So someone dmed me this, they wished to keep secret.

Name: Yeet.

Hmph. Reasonable.

Tribe: Allwing
No. Big no-no.

Age: 420

No comment.

Sexuality: gaY

Honestly just happy to see more LGBQT+ in WoF.

Personality; Gay, sarcastic, loving, protective, overjoyed, loyal, Gucci queen,

Um, maybe make her clingy and have a few flaws?

Residence: Palace in the middle of the continent.

So I guess she's a queen.

Mate: Meme

Well damn I'm picturing them together rn and they look super cute.

Family: Love is mom, War is dad, Depression is sister, Rage is brother, Hate is brother, Death is sister.

Well they have an OP family.

Job: Queen

Well then.

Appearance: Black scales that can change to any color along with her seawing "stips" with Sandwing tail and skywing wings. Mudwing strength and fireproof scales. Icewing breath along with firesscales and fire breath.

No. This doesn't make any sense.
First of all, if you have firescales, your life is gonna be hell (peril basically) and fire and ice mixed equals evaporation.
And does she like to have her scales black?

Abilities: Everything:
NO.
HELL NO.
this needs to stop.
So many hybrids have so many powers and it needs to stop.
Hybrids are normally stunned by their mixed genes and don't have any powers, especially since your OC is a allwing.

Backstory: Love and War meet and they have a lot of dragonets and one of them is Yeet and Yeet grows up and finds meme and they have a lot of dragonets together.

*sighs*

Dragonets: every dragon

*sighs again*

So um here's how you can improve:
Don't make her and allwing and change her family and memes names. Nobody likes (except you,) allwings.
Change the dragonets and abilities, too.

   Final score:
2.2/10