Note : SHIVI FS ON COUPLE COMPITITION TRACK..

LOVING THE IMPERFECTIONIST, PART-4

LAST PART

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Badi diwali celebration 🎉🥳..

Shaam ke 6 baje

Shiva came down getting all ready in kurta pajama looking dashing and handsome as always but our queen .........haan haan apna sahi samjha wahi humari pyari si muskan se sabko khush kar dena wali raavi was still in the room getting ready like a real queen was .

Aur ho bhi kyun na bhai aaj toh use uski khushiya jo milna wali hain .

Shiva's outfit

(Ignore the girl)

He came in the middle of the aangan and saw everyone was doing their works assigned by suman . He smiled watching suman instructing everyone to do the work properly and early before every one comes .

He then with hopeful eyes went towards suman and took her blessings and then sat in his knees and asked her ...

Shiva : maa aaj toh diwali hai burai per sachai ki jeet ka din hai na toh aaj toh gussa thuk de . Tujha sach pata chal jayega per aaj khushi se bhar le apni bahon main apna Bahu beta ko . Kya bhut zada maang raha hun main ?

Suman : tu mera khoon hai tuja em baar ko maaf kar bhi dun aur bhar lun apni bahoon main per jo us markundi ne kiya hai na usse main kabhi maaf nhi kar paungi . Chal ab mujha jana de nahi bolungi teri char din ki biwi ko kuch bas khush chal ab hat mera rasta sa dekhun mandir ki taiyari hui ki nhi .

Here shiva was standing hopelessly and was about to say something again but before that suman went wheeling her wheel chair in mandir .

Then he went to dhara who was arranging the sweets on the centre table .

Shiva : happy diwali bhabhi ..

Dhara's outfit

Dhara : happy diwali shiva ... Vese shiva raavi kahan hai dikh nahi Rahi ? She asked .

Shiva : bhabhi voh ready ho rahi hai aati hi hogi . Vese bhabhi Jalebi aur gujiya bhut tasty 😋🤤 bani hai aur yeh kaju katli oho ho hoo maza aa gaya kha ke .. sab kuch ek number bana hai ..

Maine na aaj se pehle itni swadist methai nhi khai hai . Jisne bhi banai hai na uska haathon main toh haatho hai jaado .

Main kya keh raha hun na jisne bhi yeh sab banaya hain na ek baar bata do main uska hath chummna chahta hun kyuki tareef kam padh rahi hai iske liya toh ufff ..

shiva said all of it in a go with continuous praises for the sweet maker .

Dhara laughed at his ploy. He looked at her all confused this time . Before shiva could ask rishita came all decked up in a blue saree looking at dhara laughed holding her stomach.

Rishita's outfit

Rishita : kya hua bhabhi aap has kyun rahe ho ?

Dhara : kuch nhi isi se puch le kya hua hai ..

Rishita took one of the sweets from the counter and looked at shiva ..

Rishita : kya hua shiva yeh itna kyun has rahi hai tuna kya koi jone mara ?

Shiva : arey nahi bhabhi muja bhi nhi pata yeh kyun has rahin hain itna maine koi joke nhi mara .

Voh toh main inse puch raha tha ki yeh mithai kisna banai hai bhut tasty hai aur yeh hasne lagi bas muja khud nhi samajh aa raha Inka hasna ka karan .. ab aap hi batao na kisne banai hai yeh mithai ?

She nodded and said ..

Rishita : yehhhh..... yeh toh raavi ne banaya hai sab bhabhi ne nhi . Toh tu bhabhi se nhi raavi se jaake in mithaiyon ki tareef kar . She giggled looking at his expression.

Shiva was in shock kyaaaaaaaaa chipkali ko yeh mithai bhi banani aati hai voh bhi itni tasty 😋 muja toh kabhi bataya nhi isna .

Haan vese paki dinasaur hai na isliya sab khud bana ke khati hogi peecha se per mujhse chupa ker pach bhi jata hai isko bhut kharab hai yeh ladki anyway koi ni meri hi hai jaisi bhi hai .

Haye raam yeh ek din meri jaan leke manegi . He thought to himself.

Then coming out of shock he looked at dhara and she nodded with a wide smile . Shiva immediately got embarrassed 😳 remembering his previous statement of kissing hands .

Shiva : ahhh bhabhi aap dono baatein Karo sab agar ho gaya hai toh voh jhoola per baith jao na thak gaye hoga . Aur main ... Main zara aata hun dekh ke baki sab arrangements. He escaped from there saving himself from teasing treats .

Both the ladies smiled at him looking at his retreating figure.

Shiva walked towards dev and krish as he saw them put lights on the pillars while Gautam was instructing them .

Dev's outfit

Gaumbi's outfit

Krish's outfit

Shiva : oye aap teeno abhi tak decoration main hi laga hua ho . Maine aur dev ne karwa toh di thi sari decoration khud khade hoke . Phir yeh sab kyun ? He asked

Gaumbi: arey shiva muja pata hai per kya hai na maine abhi dekha ki kuch pillars ki aur entrance ki lights aur phoolon ki ladiyan nikal rahi hai toh wahi sab fix kar rahe hain . Sara ho gaye hai bas is pillar ki reh gai hai voh yeh laga raha hai.

Shiva nodded.

Dev : vese shiva tu kya kar Raha hai yahan . Dekh raha hun tu kab se idhar udhar Khali hath mandra raha hai . Teri biwi ji Kahan hai bhai dikh hi nhi rahi kahin ? He teased him .

Shiva rolled his eyes watching him teasing with a teasing smile playing on his lips .

Krish : haan haan bata bata Kahan hai meri pyari bhabhi yaaaa bhabhi ne tuja room se bhar kar diya jaisa dhara bhabhi ne kiya tha gaumbi ko .

warna tu kahan bhar mandrana walon main se hai jab biwi ho pass toh hainaa haina ... He tried to be most serious person but failed as his mischief was caught.

