For Cloverflame0101 :3

Name: Amazon

I'm assuming this is referring to the Amazon rainforest, which is kinda confusing because that wouldn't exist in Pyrrhia. It's a really pretty name, and it's original, but it doesn't really work.. idk. Either way, I like it!

Gender: Female

Okay

Tribe: Rainwing

I like RainWings.

Rank: Wants to be a Explorer

Sounds cool :D

Appearance: usually she's a dark green and her frill will be different shades of pink, she has lime green eyes and wears a pink flower.

Sounds pretty. I like the flower, but you could be a bit more descriptive.. like, describe her body shape and not just colors.

Personality: fight me face on and she will fight you if you bother her, very sarcastic and stubborn, can say rude comments and not notice/care about your feelings, grumpy if you wake her up from her naps. Very nosey and bossy.

Ha, I like this. Reminds me of Glory. I'd add a few more good traits, because she sounds a bit mean (unless that was what you were going for) but this isn't bad.

Family:
Mother&Father: doesn't care enough to find out
Brother: Kiwi
Mate: None
Crush: Helios The Skywing
Dragonets: none

I like the name kiwi.. it's adorable

Backstory: growing up Amazon always wanted to be a traveler, wanted to see what a icewing looked like, wanted to fly in the mountains. But she knew nothing how to take care of herself and it's not like any rainwings could teach her, she taught herself how to fight instead of playing the rainwings hide and seek games. She stayed away from rainwings because they always pick on her for her dreams. Therefore she learned to be tough, always. Soon when Glory became queen, she sent Amazon to Jade mountain, amazon is in he Sliver Winglet. (Where she meet her crush Helios)

Oh, what happens after she goes to Jade Mountain? Please tell me she becomes an explorer? I am so in support of her following her dreams

Anyway, this is a pretty basic backstory. I like that she doesn't fit in with other RainWings, which makes sense considering her personality. I'd like to know more about her, because this backstory seems.. unfinished?

Residence: JMa

Yes I got that

Overall
I'll give Amazon a 7/10! She's pretty good, but you could add some more in the personality, appearance, and backstory. What you have already isn't bad, and you shouldn't change it, just add to it...