Book Name: Love Universe

Author: PurpleLightARMY

Reviewer: Anika

• TOTAL MARKS- ①⓪⓪

|- ⑤ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʀᴇᴀᴅᴇʀ ɪɴᴛᴇʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ.
-5/5

There are huge amount of readers. Even introduction itself have 64 comments. The readers even tagged some people in comment to read this book.

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴄᴏᴠᴇʀ.
-8/10

The cover is extremely beautiful and eye-catching. The cover is enough to clarify that the plot is based on fantasy genre. The choice of font are perfect but the quote at top, "Love destroyed us. Love reunited us" is very beautiful but it is barely visible. I request Author to make it look more visible, I don't want such a beautiful quote hidden from eyes of readers. The colour balance of the girl in cover isn't good unlike Jin, due to which she is stucking out more. The light purple strip of your name below, the text are touching the ground, it should be balanced in the middle.

|- ⑤ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴅᴇsᴄʀɪᴘᴛɪᴏɴ.
-5/5

The description is very affecting and attention-grabbing at same time. It is not so long nor too short and it is enough to melt someone's heart and eager them to read this masterpiece.

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴛɪᴛʟᴇ.
-10/10

The title is based on the world called Love Universe that is created to give love and hope to the humans in the earth. The title is perfect and match the plot.

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʙᴏᴏᴋ ᴘʟᴏᴛ.
-10/10

The main plot is really deep and rare. The author have really good heart. It's story of girl named Yoon Min who commited suicide and became Guardian in Love Universe and now it's her duty to stop humans from commiting same mistake in the earth. The plot is so touching and have really deep meaning, it shows the importance of life and gives good life lessons and messages. It taught us how to gain courage enough to fight instead of giving up, most important is that a depressed person only need is a love and the last but not the least, how to truly love someone. But the journey doesn't revolve around only this plot as there is much more exciting twists. I can't wait to know how Yoon Min is related to her Senior Guardian Kim Seok Jin.

•|- ②⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴛʜᴇ ɢʀᴀᴍᴍᴀʀ ᴀɴᴅ ᴠᴏᴄᴀʙᴜʟᴀʀʏ.
-18/20

Your grammer is good but kindly avoid using past tense more. I found a lot of spelling mistakes/ typos and they are really noticeable plus you add so many fullstop in some sentence, only three dots are enough.

Chapter 2,
"No, they can't. Humans can't see Guardian. (Bu) they can hear you"

2. "O my God, I never had a Guardian to serve before"
Reviewer: "O" looked odd.

Chapter 3,
Jin's sudden compliment made her come back to reality and all of them clapped their hands together with (joly) happy faces.

Chapter 6,
He raised 5 of his fingers and added another from the (othhet) hand

Chapter 7,
They found many similarities between them and found out both of them like (mangoe)

Chapter 7,
That whole time if she was actually dreaming, why (one arth) everything felt so real?

Chapter 8,
He widened his eyes in suprise, the fact she has the (odicity) to question him like that made him suprised

Chapter 8,
Hoseok was trying to rap something but the alcohol was making him rapping cusses (insteed).
Reviewer: I found same mistake in chapter 9

Chapter 10,
(He) raised seven fingers, indicating a whole week.
Reviewer: It was Yoon Min. So it's "She"

Chapter 10,
Okay, now (memeories) are coming back of that drunken night

Chapter 10,
Why drag her (jnto) this?

Chapter 12,
Finally, she turned at the overflow presence (if) guardians, fairies and staffs.

Chapter 15,
She gulped (dow) her throat very slowly.

Chapter 17
Her sentence got (irrupted) by another presence in the room.

Vocabulary:-

Chapter 2,
"It was good cuz the comforting breeze was inside as well."
Correction: You aren't suppose to write "cuz" especially in details. Dialogue is understandable but not description.

Chapter 6, The boy let out a scoff as if he found her question a kid would ask type question,
Correction: how about just write "childish." In the end.

Chapter 6,
"You want to move forward, you have to let of the past that drags you down."
Correction: This confused me, you meant "let go of the past"?

Chapter 9,
So every guardian was leaving the class while talking, chatting.
Reviewer: "Chatting" wasn't necessary at last.

Yoon Min took a look around her, and like she expected she found the other senior guardians too.
Correction: "As expected, she found.."

Chapter 11,
However, she was stopped at the sight in front of her, her feet stopped automatically.
Reviewer: Same extra detail wasn't necessary, it ruins the mood.

Chapter 14,
He waved his hand at her, gestured her to sit beside him.
Correction: He waved at her and beckons her to sit beside her.

