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Watched
By: GinaGreendale

Reviewer: SilentLover0224

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Title/Cover: 10/10

- Very catchy and creative title.

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Blurb: 10/10

- I love how mysterious it is! The watcher becoming the watched totally sold the idea. Great job!

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First Chapter: 10/10

- You were able to describe the situation perfectly! I could see that Daisy was truly stalking Bethany, and that she was in love too.

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Grammar/Punctuation: 9/10

- There are some minor mistakes, but you really have to look for them to see them.

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Vocabulary: 10/10

- Good word choices! They fit perfectly into your sentences.

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Plot/Pacing: 10/10

- The events happen when they need to, and not a moment sooner.

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Characters/Character development: 9/10

- Some characters are rough around the edges, but they are well thought out, and replayed perfectly.

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Word building/Structure: 9/10

- Again, there are some minor mistakes, but you'd have to look for them.

Imagery: 10/10

- I could see the world you were describing!!! It was like I was living it!

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Overall: I really enjoyed reading this! Keep up the good work!

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