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One shot on shivi's current track where shivi went on a date planned by the family to resolve their misunderstandings but fortunately happened otherwise so in my way I wanna take this part ...

I hope you all like it ...

Thank you...

Happy reading..

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Shiva in anger comes home and as soon as he comes inside he is bombarded with numerous questions by the family in return he sighs in anger and irritation.

Shiva : arey bas karo yrr .. pata tha muja voh chipkali nhi aane wali .. agar yahi karna tha use toh kyun bulaya muja waha itna mehnga hotel main pata bhi hai main kitna embarrassed hua waha.. kitni baar voh waiter mujhse order ke liya puchna Aya per majal hai ek baar bhi voh chipkali aai ho .

Panch ghanta pura panch ghanta uska intezar Kiya waha pura hotel ghuma ki kahi toh dikhegi per nhi phir thak ke usko call aur message Kiya per phone switch off switch off . Pata nhi esa kha Jake baithi hai ki na voh aai na uska phone mila . Agar nhi aana tha toh bata deti na mujhe..

Dev : tu pehle shant hoja pehle yeh bata tu sahi hotel bhi gaya tha ? Kyuki Raavi toh Ghar per hai hi nhi . Voh toh abhi tak nhi aai hai .

Shiva : kya nahi aai per voh mera pass toh pahunchi hi nhi dev . Aur hotel toh wahi tha kya naam tha haan w-cea .. wahi toh gaya tha ..

Dev : ek minute tune theek se yaad kar ke bata tu konsa wale main gaya tha waha do hai alag alag name se ek cea hai aur ek samander wala sea hai . Tuja sea wala main jana tha ..

Shiva : kyaaaaaaa .. iska matlab sari galti meri hai .. main hi galt jagh pahunch gaya aur dosh usper daal diya .. yeh sahi nhi hua dev .. mujhse itni badi galti kaisa ho Gai uper se woh abhi tak nahi aai hai . Kahin kuch ho na gaya ho .. muja bhut ghabrahat ho rahi hai .

Use toh mujse pehle aa jana chahiya tha agar dikh rahe tha ki main nhi aaya hun . Per ek minute uska phone mil nahi Raha kahin koi musibat main toh nhi hai voh . Voh phoolkumari toh musibat magnet hai ..

Just then dhara comes to hall and tells shiva that raavi abhi tak nhi aai hai aur uska phone bhi mera pass hai . Pata nhi kaha hogi voh ..

Shiva : kyaa apke pass hai phone ..? Apne kyun rakha uska phone ?

Dhara : tune hi toh bola tha ki Teri biwi phone ke sath khelti rahegi aur baat nhi karegi toh maine socha phone rakh leti hun toh tum dono ache se time spend kar paaoga . Sorry muja nhi pata tha ki tu galt jagh pahunch jayega aur yeh kand ho jayega .

Shiva : bhabhi apko kya zarurat thi phone rakhna ki muja jo karna tha main khud kar leta na . Apko kya lagta hai phone rakh lena se problem solve ho jayegi nahi .. balki apne meri biwi ki jaan ko khatara mein dal diya . Aur vese bhi aap meri biwi ko janti hi kitna ho jo apna uska phone rakha maine voh sab gussa main bola tha naki dil se mujhse behtar meri biwi ko koi nhi janta . Use toh itna rasta bhi nhi maloom ek number ki dobi aur bhut masoom hai voh kahi kuch problem main na phas gai ho .

Mana main ek number ka doba hun apna gussa main aker ek baar yeh nhi socha ki dusra hotel bhi check kar loon kahin wahan na ho bas gussa main waha se nikal gaye yeh soch ker ki ghar aa gai hogi toh Ghar Jake baat karta hun ki usne esa kyun kiya mera sath per yaha aake pata chalta hai ki ek aur nahi musibat khadi kar di mera liya .

Main bata raha hun aap sab ko agar meri biwi ko kuch bhi matalb kuch bhi hua na toh main kisi ko maaf nhi karunga . Ek kharonch aur aap log bhul jana ki raavi apki kuch lagti bhi thi main aap logon ko raavi ke aas paas bhi bhatakne nhi dunga agar use kuch bhi hua toh yaad rakhna yeh baat .

Aur aap phone dijiya mujha raavi ka you have no right to take her belongings without her permission. Then he snatches her phone and without listening to anything he leaves to find Raavi on the streets of somnath.

Suman : dekh liya teri overshmartness ka nateeja bhut badi mahanta ki Devi banti hai khud ko haan ? Phone rakh lena se dooriyan Kam nhi hoti baat karna se hoti hai . Man main iccha honi chahiye baat karna ke liya . Per tuna aaj dikha diya yeh kar ke ki tu kitni parwah karti hai meri bachi ki . Phone na hoke pata nhi Rai ka pahad bana ke rakh diya hai tum sab ne . Meri bachi apna liya hum sab ke liya kitna kuch karti hai per majal hai tum sab usko sabashi do bas kaam karana aata hai usse apna bhi aur voh dobi bina kuch bole kar bhi deti hai .