Chapter 14,
We cannot ignore the fact how on earth did he get to know how to weaken the sheild.
Reviewer: they aren't in the Earth

Chapter 14,
The harsh way he was avoiding her words (anf) her eyes was tearing her apart each second.
Reviewer: Her eyes was tearing her apart? And there was a typo too.

Grammer:-

Chapter 5,
The heart shaped lamps looked cute to her.
Correction: "Looks cute"

She looked at him and found herself judging his appearance already.
Correction: "She look"

Chapter 8,
She began teasing him while smiled like an idiot
Correction: while smiling like an idiot.

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs Fᴏʀ ᴘʟᴏᴛ ᴛᴡɪsᴛs ᴀɴᴅ ᴀᴛᴛʀᴀᴄᴛɪᴏɴ.
-10/10

You expressed in author note that story would be boring at first but in near ending it is going to be exciting. Let me tell you, every single plot since the beginning is hella interesting and eye-opening and they never failed to shock me. Even if you wrote 100 chapters, I don't think I would get bored. I don't understand why you think that. I'm wondering what will happen to the readers after reading the exciting plot you was talking about.

The idea is brilliant, to know Yoon Min died on exactly same day of Jin's birthday. It interested the readers to read more and find out what happened. Jin and Yoon Min first meeting was so thrilling and tense, I was literally holding my breath while reading it. New things such as Dream travel, reincarnation, Ozul Vex, Rare purple diamond and a magical golden wand, every new plot twist was amazing.

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴇᴍᴏᴛɪᴏɴs ᴀɴᴅ ᴄʜᴀʀᴀᴄᴛᴇʀ ᴅᴇᴠᴇʟᴏᴘᴍᴇɴᴛ.
-9/10

The emotions are well-delivered through the words. Your words holds so much power, I think suicidal rates will decrease if everyone read your book. Yoon Min teleported to the Earth numerous time but only two times you mentioned what actually happened there and the victim stories you wrote might be relatable to some readers (I hope no one goes through any bad time) they may also feel reassured by couraging words of Yoon Min when she talked to the victim.

I love how you describe Yoon Min's feeling when she saw Jin for the first time, the pain was felt through the words even though right before that it was exciting when Ella talked about Kim Seokjin and then the excitement was at the peak when 7 of them entered cafeteria at same time but then got little replaced by big shock when she suddenly start feeling the pain. You are really great when it comes to make readers feel rollercoaster of emotions. In chapter 11, when Jin cried, it was totally heart-rending and pitiful.

I first thought Yoon Min is introvert but when she went to call Seokjin for party and acted cute, I was suprised looking at her bravery and It looked bit odd. Your humour is amazing too, I laughed hard while reading drunk members part and much more.

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ᴄʀᴇᴀᴛɪᴠɪᴛʏ ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴀʏ ᴏғ ᴡʀɪᴛɪɴɢ.
-10/10

Your writing skills is so perfect. It is detailed, smooth, easy to understand and imagine it. The way you describe things are really felt through your writing and I occasionally got goosebump while reading your book. The Prologue is soo moving, mind-blowing, impactful and heart-warming. It's totally a words of healings and comfort for the readers. I was literally astonished and speechless when I read that.

I have to admit your imagination is brilliant looking at how you described the beauty of Love Universe when Yoon Min appeared there. The description of scenery and everything was so magical and creative. It was shocking too and I was totally in awe with your imagination plus I really love how you described Yoon Min appearance in chapter 6.

|- ①⓪ ᴍᴀʀᴋs ғᴏʀ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏᴘɪɴɪᴏɴ ᴏɴ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏᴏᴋ.
-10/10

The masterpiece is so precious, it should get more recognition among readers and in upcoming future, I can tell it will... I'm feel really grateful to the Author for writing this book, don't ever unpublish it. I would even pay money to buy this book to read it. You wrote author note in chapter 8 that you think your writing skills are deteriorating... no it isn't.

Some lines hit really hard,
1."The dead heart which was aching like crazy, now dozed off to sleep."
Reviewer: It hit really hard
2."There was a strong urge in her mind to kiss this million dollar face"
Reviewer: I wasn't suppose to laugh lol, and the writing style is amazing
3."As if his eyes had a story and he was telling her that. As if he wanted her to know he is Him"
Reviewer: I literally got goosebumps.
4. Chapter 6, Beomgyu's example of tree "What if the trees refused to let go of their dead leaves?
Reviewer: Your book is full of facts and healing words. I'm speechless.

TOTALS MARKS: 85/100

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