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Life
By: Prarthana_dinesh

Reviewer: The_Scarlet_Writer

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Cover/Title: 9/10

- The title is very simple but also pretty interesting.
- I really like the cover, it's so nice!

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Blurb: 9/10

- I think the blurb is really cute, especially the first two lines.

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First Chapter: 8/10

- In my opinion, the first chapter is a nice start for a book of this kind, starting with the types of humans.

- There are though some technical remarks that I'll be focusing on in the rest of the review.

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Grammar/Punctuation: 7/10

- I think the punctuation needs a little bit of work, such as linking a couple of very short sentences together if they complete the same idea.

- You don't have too many grammatical mistakes, and the ones that you do have can easily be fixed with thorough editing. For example, in the chapter about "fears" : "being drown" should be "being drowned" or "drowning".

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Vocabulary: 7/10

- Overall, you have a wide range of vocabulary, but I do advise you to make sure you don't have too many repetitions, such as in chapter "words", paragraph 5, you used the word "same" many times in a row.

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Plot/Pacing: 9/10

- I like the pacing of the book in general; we started with an introduction and then kept going into deeper subjects the further we got through the chapters.

- As for the chapters themselves, I like how you start each one by posing the problem, then listing some arguments and examples, until we reach a conclusion.

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Character/ Character development: 9/10

- I feel a development in your words, a progression of thoughts and beliefs. The more I read, the more I realise stuff I never thought about before.

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Originality: 9/10

- It is rare to see such a book on wattpad, and I'm glad you had the courage to write one like that; God knows many of us need it.

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World building: 9/10

- If you keep on going like this, you'll have yourself a beautiful community of kind people supporting each other through their hard times. This is the most important thing in my opinion.

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Imagery: Neutral

- I feel like I shouldn't write anything here since this is a book of real life situations where imagination has no place.

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Overall: I think your book is really good, and just needs some editing xx.

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