Ab bas bhut ho gaya maine phaisla le liya hai shiva aur raavi ab is ghar main nahi rahenga . Tum sab se dur bhej dungi unko tabhi voh apni zindagi ache se guzar payega aur apna career bhi achhe se bana payenga jo voh yaha reh ker kabhi nahi bana payenga na aage badh payenga aur muja rokne ki koshish mat karna bhagodi ki beti. Tera Bhajan sun sun ker aaj yeh jo bhi hua hai na mera dono bachon ke sath tu hai uski zimmedar.

Toh bhul se bhi raavi ke aas paas bhi mat aana bata rahi hun . Aur is bhram main mat rehna ki do emosnal baatein bologa apna dukhda rouga mera samne toh main maan jaungi tab pighal jaungi is baar nhi hoga esa kuch is baar shiva aur raavi tum sab se us kangdi se dur jayenga aur apni zindagi ache se yateet karenga . Ek baar raavi aur shiva ko aane de ghar.

Aur tum teeno kya muh taak rahe ho mera jao Jake dhundo raavi ko mera bacha akela chala gaya use dhundna jab tum teeno ko uski zarurat hoti hai apni zarurat aur apni biwi ko peeche chod tum sab ko uper rakh ker khada hota hai voh per tum sab itna matlabi ho ki aaj jab usko tum logon ki zarurat hai toh yaha bhoot bana khade ho .

Aaj pata chala kitna pyar hai bhai se teeno ko kabhi kabhi bura lagta hai ki kyun voh khud ko last aur tum jaisa bhaiyon ko uper rakhta hai kash voh pehla hi itna khudgarz ho jata toh aaj yeh nobat nhi aati .

Gaumbi : maa esa kyun bol rahi hai tu please esa mat bol hum sab shiva aur raavi se bhut pyar karta hai aur hum abhi jaker laate hain raavi ko dekhna use kuch nhi hoga .

Dev n krish : haan maa kuch nhi hoga raavi ko .

Suman : voh toh dikh hi raha hai kon kya hai aur kon kya nahi . Chalo jaao ab aur meri beti aur beta ko sahi salamat ghar Lana warna mera ghar main ghusne ki zarurat nhi hai .

Then all three runs to find raavi .

Here raavi was running on the streets of somnath in order to save herself from getting robbed . As she was looking behind herself that if the robber is behind her or not she didn't saw the truck was there in the middle of the road. She collided with it and fell on the harsh surface and she got injured due to which she layed there closing her eyes. watching her injured Robber run back to his den while before some people come to her rescue she gets up and was running aimlessly she got into an accident..

The driver saw her in the pool of blood lying lifesless and he got scared and left raavi there struggling to life and death. Here some people came and took raavi to the near by hospital and admitted her and left .

On the other side shiva dev krish gaumbi were searching raavi continusly but she wasn't anywhere to be found so the three came back home getting tired while shiva was still searching her making everyone see her picture in his mobile's lock screen.

That time only suman calls him and asked him

Suman : eh shiva raavi mili kya ? Yeh teeno toh thak ker ghar aa gaye peticot chaap che na . 

Shiva : inhe chodiya maa raavi Abbi Tak nhi mili mujha bhut dar lag raha hai kahin voh kisi problem main na ho .. maa main uske bina nahi reh paunga agar voh nahi mili toh sab meri hi galti hai mujha ek baar apna gussa per kabu kar ker use dekhna chahiya tha per nahi pyar per mera gussa havi ho gaya ..

Suman : eh shiva mana teri galti thi per khud ko doshi mat bol aur jaa ker meri beti ko dhund esa rona se kuch nhi hoga voh rona se nhi milagi dhundna se milagi samjha . Aur kuch bura mat soch sahi salamat hogi meri bachi jaha bhi hogi . Jaa thanda dimag se soch ke dhund kaha ho sakti hai ..

Shiva : maa har jagh dekh liya use uske dost , mandir , har gali har bazar , restaurant sab and one thing strikes him and rishita and both speaks together ab toh bas hospital bacha hai..

Suman : eh dono chup Karo use kuch nhi hua hoga jaa dekh ke aa ek baar waha bhi main yaha somnath ji se prarthna karti hun ki raavi mil jaaye hume jald se jald sahi salamat. 

Then shiva cuts the call and goes to every hospital but she wasn't there then he sees one hospital near temple and goes there and screams Raavi's name

Shiva : chipkali ... Chipkali kuch toh ishara kar na ki tu yahi hai please 🥺😭..

Nurse : excuse me sir aap please agar kisi ko dhund rahe hai toh reception per jaake report kariya yeh hospital hai yaha shoor karna mana hai ..

Shiva : hmm sorry main thoda bhavuk ho gaya tha ..

