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Legend of the Stars
By LegendsoftheStars

Reviewer: The_Scarlet_Writer

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Cover/title: 9/10

- I love the title; it's simple but really catchy.
The cover is good, very interesting too.

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Blurb: 9/10

- I think the blurb is very catchy as well. Straight to the point and no useless details.

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First chapter: 9/10

- It was a really lovely start, one that kept me on my toes with all the fighting. (Not that I'm complaining, aha)

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Grammar/punctuation: 8/10

- Some sentences are a little bit too short and can be connected by a comma, or a ";", or even with a connective word.
Your grammar is great, nice job.

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Vocabulary: 10/10

- The descriptions ate absolutely amazing and the vocabulary is perfectly chosen.

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Plot/Pacing: 9/10

- I need to say here that I loved the prologue. At first, I had thought it would be a whole text of just confusing information, but instead, I got a glimpse of their history, how their world came to be. It was pretty interesting to say the least.
The progress of the plot was very nice and exciting too.

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Characters/character development: 9/10

- I was able to connect with the main character, and his actions showed a lot about him as a person; I got the feeling that he's witty, brave, adventurous and kind.

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Originality: 10/10

- We can easily establish that the whole thing is really creative, and original too.

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World building:9/10

- I feel like you built a whole world from scratch, starting with giving them history, including gods, adding magic, and creating a legend of your own.

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Imagery: 9/10

- It was pretty much easy to imagine and I had fun trying to imagine myself in similar situations.

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Overall: I think you're doing a good job. Don't let up and keep going!

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