Shiva glared at krush while dev abd gaumbi chuckle at the duo 🤭.

Shiva : oye pidi chup kar zada nhi bol raha tu aaj kal . Esa vesa kuch nhi hai aur vese bhi meri biwi dhara bhabhi kaisi nhi hai jo mujha kamra se bhar nikal degi. Aur sun na kabhi esa hua hai na kabhi hoga samjha ya samjhaun he said showing him his fist 👊.

While dev and gaumbi were still passing him a teasing smile . He looked at them and they stopped.

Scene changes .....

At maami's home

Prafulla saw Anita going somewhere in a hurry and she followed her.

when she reaches she finds it to be Seth mansion.

she went inside behind her .

Inside Seth mansion

There she saw disha and Anita talked to kamini so while hiding she decided to record everything for proof.

Kamini : haan batao kya kya kiya aur kya reh gaya ? She asked in authoritative voice .

Disha : jai somnath 🙏 kamini ji jo apne kaha tha maine bilkul vese hi Kiya hai sab aur vese hi aage bhi karti rahungi . Abhi tak toh plan bilkul sahi jaa raha hai.

Kamini : aur suman .......

Disha : arey kalyani ji aap uss budhiya ki tension mat lo voh toh mujh per aankh band ker ke vishwas karti hai.

Apna Bahu aur beton ki bhi nhi sunti Jab meri baat aati hai aur toh aur raavi ko bhi dutkarti hai toh bas uska kaam tamam karne main asani hogi mujha aur Anita ka bhi kaam asan ho jayega aur Gautam iska hoga aur dhara out .

Acha ek aur baat kehni thi apse voh pandya niwas aur pandya store ke kagaz mera pass hai aur unke pass jitni bhi property thi voh bhi mera hath lag gai hai per ek aur baat hai jo muja haal hi main pata lagi hai .

Suman ke pass haveli aur uske aas pass ke zamane bhi uske naam hai abhi bhi usne abhi apna bachon ke naam nhi kiya hai. Jo property mili hai voh chaaron bhaiyon ko mili hai aur pandya niwas suman ke naam hai aur store pura pariwar ke naam .

Kamini: maine suna hai zameen aur haveli shiva ke naam hone wali hai aur kisi ko koi aitraz nhi hai aur shiva ko yeh baat nhi pata hai voh use suprise dene wale hai uske janamdin per .

Disha : koi baat nhi main aaj kal main hi yeh wali property bhi le lungi aur phasegi voh dhara aur raavi and started laughing like a maniac .

while laughing she said phir suman raavi aur dhara ko Dhaka maar ke ghar se bhar nikal degi . Phir main aur Anita suman ka dil main jagah banayenga Daya se emotional drama se toh voh muja toh shiva ki biwi bana hi Rahi hai sath hi voh Anita ki Gautam ki biwi banana ko razi ho jayegi aur Gautam bhi yeh baat maan hi lega wakt ke sath .

With the plan all three laughed as if they win already but they didn't know that maami the real nagin in Shiva's language will expose them soon any how .

All was recorded by mami effortlessly.

Anita : per dhara ka bacha jo Gautam aur uski nishani hai uska kya ?

Disha : maar dungi use main aur phir na bachega bacha na dhara ka pyar aur ilzaam lagaungi raavi per . Phir toh sab usse nafrat karenge aur voh gawar shiva bhi bhut pyar umad raha hai na uske liya uska dil main dekhti hun aaj kaisa pyar rehta hai dil main sabke .

After talking devilish they left so does maami but when she was about to reach pandya niwas she got late in reaching due to some work .

Scene changes.....

Pandya NIWAS

Shiva's gaze fell on families and their friends were coming inside with big smiles .

Shiva : oye pidi utar ja sidi se ab warna esa girega na ki chot aayegi . He showed him his concern .

The three were confused what he is saying .

Krish : main kyun girna laga bhai . I know how to balance man main toh itna expert hun ki ek tang per bhi balance kar lun . Dekh dekh . He said standing on his one leg on ladder .

Shiva : oh acha esi baat hai toh udhar dekh toh zara .

He said pointing at one of the college friend of krish who was coming with other friends and family members.

Krish looked at the direction of Meera (a clg friend of his ) that's it he lost his balance and he fell from the ladder on his back . Then dev and gaumbi helped him get up .

Shiva laughed at him loudly 🤣🤣...

Krish stood up properly correcting is clothes.

Krish: oh maa mar gaya . He exclaimed... Shiva chuckled at his state . While the guests came inside .

Nikhil ( Shiva's frnd ): hey bro happy diwali . Oye isse kya hua esa kyun khada hai ? He asked him reaching him .

Shiva : hey nikhil happy diwali. Arey kuch nhi voh bas sidhi se gir gaya .

Meera laughed at krish's hakat 🤭🤭 keeping her hand on her lips .

Rakhi (2 frnd) : arey shiva yeh sab chod na yrr raavi kahan hai . Aaj shaam ki raunak toh wahi hai .

She asked looking here and there but didn't find anywhere .

Shiva : voh taiyaar ho rahi hai bas aati hi hogi .. sab ander chalte hai na yahan kyun khade ho sab chalo . he said looking at his wrist watch he was wearing given by raavi as his diwali gift .

Meera : wowwww so beautiful rangoli bhaiya . vese yeh rangoli bhut bhut sunder bani hai kisne banai ? Rishita bhabhi ne ?

In aangan

In mandir

Shiva : arey nahi unhone bas thodi si hi help ki thi voh toh maine aur raavi ke mil ker banai hai . Thanks for the compliment Meera 😊.

Meera : arey dekho yeh aa gai humari raavi di .... Raavi di ki baat ki aur voh aa gai . Bilkul ek sunder si pari ban ker uff she is so pretty bhaiya .