Then he goes to reception and asked about if Raavi's is admitted here.

Receptionist: umm raavi who ... Ek patient abhi kuch time pehle admit toh hui hai kuch log aaye the yaha per unhe kuch malum nahi tha toh thoda Paisa jama kara kar voh isse yahi chod gaye hain .. aap ke pass unki picture ho toh dikha dijiye hum bata denge apko ki wahi hai ki nahi .

Shiva : ji ..

then he shows her picture and the receptionist says yeh voh wahi ladki hai jiski halt bhut kharab thi. 

Shiva : kya ... Kya hua use ? Kaha hai voh please mujha bata do .. main apke aage hath jodhta hun ..

Receptionist: pehle aap bataiya aap kon hai inke esa hi hum kisi ko bhi humara patients ke baare main nahi bata sakta ..

Shiva : main uska pati hun shiva pandya aur voh meri biwi hai raavi shiva pandya. And he show her their wedding pic which was there on his lockscreen.

Receptionist: okay yeh form hai isse bhar dijiya aur phir aap room no 125 emergency ward main chale jaaiya waha apko Dr Sai Joshi milangi wahi Inka case handle kar rahin hai .

Shiva : thank you so much .. and fill the form and runs towards the emergency ward. He asks one of the nurses about Dr Sai Joshi .

Nurse : dekhiya abhi voh ek case handle kar rahi hain jaisa hi free hoti hai voh bhar aayengi toh aap mil lijiya  . Per aap unse milna kyun chahta hai ?

Shiva : actually voh jiska case dekh rahi hai voh meri wife hai so muja uske baare main Janna tha kaisi hai voh ? Koi ghabrana wali baat toh nhi hai na bhar voh receptionist bol rahi thi bhut buri halt main laya gaye tha use yaha .

Nurse : okay esa hai she is critical right now actually jo log yaha laaye the unho voh bayan deke gaate hai ki unhe kisi car wale ne bhut zor se thok diya tha aur bina help ke bhag gaya .. unke sar aur pair aur kuch bhari chotein aai hai aur sar aur pair per gheri chot asiy hai . Abhi philhal unhe hosh nahi aaya hai . Muja itna hi pata hai so wait for the doctor to come she will  you better . Now I take your leave sir .

Shiva : ji shukriya apka ..

He sits on the bench and cries for the happenings..

Shiva : yeh humesha humara sath hi esa kyun hota hai ? kyun har baar hum hi pareeksha dein ? kya hume khush rehna ka hak nahi hai ? Bhagwan please meri chipkali ko theek kar do nahi jee paunga uske bina mar jaunga main .. please 🥺😭...

Here raavi was taking long breaths now but was still unconscious..

Dr gave her medicine and came out . .

She was shiva and asked him ..

Dr Sai : kya aap hi mrs raavi ke husband hain ?

Shiva looked at her and said : ji haan main hi hun raavi ka husband shiva .. voh theek toh hai na? main mil sakta hun usse ?

Dr Sai : dekhiya abhi voh so rahin hai kal subha Tak ya shaam tak unhe hosh aa jayega tab Aap mil lijiye abhi aap mera sath aaiye apko unki situation ke baare main bata deti hun ..

Shiva : ji chaliya ..

Then both goes into her cabin ..

Shiva sat infront of Dr while checking the reports of raavi she told shiva that ..

Dr Sai : dekhiya mr pandya mrs raavi ko vese toh koi andruni chot nahi aai hai per unke sar par ghehri chot aai hai voh voh bhi do baar toh aapko unka dhayan rakhna hoga ki unhe kisi type ka pressure ya sadma na lage ..

She looked at Shiva's face which was tensed..

Dr Sai : dekhiya ghabraiya nhi unhe kuch nhi hoga bas unhe apna dimag per zor mat padhna dena jab tak unke sar ki chot puri tarah se theek nhi ho jati .

Shiva : ji theek hai aur kahin bhi chot aai hai kya ? Aur aapne esa kyun kaha ki raavi ko sar per do baar chot aai hai ?Lag toh nahi raha aapki baat se ki sirf sar par chot aai hai ..

Dr Sai : ji mr pandya do baar isliya bola kyuki inhe sar chot shayad bachpan main bhi lagi thi uska mark bhale hi hat gaya ho per dubara usi jagah lagne ke karan voh part sensitive ho gaya hai aur agar pressure pada toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai toh is baat ka khas dhayan rakhen ki us jagh bilkul bhi pressure nahi padhna chahiya ander chot nahi hai per phir bhi hume risk nahi Lena chahiya jab tak voh theek nhi ho jati aap unka dhayan rakhna.

Aur aapne sahi socha chot sirf sar par nahi balki unke baazu aur pair per bhi lagi hai . Ek hath per hairline fracture hai aur baki choti moti chot hai , shoulder blades chil gaye hai aur ek pair ka mass phat gaya hai aur moch bhi aai hai . So apko bhut dhayan rakhna hoga unka .. aur yeh kuch medicine list aur bandage karna wali list hai yeh apko bhar pharmacy se mil jayegi .

