Original version... It sucks...
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The most precious thing

Is something that we can't see

Unnoticed yet noticed

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Eternally lost

Yet at times, thought to be gained

The truth however

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Is that it's slipping

Further and further away

So precious, yet rare

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It's limited, though

Some say it's unlimited

Are they wrong? Or right?

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That may be something

That nobody can tell hmm?

How can something fade?

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It's always there, here

It's everywhere, yet nowhere

No physical form

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So, how can we tell?

Is it truly what we think?

Could it be? Or not?

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Time, unseen yet seen

There yet not there, gone yet here

So precious it is

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Humanity's search,

Eager for even more time

Fighting against it

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Always struggling

With something that seems so simple

But truly isn't

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If it was simple,

It would have already been

Conquered and controlled

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Sadly it's the truth

People fade away as time

Just passes so fast

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What ya think?