She said with a big smile on her face . She pointed at the stairs and all looked at her in awwww .

Raavi's outfit

She descended down the stairs all smiling looking so beautiful and gorgeous in heavenly beautiful red lehnga matching with Shiva's kurta .

When shiva saw her he was all lost in her beauty as she was not looking less than any apsara for him that decended down from heaven only for him .

Aankhon Ko Door Se Hi
Usne Chhua Hai Re
Mehsoos Humko Bhi Yeh
Jabse Hua Hai Re

Kurban Uspe Apna
Har Pal Hua Hai Re
Woh Hi Hai Wajah
Woh Hi Hai Jagah
Woh Hi Jaadoo

Raavi looked at shiva and smiled widely but the blush was creeping from her neck making her face go red to scarlet in no time realising he is so lost in her without a blink ...

Ke Mere Dil Ne Kaha Mujhse
Phisal Jaa Tu
Ke Mere Dil Ne Kaha Mujhse
Phisal Ja Tu

Ke Meri Jaan Ne Kaha Mujhse
Nikal Jaa Tu

Shiva looked at hair strands that were falling on her face which he removed coming near her still lost in her . Unknown to the surrounding he tucked them behind her ear as they were blocking his view.

Ho Ab Kya Sahi Na Jaanu
Na Galat Jaanu Re
Woh Toh Badhta Hi Jaaye
Ho Jaise Chadhta Ho Bukhar

Oh Apna Paraya Ab To
Main Na Pehchanu Re
Ye Hai Aise Bahaar Jo
Karde Re Beda Paar

The world seems to be long forgotten for him it was her only present with him there while the world disappeared in a click . But our heroine was wide awake in the world full of people around her giving them a teasing smile while she looked here and there to avoid their gazes at them in particular.

Gehraiyon Mein Jaise
Jaane Laga Hai Wo
Najdeekiyon Mein Waise
Aane Laga Hai Wo

She tried to make him come out of his lala land but he was so engrossed in her that he didn't pay any heed to her actions which was making her blush even more .

Chhune Ki Deri Hai Ji
Hum Bhi Taiyar Hain
Wo Bahana Wo Thikana
Wo Hi Harsoooo

Leanig forward he kissed her cheeks and then her forehead gently and lovingly making her eyes go wide like a saucer.

All started hooting them and hearing the hooting sounds coming from his surroundings he immediately came out of his lala land and get back to his senses . He looked at everyone embarrassingly with a shy smile creep with a little blush on his cheeks .

Mere Dil Ne Kaha Mujhse
Phisal Jaa Tu
Mere Dil Ne Kaha Mujhse
Phisal Jaa Tu

He looked at raavi with love in his eyes who was still blushing like a newly weded girl .

Shiva : itna sunder dikhna ki kya zarurat thi yrr chipkali dekh na sab kaisa tujha hi dekh raha hai . Agar nazar lag gai toh aur uper se mera bhi hosh uda Diya tuna aaj bhi tu bilkul wahi chipkaliyon ki beauty queen lag rahi 😘😘 . Is khubsurat si pari ko dekhna ke aur usme kho jaane ke chakar main ab sab hume tease karenga .

He wispered in her ear hiding his enchanted smile .

Her eyes and mouth go wide watching openly complimenting and flirting with her at the same time that to in front of everyone.

She playfully glared at shiva with the blush still on her cheeks which was making her look cute . Watching her glaring him he immediately kept his mouth shut up.

Watching everyone is present there except suman, maami , Anita and disha .

Suman was in mandir already and Anita and maami wasn't arrived yet while they don't care if disha came or not .

Raavi spoke diverting everyone's attention from their romance.

Raavi : arey guys aap sab yaha kyun khade ho chalo chalo sab Pooja ke liya mandir chalo . Pooja ka time ho gaya hai agar late hua toh maa dantengi aur aaj toh tyohaar hai tyohaar ke din Pooja late nhi honi chahiye na .

All nodded in agreement and headed towards mandir built in their home only .

There they saw suman and disha already sitting with kanta kaki talking to suman about something.

They didn't got to know when she came home and went to suman with kanta kaki but they don't care about it.

Family members made a face of dislike but didn't say anything just ignored her like she is not present there at all .

Suman : aa gaye sab chalo ab Pooja shuru karo . Chalo gaumbi - dhara pehle tum karo , phir dev - rishita aur phir shiva tu aur disha karna theek che .

Shiva : maa maami nhi aai abhi tak pata nhi kaha reh gai hai phone bhi nhi utha Rahi . Thodi der wait karein kya unki ?

Suman : nahi nahi koi zarurat nhi hai us kangdi ki wait karna ki chup chap sab apna apna time per Pooja karna usne aana hoga toh aa jayegi .

Then he didn't argue with suman and stood behind dev and rishita in a que .

When Pooja started he got a call from one of the vendors from Mandi.

Shiva main abhi aaya aap log continue Karo . And behind him disha too went indicated by kamini .

Vendor: hello shiva bhaiya jai somnath. Happy Diwali apko aur apke pariwar ko .

Shiva : jai somnath bhargav ji . Happy diwali apko bhi . Baataiya kaisa phone kiya .

Bhargav: shiva bhaiya maaf karna humko voh ka hai na ki hum apna pariwar ke sath bhar gaav jaa rahe hai kal aur mera helper bhi nhi hai in dino toh main aaj hi aapka maal apna beta ke hath bhijwa raha hun voh dukaan pahunchne wala hoga . Hum janta hai aaj ke din apka nikal kitna mushkil hai per hum bhi ka kare majboori ho gai hai aap chale jaiya plej .

Shiva : arey bhargav ji koi baat nhi apki majboori hai isliya bhej rahe hai na bas sorry bolna ki zarurat nhi hai main abhi aata hun apna beta ko boliya voh mera dukaan ke bhar wait kare .