Shiva : ji Dr per paka koi dar wali baat nhi hai na ? Vese kab tak theek ho jayegi raavi ? Main usse ghar kab leja sakta hun ?

Dr Sai : dekhiya dar wali baat nhi hai toh dariya nahi . Umm theek ka toh esa hai jitna voh rest karengi aur healthy khana khayegi plus time per medicine lengi until jaldi voh theek ho jayengi per haan ek week ke baad aap unhe mera pass phir le aana main phir se unka check up kar lungi . Ghar aap unhe parson le ja sakta hai kal ka din hum unhe observation main rakhenga .

Shiva : ji theek hai thank you doctor.

Dr Sai : it's my duty mr pandya no need to say thank you. Aap chahen toh apni wife se mil lijiya but don't exert her .

Shiva : ji ..

then she comes out of her cabin to take a round of her patients. While shiva calls at home. 

Shiva : hello maa .. said in cracked voice

Suman : eh shiva raavi mili kya ? Theek toh hai na voh ? Tu ro raha hai ?

Shiva : maa raa... Raavi mil gai hai voh hos.. hospital main hai.. voh bilkul theek nahi hai maa.. use humari zarurat hai .. and with this he broke again .. atleast he tried not to cry but couldn't control his emotions.

Suman : eh eh shiva tu ro mat haan tu bata konsa haspatal main hai main abhi aati hun waha .. shiva khud ko sambhal haan warna raavi ko kausa sambhalega .

Shiva : hmmm mahadev hospital.. tu jaldi aaja bas aur sun sirf tu aana ..

Suman : Han haan main aa rahi hun krish ke sath .

Then he cuts the call and goes to raavi .

In the room ...

Shiva holds Raavi's hand and with the other brushes her hair then kisses her forehead.

Shiva : janta hun ek number ka ghadeda befcoof hoon per please 🥺 muja maaf kar de .. esi galti dubara nhi karunga tuja kabhi akela nhi chodunga tu jo bolegi wahi Maan lunga ... Please aankein khol na baat kar na mujhse .. mujha ab aur bardash nhi ho raha . Janta hun tu sun rahi hai mujha per neend main hai . I love you raavi I love you a lot.. he keeps his forehead on her back of her palm but he makes sure he didn't touch her butterfly needle .

On the other side at pandya niwas..

Dhara : maa please hume bhi sath chalna do na shiva ka kya hai voh toh bacha hai gussa main kuch bhi bol raha hai please hume bhi raavi ki itna hi chinta hai jitni apko hai . Maa please..

Suman : eh bhagodi ki beti tu Tera pati kahi nahi jaa rahe aur tu aur tera pati ghar ka aur rishita aur dev ka khayal rakhegi samjhi .. aur tu patrani peecha se zada zubaan kam ladana isse .. jo karna hai bolna hai voh aram se bol ke kara lena . Chal krish gadi nikal .

Krish : haan maa chalo maine kanta kaki se gadi leli hai .

After 30 minutes they reached hospital..

Suman : oh thari itni dur hai yeh haspatal.. itna wakt lag gaya yaha aane main . Mera bacha ander akela sab dekh raha hoga .. mera teeno bacha nikamma hai .. chal ab nikal aake mujha ..

Krish : ji maa

Then both goes inside and ask about Raavi's room. Soon they reached out side Raavi's room . From the glass they saw Raavi lying on the bed with lots of machine and bandages while shiva was sitting beside her all broken 💔 keeping his head in her arm. 

As they entered the room suman keeps her hand on Shiva's shoulder.

Suman : shiva .. sab theek ho jayega per yeh sab hua kaisa ?

Shiva : maa .. and he hugs her immediately.. while crying he said maa raavi esa sota hua bilkul achi nhi lag rahi . Muja meri chipkali wapis chahiya 💔😭😭..

Suman : shh bas shiva bas esa nhi rota beta .. agar tu hi kamzor padega toh raavi ko kitna bura lagega yeh dekh ker ki uski wajh se tu ro raha hai .. chal chup hoja bas kuch nhi hua usse . Dekhna hum sab uska ache se khayal rakhenga na toh bilkul pehle jaisa ho jayegi .. acha bata doc ne kya bola ?

Shiva : hmm aap sahi keh rahe ho main kamzor nhi padh sakta mujha uske liya strong rehna hoga . Doc ne bola ki raavi ke sar, pair aur hath main chot aai hai aur isse bilkul bhi akela feel nahi karna hai aur kisi bhi cheez ka pressure nhi hona chahiye aur ladai wagera se dur rakhna hai aur ek shant mahool main rahegi toh jaldi theek hogi warna sar main blood clots ban sakta hai jo humara liya sahi nhi hoga ..

toh hume raavi ka bhut khayal rakhna hoga aur yeh bhi bola hai ki khch wakt ke liya bhar ka khana aur tala hua khana band karna hoga bas Ghar ka healthy khana Dena hai aur zada se zada paani Dena hai kisi bhi form mai.

