Okay so I usually don't promote my stuff that much but I kinda need help for my story. And since all of you are awesome people I thought you guys might want to take 10 minute of your life to help a girl out.

Okay so basically I'm writing a story and it's called 'Five| The Bad Boys and Me.' It's not as cliche as it sounds I promise. It's pretty much the opposite.

This is the story description and trailer

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XCwUnpHHkpA

Now this is the point where I need your guys help, which of the two beginnings would you read and countinue reading?

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Note that this is just the beginning of both chapters, not the full chapter. And yes I do realize there is a few grammar issues but I will fix them.

Just comment down 1 or 2 for which one you like better. 

Thank you to the people who actually read this, it means a lot to me.

Also if you are wondering where this is posted it's posted on my other account Shona624

It would mean the world to me if you can help me :)