Bhargav: ji bhaiya ji shukriya tumhara main abhi bol deta hun usee . Jai somnath.

Shiva : hai somnath.

Shiva came back and told the same to everyone.

Suman : shiva ruk pehle Pooja kar phir jaa bina Pooja ke jana achi baat nhi hai tayohar ke din . Chal disha aur tum karo Pooja uske baad main nhi rokungi .

Shiva : maa lekin ..

Suman : lekin vekin kuch nhi Pooja kar aur jaa jahan Jana hai .

Then shiva got an idea he went to raavi took her hand and went to do Pooja .

Suman who was about to say something shiva said immediately....

Shiva : apna Pooja ke liya bola main kar Raha hun kiske sath karni hai yeh main decide karunga . Muja raavi ke sath karni thi toh kar raha hun .

Then with honesty he prayed to God and making raavi eat some Prasad with bid own hands and then he kissed her forehead and said ....

Shiva : raavi main zara dukaan hoke aata hun tu apna dhayan rakhna okay . Kuch bhi ho muja call kar diyo theek hain . Main phata phat kaam niptake aata hun tera pass . He said holding her hand and then kissed them then kissed her forehead again . He went towards her ear and said I love you 😘❣️take care love 💖.

Then shiva went and some people got involved in cracking crackers, some were eating , some were engaged in talking etc .

Here when disha came and saw everyone emerged in their own works and raavi and dhara were standing under chandelier and were laughing at something.

When she saw that all were busy and shiva was also not there . He was out for some work . So she got her line cleared and went upstairs where the rope was tied and with a sharp knife she cutted it.

As raavi was about to go to see the arrangement in the kitchen for dinner just at the nik time she saw a rope was cut and was dangling down she gasped loudly and before the chandelier could break over them raavi pushed dhara and in haste she fell on her baby bump with a thud while raavi didn't get anytime to run from there and chandelier fell on her back .

As soon as chandelier broke loudly everyone's attention shifted towards them and shouted .........

Everyone: raaaaaaaaaaaaaaviiiiiiiiiiiiiii , dharaaaaaaaaaaaaa ...

At the same time shiva too came home all happy but his demeanor changed as soon as he saw raavi laying lifeless under the chandelier with blood ozing out from her body profusely and the particles of glass were perced in her soft milky white skin making it look horrible while he saw dhara's water bag broke and was struggling to stay awake .

Shiva's breath hitched watching all this and he immediately ran towards raavi and took off the chandelier over her body with krish and Dev's help who were already Doing it before his run to them .

Hawaaon mein bahenge
Ghataon mein rahenge
Tu barkha meri
Main tera baadal piya

Jo tere na huve toh
Kisi ke na rahenge
Deewani tu meri
Main tera paagal piya

Shiva took raavi in his embrace patted her cheeks and said ...

Shiva : raaviiiiiiiii , uth raavi please uth na dekh mazak mat kar mera sath . Muja pata hai tu mera sath prank kar rahi hai dekh agar tu nahi uthi na toh main tu.. tujhsa baat hi nahi karunga .... Raaaaaaaaaaaaaaviiiiiiiiiiiiiii main tera bina nhi jee paunga raavi main mar jaunga tera bina chipkali please uth jaa na mera liya humara pyar ke liya uth ja please 🥺😭 and started crying vigorously hugging her near to his heart when he detected her pulse 💗 working very slow .

Hazaaron mein kisi ko taqdeer aisi
Mili hai ik Ranjha aur Heer jaisi

Na jaane ye zamaana
Kyun chaahe re mitaana
Kalank nahi ishq hai kaajal piya
Kalank nahi ishq hai kaajal piya
Piya, piya, piya re...
Piya re, piya re...
Piya re, piya re, piya re, piya re...

Then he came into senses when dev jerked him off and then he picked her up in his arms and went to hospital with in 10 minutes they all reached hospital.

Duniya ki nazron mein ye rog hai
Ho jinko woh jaane ye jog hai
Ik tarfa shayad ho dil ka bharam
Do tarfa hai toh ye sanjog hai

Layi re humein zindgani ki kahaani
Kaise mod pe
Huve re khud se paraaye
Hum kisi se naina jod ke

Shiva shouted : doctor doctor jaldi aaiya please dekhiye meri wife aur bhabhi ko please.. he said while crying .

Nurse : oh no ... Please aap inhe strecher per litaiya main doctor ko bulati hun .

Soon two doctors came and with the help of nurses and ward boys they took them in OT.

Doctor: Inka khoon bhut bheh gaya hai jaldi chalo . Aap sahi wakt per aaya hai warna inki jaan bhi jaa sakti thi .

Shiva : ply kaisa bhi kar ke meri wife aur bhabhi ki jaan bacha lijiye please main aapke aage hath 🙏 jodta hun .

Doctor: please mr pandya iski zarurat nahi hai yeh humara kaam hai hum puri koshish karenga unhe bachane ki .

Hazaaron mein kisi ko taqdeer aisi
Mili hai ik Ranjha aur Heer jaisi

Na jaane ye zamaana
Kyun chaahe re mitaana
Kalank nahi ishq hai kaajal piya
Kalank nahi ishq hai kaajal piya

Here shiva gaumbi and other family members were broken 💔😭 completely and they were remembering their happy moments sad moments they spent with each other and with their wives respectively.

Shiva's clothes and neck hands were all red with blood but he did care about it he was emerged in Raavi's thoughts and were praying to God to save her as he can't live without her for a second now .

Just then out of nowhere disha came acting and asked like she is very concerned about raavi and dhara .

Disha : hi shiva raavi aur dhara bhabhi kaisi Hain? unhe hosh aa gaya kya ? Mujha toh samajh hi nhi aa raha yeh sab hua kaisa voh jhoomar gira toh gira kaisa .