Suman : hmm theek hai ho jayege .. per muja yeh bata raavi ka accident kaisa hua aur yeh yaha kaisa pahunchi..

Shiva phir suman ko voh baat batata hai jo usse nurse na batai thi .

Krish: bhai main bhabhi ka pura dhayan rakhunga unko bilkul tang nahi karunga please tu muja unke aas paas rehna de ne ..

Shiva : tera bharosa nhi hai muja per ek mauka de raha hun toh soch samajh ker use karna is mauka ko . Teri ek galti aur tu gaya .

Suman : arey yeh sab chodo aur yeh bata isse hosh kab aayega aur chutti kab milegi ?

Shiva : hosh isse kal subha Tak aa jayega aur chutti parson milagi . Per aap kya karoga esa ki raavi ko acha mahool mil jayega .

Suman : maine decide Kiya hai ki jab tak raavi thek nahi ho jaati tu main krish aur raavi ek dusra Ghar mein rahenga jab voh theek ho jayegi muja tumse ek zaruri baat karni hai .

Shiva : per maa apna ghar hone ke baad bhi dusra Ghar main kyun rehna hai ? Aur kya important baat karni hai abhi ker le na ?

Suman : important baat sabke sath hogi aur dusra Ghar bhi apna hi hai voh Ghar maine aur tera papa ne tera liya banwaya tha .. hum parson hi raavi ke sath us ghar mein shift ho jayenga .

Shiva : per maa baki sab ?

Suman : voh kar lenga manage unki tu tension mat le aur sara saman ki bhi tension mat le main aur krish abhi jaa raha hai ghar aur sara saman shift kar ke kal subha aayenga raavi se milna . Theek che . Tune kuch khaya ?

Shiva : maa tu theek hai toh main maan leta hun per tuja kya lagta hai meri chikali esa mashino ke beech ghira hui hai toh mera halak se kuch utrega main soch bhi nhi sakta . Isne bhi toh subha se kuch nhi khaya hai toh main kaisa kha sakta hun tu jaa ghar jaa jo tuja shift karna hai tu kar kal aa jana .

Suman : shiva thoda toh kha le esa kaisa chalega tu bimar ho jayega . Humara liya na sahi raavi ke liya toh kuch kha le . Jaa krish iske liya kuch le aa khane ko .

Then krish runs to canteen and brings food and hands it to suman .

Suman: le shiva kuch toh kha le .. but shiva was refusing constantly so suman made him eat few morsels shows nhi him her ever green angry look .

Shiva ne jaisa taisa kar ke do chaar neewale khaye aur suman ki godh mein sar rakh ker neend ke aagosh main chala gaya aur suman shiva ke aansu ponch ker uska sar sehlati rahi .

Krish : bhabhi dekh rahe ho shiva ko kaisa tadap raha hai apke bina please jaldi se apni aankein kholiya aur is dard se use Azad kar do . Aaj se pehle isse kabhi bhi itna dard main nhi dekha bas us din dekha tha jab papa hume chod ker chale gaaye the aur maa ki halat kharab ho gai thi . Please bhabhi aur mat satao aur isse dekho na ek baar kaisa tut ker bikar gaya hai . Apko pata hai yeh apka Bhoothnath jo chattan pandya hai aaj bachon ki tarah phapak kar ro raha tha .

Suman : oh bas Bhai isse baatein karna chod aur shiva ko is sofa per lita aur chal ghar hume aaj hi shift karna hoga . Aur kisi ko bol de ki iska dhayan rakhe oye sun iska dost nikhil ko phone kar aur Bula yaha ..

Krish did what suman said .. after few minutes nikhil came and told he will take care of shiva and raavi till they will come and his other friends will help them shift so she need to take any stress .

Suman : jeeta reh ..

Then both suman and krish went home with Shiva's friends..

( Note I am skipping shifting n talks exchanged between suman and family members so if u wanna imagine their conversation u are free to do )



Next morning....

Subha ke 10 baje ...

Raavi ko hosh aa raha tha aur raavi ne galti se apna hath pani ke glass per mara toh voh gir kar tut gaya jissa awaz hui toh shiva aur nikhil bhag kar ander aaye toh dekha raavi ko hosh aa gaya hai..

Shiva : aye raavi ... Tu theek hai? .. ab kaisa feel ho raha hai ?.. main yaad hun na tujhse ? kuch toh bol na chup kyun hai ? Shiva said crying cupping her cheeks ..

Nikhil : mera bhai shant hoga bhabhi ko abhi abhi toh hosh aaya hai thoda wakt de aur tu yaha baith main doctor ko bula ker aaya ..

