Priceless by: Starelf555
Requested by: Starelf555

I actually enjoyed the book despite thinking that I wouldn't enjoy this book before reading it since I didn't really know what I was getting into at first.

I liked your book cover. It's really pretty and I think it fits the overall theme of the story pretty well.

I also like the pacing of the story, good job on that as well.

I actually liked the characters and the fact that the main character is overweight and not some pretty and skinny girl who sometimes in stories, knows she's hot or compares her beauty to other people. Even though Billy knows she's overweight and has a terrible family situation in the beginning of the story, she makes the best of it and has flaws like another person out there and just wants to fit in and be like everyone else her age.

Ashley or Ash as I refer him as, is the complete opposite but still has flaws that make him human as he deals with the fact, he may not want the rock star life as he might have hoped he wanted and begins to realize that sometimes it's the things and people, we take for grant or overlooked things/people as it were that we need in life rather than the normal in which most characters tend to go for in stories.

Plus I didn't see any grammar errors in your book.

Overall, it's a good story and would recommend it to anyone who loves reading books like it.

Thanks for letting me review your book.

-Traveler_lilly