively throughout the story. The author has a very unique writing style. The dialogue can be read easily. For spelling and grammar mistakes, there are some punctuation mistakes here and there, but I didn't come across any spelling mistakes.

Total 87/100

Total from both judges 169/200

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𝟛. Because of Haven Beach by GemmaMari10 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 18/20

The story seems so realistic and the pace is awesome. It felt like I was going through a memoir or something because I could relate to it at some points. Absolutely engaging.

Concept 8/10

A little bit cliché but definitely manages to pull it off.

Cover 6/10

The cover is nice but I feel it's a bit dull.

The book description 9/10

Love the description. You give away some things but also not all of them. It's beautifully crafted.

Technicalities 45/50

The grammar is good, not many mistakes with the punctuation either. The description might need a little bit of work but on the contrary, it's easy to imagine the portrayal of the characters. I like the character development of Charlotte, she is slowly adapting to Haven Beach and that's nice after whatever happened to her in Chicago. Overall, I like the story very much.

Total 86/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 19/20

Such an amazing story, from the start. It is a really great story, Captured me from the beginning. I have plans to complete it.

Concept 6/10

Really cliche, highschool, and crushes. But it has its own taste and uniqueness.

Cover 9/10

The cover is a perfect match for the book, well designed, and eye-catching. Makes you want to read the book.

The book description 8/10

An amazing start, a nice scene. It made me get thrilled to open the book and read it.

Technicalities 45/50

So far, I haven't come across any spelling or grammar mistakes. It is a well written story. The dialogues are well structured, and neat. The characters are well developed, and you can see the change in character as the story goes on. My only problem is the +18 scene that was there, at the start of the book. A warning should've been placed at the start of that chapter or scene. Other than that, the story is really amazing, and I am looking forward to completing it.

Total 87/100

Total from both judges 173/200

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𝟚. Cupid's Broken Arrows by Vamprixussa 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 18/20

It's interesting. It's very interesting. I found myself laughing a lot. It's a fun read, quite entertaining, and hilarious. Very much relatable, the protagonist. Kept me engaged.

Concept 8/10

A little bit cliché but fresh in its own way. The humor is on point.

Cover 8/10

The cover is very pretty. I see that you have changed it, it's cute but honestly, the old one was more pretty.

The book description 9/10

The description is accurate. It's a bit funny and would make you curious too. I definitely wanted to read further, and it seemed so poetic too.

Technicalities 44/50

The dialogues are so funny. You really have a good sense of self-talk as well as the dialogues that's for sure. The grammar and punctuation were alright. I found the character development is slow as not a lot has happened till the 10th chapter. Spelling mistakes were few. The story is funny, relatable and you can have a good laugh while reading this one.

Total 87/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 18/20

Very humorous, made me laugh a lot. I am definitely going to complete reading the book.

Concept 8/10

Cliche, but fabulous. It is special because a lot of people will relate to it. I, myself, relate to the humor and the self-talking in it.

Cover 9/10

Very pretty and fits the book. Bright, which makes it more eye-catching.

The book description 8/10

Very funny, and makes you want to read the book. It fits the book perfectly.

Technicalities 45/50

I liked the dialogue style, yet it is mostly conversations between the protagonist and her inner voice. The protagonist is well written and is very relatable. The writing style is amazing. I didn't really stumble upon any grammar or spelling mistakes.

Total 88/100

Total from both judges 175/200

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𝟙. Komoreby by SuVida777 

Judge WimpieKid 

Engagement 19/20

One word- Marvellous. I absolutely got invested right from the description. It's a whole mix of mystery, science, and teen fic. It's a good piece of writing. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Keep me engaged right from the start.

Concept 10/10

At first glance, you might think it's the typical cliché Wattpad novel, but when you start reading you are bound to get addicted. It's so fresh and amazing!

Cover 10/10

Very artistic. It captures the essence of the story so well. I love the details. It's so beautiful and eye-catching.

The book description 10/10

The title of the book itself is so unique. Need I say more, one of the best books on Wattpad, for me at least. The description is enough to pull you right in.

Technicalities 48/50

Long paragraphs, yet no spelling mistakes. There is an aesthetic beauty to this writing style. Very few grammatical errors, they can be edited easily. The characters were all so realistic. Go through the story and you will find all those emotions that any teenager might have experienced at some point. This story has so much potential. I loved it. I am writing the same review again because honestly, nothing has changed. The book only gets better with each chapter. I am definitely going to finish this book that's for sure.

Total 97/100

Judge shadoocoffee25 

Engagement 18/20

An amazing story with a great plot. It has a great hook and makes you want to read the whole book. I want to continue reading it.

Concept 9/10

It is a new idea, similar to 'Alice in wonderland'. I liked the idea of time and dimension traveling in the book, it hooked me even more.

Cover 10/10

The cover fits the story perfectly, as it is a drawing of the main character. Pretty, creative, and artsy.

The book description 10/10

Well described, very little information, but makes you want to read the story.

Technicalities 45/50

The story is well organized, the writer planned it perfectly. I didn't find any mistakes. The dialogues are really great, you understand everything. The book is a little complicated though. The characters are well built. My only point is that the chapters are longer than my life.

Total 92/100

Total from both judges 189/200

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