Raavi : shi.... Shiva ... Main na tu... Tujhse  naraz hun... Tu... Tu n...nahi aaya jab... Jab mu..mujha teri zarrrrurat thi .. tu kaha tha ? Ab ro raha hai bachon ki tarah... Tu bhut bu.... ra hai main tujh....tujhse baat nhi karungi tu jaa .. akele date per jaa mu .... Muja hotel bula ker khud hi nhi aaya Gha... Ghadeda ... Aur phir raavi apna dusri oar dekhna lagi ..

Shiva : haan tune sahi bola main hi ek number ka ghadeda befcoof hoon.. main bhut bhut bura hoon chipkali.. maine hi apna gussa ko apne pyar per haavi hone diya .. ek baar bas ek baar apna gussa ko shant kar dusra hotel dekh leta toh yeh nhi hota . Main pagal tujha doshi samajhta raha purani baaton ko aaj ki baat se mila ker Ruth gaya .. I am sorry raavi mujha maaf kar de .. main bhut bura hun main Vada karta hun aaj ke baad tujha kabhi akele nahi chodunga aur tu jo bolegi sab manunga please ek baar baat toh kar please 🥺😭.. I really love you raavi ❤️❤️..

Raavi looks at shiva and she saw guilt and pain in his eyes ..

Raavi : shivaaaa ... Tu sorry mat bol teri bhi galti nahi hai .. meri bhi hai .. hum dono ki hai.. hum dono isliya ladh rahe the kyuki hum ek dusre se itna pyar karta hai ki humse judi choti si choti baat chubh jati hai toh hum baat karne ke bajaye ek dusre ko hurt karna lag jate hai yeh soch ker ki hum apni baat share karenga toh samne wala hume galt samjhega yeh nahi sochte ki jo hum ek dusre ko ladai kar ke hurt kar rahe hai uska kya toh tu maafi mat mang jo hua so hua bhul jaa kar diya maaf ..

Shiva : nahi raavi aaj sab solve hoga phir main Teri maafi accept karunga ? Chalega ?

Raavi : acha theek hai tujhse toh mera jeetna mushkil hai I love you 😘

Shiva : I love you too ...

Just as they were talking doctor came inside with nurse and told shiva and nikhil to go out .. first shiva was reluctant but left out with nikhil where already suman and krish were present.

Suman : shiva raavi theek hai na usse hosh aa gaya?

Shiva : haan maa aa gaya doc check kar rahi hai ..

Suman : baat Hui raavi se ?

Shiva : haan maa hui misunderstanding clear toh ho gai bas kuch baatein hai jo ek dusre ke samne rakhni hai voh jab doctor jayegi toh baat karta hun ..

Suman : haan theek hai .. aur tera ghar bhi set ho gaya hai .. tera dost bada acha hai by God hain mera sara kaam kar diya bina uff kiya ..

Frnds : arey kaaki yeh humara dost thodi hai bhai hai bhai . Bhai ki hum madad nhi karenga toh aur kon karega ..

Suman : haan yeh bhi hai ..

Then doctor comes .. all bombarded questions..

Dr Sai : arey aap sab shant ho jaiya .. raavi bilkul theek hai .. aaj raat inhe hum under observation main rakhenga phir kal subha le jaaiya .. aap chahe toh unse mil sakta hai abhi uthi Hui hai dawai di hai toh kuch wakt main unhe phir se neend aa sakti toh Jo baat karni hai abhi kar lijiya .

Then all met raavi and were talking to her here and there .. and soon raavi slept while others left to their respective works..

Suman : shiva main ghar jaati hun haan dhuper ko tera aur raavi ka khana laungi haan .. ache esa kar na Ghar chal ke kapda badli kar le phir aa jana abhi toh voh so rahi hai ..

Shiva : maa per main raavi ko kahin nhi Jane wala chod ke wada kiya hai maine usse tu jaa ..

Suman : esa hai toh krish Rukh jaayega yahi tu mera sath Ghar chal dekh le sab Tera hisab se set hai ki nahi aur kuch reh toh nhi Gaya na .. kapda badli kar ke khana kha ke aaja itna main raavi bhi uth jayegi toh aake use bhi apna hath se khila Dena esa toh kar hi sakta hai na ..?

Shiva : hmm theek hai .. oye pidi raavi ka dhayan rakhiyo samjha ..

Krish : haan tu jaa main hun yahi ..

After that he left and saw his new house which was as big as pandya niwas itself with modern looks . Shiva was mesmerized looking at its exterior and interior design..

