I tried to do a mildly haunting poem; thoughts?

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The girl over there,
Do you see her?

The one with beautiful hair,
Fluttering in the air.

The girl over there,
Do you see her?

With graceful pretty movement,
Like a dancer on this empty pavement.

The girl over there,
Do you see her?

With pale white skin,
And a sadistic grin.

The girl over there,
Do you see her?

Calling to the children quietly,
Who all follow her blindly.

The girl over there,
Do you see her?

She not there anymore,
She's gone.

And so are the kids,
Who listened to her song.