Title: Bride to Three
Author: Angelsanya
Genre: Romance
Chapters: 6

Summary

Luna is engaged to her the love of her life James. But on their wedding day not one, but three Jameses show up at the alter.

Cover/Blurb

The idea behind the cover is good, but the execution isn't great. It's really blurry. The blurb is ok.

Grammar

It's not great. There are a lot of mistakes, and even when things are grammatically correct they often don't flow, or make sense.

Characters

Luna doesn't have much of a personality, she just kind of does what the plot needs her to. James is three different people but they are all pretty bland. The other characters all blur together.

Plot

The plot idea is really interesting. I'm not a romance fan but this seems like it could be a great romcom. Unfortunately it doesn't really make sense in this book. Luna reaction to the situation "Luna was taken to a hospital. Her blood pressure was high due to which she fainted. She was given medicines and she was taking rest." Then she just starts talking to her friend, and we find out that nobody but her even saw so much as a photo of James before the wedding, because she likes surprises. During this whole book she never seems to respond to anything in a normal human way which really ruins any plot emulsion.

Final Thoughts

I think with some editing this could be a great book. I'd personally suggest that maybe the author get a beta reader.