Sara arrangements toh tum aur raavi aur dhara bhabhi dekh rahe the na toh yeh kisi ke notice kyun nhi aaya ki jhoomar ki rope Kati hui hai . I just can't believe it hum sab ke hote hua bhi itna bada accident ho gaya ghar per .

Shiva don't worry sab theek hoga doctor ne kya bola hai ? Kuch toh bolo shiva mujha bhut dar lag raha hai kahin unch neech toh......

Shiva : bas disha jab se aai ho bakwas Kiya jaa rahi ho nahi hun main interested tum main aur na hi tumhari baaton main ek baar main samajh nahi aata tumhein .

Aur jo bhi hoga dekha jayega tum yaha se jao yeh Mera aur mera ghar ka mamla hai hum dekh lenga . Tum dur hi raho mera pariwar ke mamlon main as tum kuch nhi lagti is pariwar ki so get out right away isse pehle ki main kuch esa bol dun gussa main ji tumhe pasand nhi hoga .

And before disha could react on Shiva's statement maami came and slapped her so hard that she fell down on Shiva's feet. Maami sat down in a position to reach her level and slapped again and again till her cheeks go red to scarlet and have a fingers marks .

Rishita went and stopped maami and make both of them stand .

Rishita : maami bas karo voh mar jayegi kya kar rha ho maara kyun usse itni berehmi se kya ho gaya hai aapko itna gussa ?

Maami started crying and said

Maami : Marti hai toh mar jaaye meri Bala se.. tu bata toh aur kya karu rishita aur kya karun main . Tum logon ko kuch nhi pata tum logon ke peeth peecha kya gul khila Rahi hai yeh ladki sabko barbad karne main lagi hai aur meri beti ki jaan leni chahi isne .

Tujha pata hai shiva yeh yeh dedh Shani ne hi voh jhoomar giraya tha uski rassi kaat ker . Yeh Anita aur us kamini ke sath mili hui hai yeh uske isharon per chal rahi hai .

Yeh kisi se pyar nhi karti arey yeh apne maa baap ki nhi ho pai toh kisi aur ki toh kya ho hogi . Yeh sirf aur sirf paisa se pyar karti hai . Paisa hi iska vajood hai .

Rishita : kyaaaaaaaaa bua ke sath aap yeh kya bol raha ho bua esa kyun karengi unka kya phayada in sab se ? Aap jhoot bol raha ho na ? Bolo na maami aap jhoot bol raha ho na ?

Maami : nahi rishita main jhoot nhi bol rahi agar main jhoot bolti toh mera chehre se sach dikh jata ki main jhoot bol rahi hun . Vese bhi voh maa kabhi jhoot nhi bolegi jiski beti aaj zindagi ahe maut ke beech jhool rahi ho .

Jiske beti ki khushi uski biwi se Judi hon voh maa jhooti gawahi nhi degi Rishita . Maine aap sab ko bola tha na main saboot leke aaungi toh hai mera pass saboot jisse yeh sabit ho jayega ki yeh disha , anita aur teri bua kamini teeno mila hua hai uske baad tum sab decide karna kya karna hai kya nahi .

Shiva's anger increased ten folds and boom it broked the dam of anger . His eyes got red opening his teesri aankh like shivji . He roared like a wounded lion ...

Shiva : dishaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa kya bigada tha meri raavi ne tera haan kya bigada tha . Tuja paisa chahiya na lele jitna chahiya , jo chahiya leja main khud dunga tuja muja kuch nhi chahiya yeh Paisa yeh daulat yeh shauhrat nhi chahiya muja mera kisi kaam ke nhi hai yeh sab .

Jab meri raavi hi nhi hoga mera pass toh yeh sab kama ke kya karunga main . Kiske liya Paisa yeh daulat thi raavi ke liya na toh main Shanti se bol raha hun disha dafa ho jao meri nazron se aur kabhi mat aana warna main kya karunga main bhi nhi janta .

Jati ho ki nahi isse pehle ki main tumhe jaan se maar dalun . Jaate jaate ek baat yaad dila dun disha agar meri raavi ko kuch bhi hua nah toh marna ke liya taiyar rehna . Tumhari ulti ginti shuru ho chuki hai tik tok tik tok now get lost . He spated fire 🔥.

Here disha again tried to touch shiva but he backed off and said

Shiva : don't you dare touch me you filthy women main tumhari shakal bhu nhi dekhna chahta samajh nhi aa raha dafa ho jao yaha se warma apni jaan se hath dho baithogi I said just leave right away yeh akhri warning de raha hun uske baad warning nhi dunga .

Disha : yeh maami jhooti hai yeh jhoot bol rahin hai main toh kamini ji ko janti bhi nhi hun aur na hi Anita ko aur main esa ghinona kaam kyun karungi tum hi batao.

Mai Toh tumse pyar karti hun na toh main yeh baat ache se janti hun tumhara kareebi tumhara liya sab kuch hain toh unhe kyun chot pohchaungi mera kya phayada hoga isme tum hi socho na ?

Yeh jhoot hai yeh sab jhooti kahani suna rahin hai inhone hi karaya hoga yeh sab . I love you shiva sachi main .

Shiva : eh dedh Shani mujhse bakwas karegi aur kya bola tune maami jhooti hai yeh sab isne Kiya hai proof hai tera pass ki yeh sab usme kiya hai aur yeh bata tuja kaisa pata isne Kiya hai .

Chal maan liya sab jhoot hai proof la main bhi toh dekhun kitna sach hai kitna jhoot .

Aur ek baat bata dun maami kaisi bhi ho voh apni beti ko chot nhi degi jo aurat apna beta beti ki shadi bachane main lagi ho voh yeh itna ghinona kaam karegi .