Suman : kaisa laga ? Tera papa ne tera liya apni pehli kamai se banwaya tha voh janta the teri choice ko isliya teri pasand ko dhayan main rakhta hua yeh ghar banwaya tha aur aaj tak isse sahej kar rakha hai aur kisi ko pata nhi lagna diya kyuki main janti hun tera bhaiyon ko pata chalta toh isse bhi hadap leta tera hissa aur tera ghar tujhse koi nhi cheen sakta jab tak teri maa zinda hai . Shiva maine yeh faisla liya ki ghar ka batwara kar ke sabke hissa dena ke baad tu aur raavi yahi rahoga aur apni padhai puri karna ke baad tum log Mumbai chale jana is ghar ko main tera jaane ke baad bhi sahej kar rakhungi ..

Shiva : per maa yeh sab itna achanak aur tu hume alag kyun kar rahi hai aur muja bol rahi hai pandya store na jau padhai Karu aur bhar settle ho jau per kyun ?

Suman : kyuki ab voh Ghar tum dono ke layak nhi raha voh Ghar lobh se bhar gaya hai sansarik moh maya ke jaal main hai aur tum dono ke vikas se is ghar ke logon ko takleef ho rahi hai jab tak tum log somanath main rahoga tab tak tum log aage nhi badh paoga aur mai chahti hun ki tum do aage badho mera aur apna papa ka naam roshan karo apni zindagi apna tareeka se jiyo .. karega na shiva please mana mat karna jo bhi main kar rahi hun tum sab ki bhalai ke liya hi kar rahi hun . Yaha ki chinta mat karna main sab sambhal lungi .

Shiva : maa tune ache se soch liya hai na ?

Suman : haan soch liya hai tu apni Haan na bata ?

Shiva : theek hai maa tu jaisa chahegi vesa hi hoga main aur raavi padh likh ker bhar settle ho jayega aur jab itna paisa honga na toh sabse pehle tuja hi Lena aaunga .. rahegi na humare sath?

Suman : haan bilkul rahungi .. mera sabse samajhdaar bacha hai aur mera favourite bhi .. chal jaa ab kapde badal aur aker khana kha le haan ..

Shiva : tune banaya ?

Suman : haan aur voh Teri saheli ne bhi kya naam tha uska haan raakhi .. badi acchi ladki hai kaki kaki kar ke sare kaam kar diya mera rasoi ke .

Shiva : haha 😂 chal theek hai aata hun ..

Then shiva went and came back after few minutes..

Both mother and son ate food together and packed food for krish and raavi in the tifin and went to hospital.

There shiva made raavi eat food with his hands lovingly and started saying..

Shiva : raavi pichle dino jo bhi hua voh maine bas gussa main bola tha raavi asal main main bhut zada hurt feel kar raha tha ki tune mujhse baat chupai ki tu shoot per jaa rahi hai jab tuja kisi aur ladke ke sath dekha toh dil jal raha tha mera esa nhi hai raavi ki main tujhse jalta hun ya trust nahi karta baat yeh thi ki mujha jhoot se nafrat hai bhut zada jo jhoot bolta hai yeh janta hua bhi ki samne wale ko jhoot se kitni takleef hogi phir bhi .

Baat sirf itni si thi ki tu muja raat na sahi subha bata ker chali jaati ki tu shoot per jaa rahi hai main tuja rok thodi leta main toh teri hi team main tha na phir kyun chupaya yeh hi samajh nahi aaya aur tune bhi mujha galt samjha .  Manta hun ki agla din jo bhi hua voh pani wali baat ko leke voh bas main bhut zada tujhse upset tha toh kahin ka gussa kahi aur nikal diya aur tujha aur hurt kar diya .

Tu janti hai tujhe hurt Kiya isliya tujhse zada main roya hun mujha zada hurt hua hai per main apni baat rakh nahi pata tu janti hai yeh baat muja baat theek se rakhni nhi aati aur tu samajh hi nhi paai bas isi karan se humari ladai badhti gai aur misunderstanding clear hi nhi ho pai . I am sorry raavi I am really sorry 😔🥺.

He didn't know when food got finished.

Raavi : shiva bas ho gaya na tu sahi bol raha hai muja tujha bata dena chahiye tha ki main shoot ke liya jaa rahi hun . Voh kya hai na shiva ek toh excited thi main uper se bank shoot the toh muja yakeen nahi hua muja laga koi mera sath prank na kar raha ho isliya main yeh baat sabse chupana hi sahi samjha socha ki jab hath main dd dekhenga toh sabko yakeen ho jayega ki main jhoot nhi bol rahi thi bas tum sab ko suprise dena chahti thi per dhara di ke wajh se ek toh Ghar main sab pareshan the mera liya koi khushi nhi thi sath hi hum dono main bhi fight ho gai .

It's okay shiva main na aage se na dhayan rakhungi tujha bina bataya koi kaam nhi karungi aur yeh na suprise vaprise cancel isse bhut fight hui humari ab aur nhi . Aur tujhse kabhi jhoot nhi bolungi aur sab kuch share karungi achi buri sahi galt sab . Tu bhi promise kar ki tu bhi mujhse kuch nhi chupayega aur jhoot nhi bolega . Aur haan hume jo bhi problem hogi voh hum ek dusre se baat kar ke solve kar lenga itna time Tak wait nhi karenge ki ab solve ho ab ho theek hai ..?

