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Something's Left
By: papersxpen

Reviewer: The_Scarlet_Writer

Cover/title: 9/10

- The cover is really nice! I like it a lot. Same for the title. Great start!

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Blurb: 10/10

- The blurb is amazing. Very creative too!

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First chapter: 9/10

- Let's consider the first poem as a first chapter: if this is how the book will go on, I'm so down for it! I liked the style of the poem, and it was very cute, I swear it made me smile.

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Grammar/punctuation: 8/10

- Now I won't comment here because I know how to write poems. Sometimes we need to break the rules.
And as you said in your note, it's raw and heartfelt.

Vocabulary: 9/10

- You have a beautiful way of playing with your words, and you choose them appropriately.

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Plot/Pacing: 9/10

- There is no plot here since it's not a story, but the flow of each poem is very smooth and interesting. I also like the fact that you targeted some things/situations that we all go through at some point.

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Characters/character development: 10/10

- Another part where I didn't know what to write, haha. So I considered myself a character in your poems, and felt the words moving something in me. I was able to relate to them and feel everything you want us to feel.

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Originality: 9/10

- It's obvious that your poems are original and coming from the heart of someone who's passionate and true to himself.

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World building: 9/10 x Imagery: 9/10

- I thought I'd combine these two here since they are related. While reading each poem, I was able to sink in them and just focus on the words I'm reading. I'd say it was a success.

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Overall: Great job! I enjoyed reading your poems!

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