Arey yeh toh Ghar aai hi nhi thi subha se . Aai hi sidha hospital hai raavi ka accident ka sun ker aur tu jhoot pe jhoot pe jhoot bole Jaa Rahi hai aur main maan lunga hat muja tera jaisa samjha hai kya .

Chali Jaa meri nazron se dur jaaaaaaaaaaaaa warna majbooran muja police bulani padegi aur tera liya voh bhut bhari padega . Jail toh tu jayegi hi philhal tu nikal yaha se .

At that time disha's phone rang it was Kamini's and Anita's conference call and due to fear 😨 her phone fell from her hand and by mistake it got received while saving it from falling but failed .

Taking opportunity maami took her phone in her hand and showed it to every one .

Suman was speechless all the while learning her disha's truth .

Then maami put the call on speaker while going to waiting area as they got many warning from doctor to not shout in corridor but none listen so with strict instructions they had to leave in waiting area.

Phone conversation..

Kamini: dekh disha tune mera sara kaam bhut asan kar diya hai chal ab jaldi se unki property ke baki se paper le aur mera ghar aaja aur sab mujha pakada de aur apna paisa leja .

Ab barbadi shuru hogi un pandyas ki hahahaha bhut shaunk hain na satyavadi vicharon per chalna ka meri beti rishita ko bhi apna side kar liya meri dusri beti ko bhi unka beta krish ne apna side kar rakha hai aur toh aur kalyani bhi inhi ki bhasha bolna lagi hai toh ab iska anjaam toh bhugatna padega inhe apni barbadi ka tamasha apni aakhon se dekhega shiva .

Aur uska pariwar hab voh shiv sena kuch nhi kar payegi na tab mujha sukoon milaga unhe tadapta hua dekh ker . Chal yeh toh hui meri baat ab sun main Anita ko wahan sabka khayal rakhna bhej rahun hun taki dhara ka khona ka gam se Gautam Anita ko apna le aur tu nikal wahan se jitni jalti ho sake .

Then phone went off .

Everyone looked at the disha anger in their eyes.

Disha looked at everyone with fear in her eyes .

Rishita : bua itna kaisa gir sakti hai kaisa I just believe it main unhe nhi chodungi I hate you bua I hate you and looked at disha agar raavi aur dhara bhabhi ko kuch bhi hua na disha toh mujhse bura koi bhi hoga main bata rahun tumhen.

Maami voh saboot toh dikhao bhut bol rahi thi na yeh ki aap jhoote hun toh iska yeh bharam bhi todh hi do aap .

Then maami took her phone and played the recording and put in front of everyone.

Watching it Shiva's mind's fuse blew away and called the police immediately and gave both the recordings one which maami had and second which he recorded when kamini was on call .

Shiva : sir arrest her and the other two ladies also they tried to kill my wife and sister in law who was pregnant and even tried to undertake out property and even tried to temper the proof and even manipulated my mother with her cheap tricks .

Sir please isse jaldi se yaha se leke jaaye main aur der usse yaha mera samne bardash nhi kar sakta . Main bhut roka hua hai khud ko isko marne se mera ab aur sabar ka imtehaan mat lijiye .

All : haan inspector sir le jao isse yaha se aur kadi se kadi saza dijiya taki iska jaisa aur bhi log sabak seekha aur esi harkatein karne sa pehle lakh baar sochein .

Then the inspector told the lady officer to arrest her and left from there .

Here doctor came out from OT and went towards where everyone was present and told that dhara had lost her six month old baby and due to severe internal injury she can't carry baby again . And left saying they need to take care of dhara as she is very weak and sensitive .

All were shocked listening this new and broke down . As abhi us dukh se ubhra na the ki raavi ki doctor came to them and told that unhone successfully operation toh kar diya hai aur kafi blood loss ke wajh se chances bhut kam the unke Zinda rehna ke per wakt per Lana sa unki thodi si situation sudhri .

Shiva : voh ab theek toh hai na doctor?

Doctor: unki bhagwan ki dua se jaan toh Bach gai hai lekin hosh aana abhi baki hai aur unke liya yeh 72 hours bhut critical hain . Agar unhe in 72 hours main hosh nhi aata toh ......

Suman : toh kya doctor?

Doctor: toh voh coma main bhi jaa sakti hai aur kitna wakt ke liya yeh kuch nhi kaha Jaa sakta so dya kijiye ki unhe jaldi hosh aa jaye . That's all I can say right now all the best mr pandya it's all depends on next 72 hours.

Shiva : kyaaaaaa , main ... Main raavi se mil sakta hun ?

Doctor: ji zarur mil sakte hain per zada disturb mat kariyega aur stress bhi mat dena warna back fire bhi ho sakta hai jo aap unse kaheinga .

Shiva nodded

Shiva broke down there hearing about Raavi's health..

Maami came forward as nobody had the bit in them to handle him right now and suman was bowling in her guilt .

Maami : eh shiva bas Bhai bas ... Dekh raavi theek ho jayegi haan voh kamzor thodi hai . Teri raavi hai voh itni jaldi haar nhi manegi voh tu dekhna uthta hi tera naam legi voh . Tu toh mera Sher hai na ? Sher rota thodi hain chal khada ho jaa raavi se mil ker aa . Jaa bacha jaa himmat kar aur bula apni raavi ko apna pass .

Shiva : paka voh theek ho jayegi na maami . Meri raavi ke sath hi ea kyu hota hai maami ? Sirf uske sath hi kyun ? Usne kisi ka kya bigada hai jab jab lagata hai khushiya aa gai hai tab tab bhagwan mujhse meri khushiyan kyun cheen leta hai .? Agar use kuch bi hua na
Toh main mar jaunga maami mar jaunga.

Maami : shhhhhh bas bas bilkul chup voh bilkul theek ho jayega aur dekhna tujha kitna tang karegi . Abhi jaa aur mil toh sahi thodi himmat toh kar . Agar tu hi tut jayega esa toh tu raavi ko kaisa sambhalega jaa chal jaldi kar .