Shiva : ab sab manzoor hai .. I promise ab sab theek hoga .. raavi ek aur cheez batani thi .. maa isse abhi bata dun kya ?

Suman : haan bata de warna kal Ghar jayegi toh ghabra jayegi .

Raavi : esa kya hai shiva ? Bata na dara mat please 🥺.

Shiva : raavi maa ne hum sab ka aaj subha batwara karne ka faisla liya aur jab tak tu theek nhi ho jati tab tak humare sath krish aur maa humare naye Ghar main rahenga uske baad tu aur main clg jayenga padhai karenge aur uska sara kharcha maa uthane wali hai phir hum yeh Ghar chod ke Mumbai jayenga humara ek aur naaye ghar main wahin kaam karenge aur settle ho ephie jab Paisa hoga toh maa ko apna pass bula lenga . Pehle main bhi mana kar raha tha per maa ne kaha ki voh jo kar rahi hai voh hum sab ki bhalai ke liya kar rahi hai.. I hope tuja koi aitraz nhi hai in sab se ..

Raavi : maa yeh aap kya hai hum akele kaisa rahenga ? Apne yeh socha bhi kaisa ki hum akele family ke Bina reh lenga apke bina nahi yeh sahi nhi hai maa .

Suman : raavi jo kar rahi hun sab ke liya kar rahi hun waha patrani khush nhi hai dhara se aur na dhara patrani se toh sab ko alag alag ker ke unko unke alag alag ghar main bhejna ka faisla kiya hai maine . Tum dono apna naye Ghar main rahoga tumhe Mumbai jana hai nahi jana voh tum dono ki marzi hogi maine bas ek sujhav diya hai . Patrani apna naaye ghar main bas pandya niwas main main krish gaumbi dhara aur uska bacha hoga jissa gaumbi kuch dino main adopt karna wala hai ek ngo main dekh ker aaya tha . Aur rahi baat cheeku ki toh uska Nana nani ko saunp diya kal ab voh jaisa marzi paale use humari headache nahi hai voh .

Raavi : per maa ..

Suman : shiva ko aitraz nhi hai na hi krish ko aur main gaumbi aur dev ko bhi phone per sab bata diya tha aane se pehla unhe bhi aitraz nhi toh tuja kyun ho raha hai ..?

Raavi : kyuki voh log bhale hi hum sab ke Bina reh lenga per main kaisa reh paungi , jo ladki sari zindagi pura pariwar ke sath rahi ho voh ab achanak se akele kaisa rahengi, shiva apke bina kaisa rahega maa ?

Suman : main dur thodi hun jab man Kiya mera pass aa jana aur main bhi toh aati rahungi tumhare pass . Tu theek hoja phir sochenga iske baare main ki main tera pass rahungi ha bhagodi ki beti ke pass .

Raavi : tune shiva soch samajh ke haan ki hai na ?

Shiva : haan raavi isliya toh tuja bataya hai warna nhi batata agar sure nhi hota toh .

Raavi : theek hai toh muja bhi koi problem nahi hai ..

Next day raavi was discharged and they all went new home they did grehpravesh and then made her lag on the bed ..

Shiva krish and suman took a lot of care of raavi in that period of one and half month. Raavi was fully pampered and she was enjoying like a baby enjoys her company of his parents. Suman used to make food and sweets for her with her own hands and made raavi and both the sons eat it with her own hands .

They all used to enjoy different things with a lot of laughter , joy and love around them .

Raavi and Shiva's friends came to meet her and with this her days were passing .

After one or more month raavi was back to her old self and came to pandya niwas with suman krish and shiva where suman did batwara and told things about it .  All took it as a token and talked for a day and left for there rooms ...

After 8years later raavi and shiva were seen sitting in angan at Mumbai residence. They were playing with their 1year old kids shriya and Ravish . The two twin munchins of pandya family .

Shiva was a big business man and raavi was a big business woman she was a blog WRITER and a novelist, influencer yet she is also a great fashionista.. had her own fashion brand in the market . Suman was very happy with the development she got to see in her children.

Where as Krish Was married lives with shivi and suman in Mumbai and he works in MNC with his wife . While in somnath gaura handles pandya store and dev rishita handles cosmetic brand they own .

All were happy in their own world.. with time shivi and suman forgave them and all meet at some occasions and on vacations too ..

Most importantly shivi were happy they found their happily ever after.. they had a lot of struggle, lot of fights , misunderstandings but at the end of the tunnel they both were together like a pillar of each other, support of each other. Voh kehta hai na ladai ke baad milna ka sukh bichadna ke dukh se kahin zada hota hai wahi sukoon aaj humara shivi ke chehra per nazar aaya hai ...


















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