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Topic 1: Tell me about your family

My family has 4 members, my parents, my elder sister and me. My father works at in Thai Binh Department of science and technology. He is a successful man and ,my idol. He loves his daughter very much but sometimes, he is so strict with us when we don't listen to him. My mum works at in Thai Binh Hospital but she's not a doctor. She works is charge of administrative affairs and manages archives. She's 51 years old and 6 years less younger than my dad. She's a gentle mother. She teaches me many things in my life and she is not only my mum, she's butalso my big friend.( sau not only là danh từ thì sau but also cũng phải là danh từ ) My elder sister works as accountant at in Ha Noi Agribank Ha Noi. She's married and has a 2 years-old baby boy son . ( tính từ ghép không được thêm s nhé )His name is Hung but everybody calls him Bim. He looks so cute and he makes everybody happy and smile. My nephew is the youngest member in my family, so he's always pampered and loved.

Just like many other families, my family always loves and attaches together one another . Whenever I feel sad and lonely, whenever I feel tired by from the stresses and strains of modern life, I want to go home. My family is the only place that makes me feel that I'm protected, loved and pampered.