Shiva nodded at her .

Then he went inside the room with much difficulty. When shiva reached her he couldn't resist himself and hugged her tightly and cried like a baby .

Main tera, main tera, main tera, main tera
Main tera, main tera, main tera, main tera
Main gehra tamas tu sunhera savera
Main tera o, main tera
Musaafir main bhatka tu mera basera
Main tera o.. main tera

Shiva : eh chipkali dekh na tera Bhoothnath ko kaisa tut gaya hai tera bina . Dekh na meri taraf tuja pata hai doctor kya bol raha hai ki tu agar nhi uthi na toh humesha soti hi rahegi .

Abe unhe kon bole ki meri raavi ke pairon main toh spring lage hain voh zada der tak so nahi sakti aur ek jagah toh tik kar baithna aata hi nhi hai ek no ki chipkali hai fudakti rehti hai ek diwar se dusri diwar per .

Uth na yrr dekh tu nahi uthegi na toh main kaisa rahunha tera bina haan . Waha dhara bhabhi ki behosh hai unhone apna baby bhi kho diya per voh gaumbi sambhal lenga tu meri baat sun Rahi hai na .

Uth jaa na raavi please kyun nakhre dikha rahi hai apna Bhoothnath ko t janti hai na tera yeh Bhoothnath apni chipkali ke bina adhoora hai . Mar jaunga main tera bina ek ek saans Lena mushkil ho raha hai tera bina mera . Tu yahi chahti hai kya .

Tuna toh Vada kiya tha mujhse tune bola tha tu kahin nahi jayegi mujha chod ker per ab dekh tu apna Vada todh rahi hai kaisa bhool gaye tu apna wada itni jaldi . Dekh main kuch nhi janta muja meri raavi wapis chahiya tuja wapis aana padega mera pass mera liya humara liya please come back to me 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭💔.

Tu jugnu chamakta
Main jungle ghanera
Main tera aa...
O piya main tera, main tera, main tera
Ho... main tera
Ho... main tera, main tera, main tera
O...

Raavi's breath hitched listening him and started breathing heavily and eyes were moving and with the attempt to open her eyes she lifted her hand and put it on his head and started ruffling his hair .

Due to this action he broke the hug and tried to call the doctor but raavi refused and open her eyes fully and said with difficulty nhi kahin mat jaa baith mera pass , DHA ... Dhara di aur baby ... Baby theek hain ?

Shiva : nhi ... He nodded in no .. humne baby ko kho diya raavi kho diya ab voh kabhi maa nhi ban payengi . Aur tuja toh is halat main dekh ke meri jaan nikal rahi hai raavi .

Tu apna Shayan kyun nahi rakhti tuja bolke gaya tha na apna dhayan rakhiyo phir kyun nhi rakha apna dhayan . Esa karta hain kya agar tuja abhi hosh nhi aata na toh main mar jata tera bina .

Raavi : shhhhhh ... Esa mat bol jo hota hai ache ke liya hota hai tu hi dekh na itna sab hone ke baad bhi main aur di theek hai zinda hai aur tune agar phir se marna ki baat ki na toh main khud tuja suli per tang dungi samjha huh bhooton ka devta kahin ka .

Shiva smiled amidst his tears of joy pain relief.

Shiva : kya acha hua hai raavi sab Bach ke bhi bhabhi ki kook suni ho gai voh kaisa jhelengi itna bada sadma per tu keh rahi hai toh kuch toh achai hogi isme bhi . Vese ab lag rahi hai na meri wali chudail . I love you raavi mujhse kabhi dur mat jana please main seh nhi paunga .

Raavi : I love you too mera wala gunda . Main tuja chod ke kahin nhi jaungi is baar paka hai mera kyuki main bhi toh tujhse dur nhi reh sakti .

Vese us chamkili chipku ka kya hua maasi uski jassosi karni wali thi na . As raavi was speaking continusly so she breathed heavenly and coughed hard .

Shiva : oye chipkali kitna bolti hai na tu .. dekh ab muja doctor ko bulana de dekh teri halat kharab ho rahi hai .

Raavi : nhi bas thodi der aur phir bula lena tu muja pani pila de .

Then he made her drink water .

Shiva : haan maami ne sab bata Diya us disha aur Anita ya voh kamini ke baare main . Jaisa hi sach pata chala maine usse jail bhej diya bhut gussa aa raha tha muja man kar raha tha puri duniya ki aag laga dun phir Tera baare main socha toh nahi kiya esa aur police ko bula ker arrest kara diya .

Ab tak toh Anita aur kamini bhi arrest ho gai hongi . Muja yeh nhi samajh aata ki log apna swarth ke liya apno ki khushiyon ko aag kyun laga dete hain isse kya khushi milti hogi . Well anyway tu theek hai bhabhi bhi theek hai ab tak hosh aa gaya hoga unhe bhi .

Raavi : ab toh bas bura din gaye shiva ab sirf aur sirf khushiya hi khushiyan hongi humari life main . Bhut sare sapna pura karna hai jaisa teri padhai , tera business man banna , teri company khadi karni , aur sabse badi baat dhum dhaam se grand wedding karni hai muja apna Bhoothnath ke sath . Karega na shadi mujhse ?

Shiva : haan maami ne kaam toh acha kiya hai vese bhi use kuch ache karam karne ki zarurat thi toh bhagwan bhi use maaf kar dega ab aur puch kya rahi hai karunga na shadi jaisi tu chahegi yeh bhi koi puchna ki baat hai . Ab bula lu ho gai sari baatein ki abhi bhi kuch baki hai ?

Raavi : bula le ab aur nhi rukna mujha yaha huh kitna depressing atmosphere hain yaha ka .

Then he called the doctor and she came and told shiva to go out as she will check her up with reluctance he went out and got to know about dhara that she is broken and was crying for her child and gaumbi is with her only .

Meanwhile the doctor checked raavi and told her she is absolutely fine and needs good rest as she was affected by the particles of glass with a force which cut her skin so as to heal it , it needs good rest else it will not heal and blood may again come out and leaves the room .

Due to the sedation raavi was in charge of sleep when suman came inside with batted breath and shame in her eyes . Behind her every one also came to meet raavi .

In front of everyone suman joined her hands and said raavi with tears spilling out her eyes and the guilt was clearly visible in her big eyes .

Suman : raavi beta muja maaf kar de jo bhi maine tera sath kiya uski koi safai nhi dungi kyuki galti meri hai main manti hun . Beta ki moh main main yeh bhi bhul gayi ki jisa apna ghar ki Laxmi baba kar lai thi usi laxmi ka anadar kar rahi hun bina uski baat suna bina use samjha .

Main yeh bhi bhul gai ki maa main ek ki nhi tum sabki hun main sahi galt ka antar bhi nahi kar pai ek aurat hoke itna bhed bhav kiya sabke sath sabse zada tere sath galt kiya maine .

Main bhi ek aurat hun Jahan muja tuja samajhna chahiya tha waha beta ki galti hota hua bhi uska sath diya aur tuja dutkara .

Main yeh bhi janti hun ki galti sirf shiva ki ya teri nahi tum dono ki thi jo anjane main hui thi baat ko suljhane ki jagah bhadha diya maine . Muja shiva aur tuja sahi galt samjhana chahiya tha per maine tum dono ko alag karne ki koshish ki yeh soch ker ki tum dono theek nhi ho ek dusre ke liya .

Tuja kitna zaleel kiya kiya dukh diya tuna ek uff tak nhi ki aur main chup chap dekhti rahi .

Maine tuja kitna tane diya kuch na kuch sunati bhi rahi phir bhi tune palat ke ek jawab nhi Diya mujha ek achi Bahu bani Rahi jab ki tera use talak hone wala tha phir bhi .

Talak ka faida shiva ka tha per samjhane ki zimmedari meri thi per galt mainw tuja samjha aur sara dish tujh per dal diya .

Shiva ne tera character per sawal uthaya uska dosh bhi tujhi per daal diya tuja samajhne ki bajaye yaha tak ki shiva ko bhi saza nhi di balki uske liya nai dulhan lana ki koshish karti rahi tera hota hua bhi .

Main fail ho gai raavi ek achi maa nhi ban paai . Per ab main tujhse wada karti hun ki ab main tuja ek achi maa ban ker dikhaungi uski sari zimmedari ache se nibhaungi bina bhed bhav kiya bilkul immandari se sab karungi .

Main pashchataap karna chahti hun kya tu muja ek akhri mauka degi ?

Agar ho sake toh muja maaf kar de raavi . Main Vada karti hun ki aaj nhi balki abhi se esa kabhi nhi hoga aur main khud tum dono ki shadi karungi jahan tum dono chahoga jaisa chahoga .

Raavi immediately hugged suman while getting up with the help of shiva and said

Raavi : kaki aap please pehle rona band karo aur meri baat suniya . Aapne jo kiya mana voh galat tha muja bhut bura bhi laga dukha bhi mera dil par ab jab aapne mujhse maafi dil se maang hi Li hai apni galti maan ker toh naraz hona ka toh koi matlab hi nhi hai mera .

Aap meri maa ho meri kaki aur maa daant bhi sakti hai laad bhi kar sakti hai aur jab bache ziddi ho toh thoda sakti se pash bhi aa sakti hai toh maine aapko maaf Kiya hai apko mauka diya aap ab khush ho jaiya kyuki aap sirf meri hi nhi mera pyar ki bhi maa ho .

Aur maa aap na kabhi bhi ki bhi chota ke aage hath nhi jodengi kyuki bade hath jodh ker mafi nhi manga karta voh apna haath sirf ashirwad ke liya uthate hai toh aap bas hum dono ko ache se bhar bhar ke ashirwad do humare liya wahi kafi hai .

Apna ashirwad aap hum per banaye rakhengi na ? Aur phir se maafi mat mangna kyuki maa ka hath aur zuban sirf pyar ke liya hona chahiya .

Suman : haan bhai samajh gai tujhse na baaton main koi ni jeet sakta . Jeeti reh aur khoob taraki ksr aur meri is nalayak beta ko sambhal pura hospital apna sar par utha liya tha isne . Aur main apna ashirwad humesha banaye rakhungi ab khush .

Raavi : bhut khush .

Then she came out of her hug and hugged Prafulla.

Raavi : maasi apko bhi dher sara thank you apna sab kuch theek kar diya I love you 😘

Prafulla: haan bhai ab theek theek hai. Zada maska mat maar haan aur I love you shav you tu apna Bhoothnath ko hi bol haan .

All laughed at her statement while shiva and raavi got embarrassed 😳.

Then shiva was standing and admiring the bond of his wifey and their two mothers and later he too joined the hug affectionately.

Next day she and dhara was discharged and was brought home . They were taken care of by everyone.

Raavi was not even allowed to do any work or move anywhere except for morning chores like bathing .

Shiva usually stays at home to take care of her 😉 and he gives her full attention with lots of love and sometimes scold her for not taking her medicine and food which is recommended by the doctor.

This always lead to shiva getting scolding from suman for scolding raavi .

With time both raavi and dhara were fine now . It took three months to both of them to be fit and fine . Their divorce was already done so she was staying as a daughter of suman currently.

After giving one more month to both the ladies of the house by suman she made shivi married to each other with all the rituals.

After one month dhara adopted a baby from nursery and rishita was found pregnant while shivi had started their studies with so much love and offcourse romance too 😳😘.

THE END.........

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