-and then they lived happily ever after.

Or did they?

I call upon Harm18Rma LPKnitsand knettle . Thank you so so so much

LPKnits your quick judgement made me publish the results before the last date of submission . Thank you❤❤

Hey participants,go and checkout their books,make them friends because they are the treasure you got from this awards!!!

Yo JessieZhu 0liviaRose436 Rikara_sk omlata18 Ahseya_aye almightycreator123 SnFusion Shandy2416 Unknownverse123 astropatche_moon jiyarani BookLover-04 starringastraea Confused_Soul_Kriya and starringastraea peeps out there!
Your books were amazing that I felt I should train how to get ideas for short stories from you all!!

Here are the results^_^

Scores in first round:

%The knock on the walls (https://my.w.tt/OfRoFYPglcb)
almightycreator123

Title: 5/5
Blurb: 3/5
Chapter: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Grammar : 10/10
Writing skills: 10/10
Engagement: 9/10
Total = 57/60
Review: The story is short and sweet. The main idea of the story was well conveyed. Well written with rich vocabulary. Grammar was perfect. You've beautifully played with words making it sound apt and... perfect. Your book will do great once it comes into view. I'd suggest you to add more tags (important keywords of the story) that you think describes the story. And as for the story description, you can add a few more words into it, giving a reader reasons to click on "read".

%Living a lie (https://my.w.tt/hiy87sMglcb)
@astropatche_moon

Title : 5/5
Blurb : 2/5
First chapter: 10/10
Grammar : 9/10
Plot: 9/10
Writing skills: 5/10
Engagement: 10/10
Total = 50/60
Review: The one line blurb does not give much idea on what's inside the book. Maybe you can add an authors note below. It's poetry really. It's well written and relatable. Grammatical errors have been highlighted. At first sight it looked like the longest short story, until I started reading. To be honest, that's the reason I read it last. 30 parts for short story is too much content for the genre (that's what the reader thinks from outside). Most of the time after 2 parts the add interrupts, destroying the flow. And I believe most of the wattpadders don't have premium. I'd actually like to know the reason why each line is in each part before I recommend you to move all of 30 parts to 1 part.

%Why did she cry? (https://my.w.tt/EfhThaLglcb)
Unknownverse123

Title: 4/5
Blurb: 5/5
Chapter: 7/10
Plot: 9/10
Grammar: 8/10
Writing skills : 9/10
Engagement: 10/10
Total= 52/60
Review : To begin with title: I really didn't get the part with, 'and other short stories' when there is only one story. Specifying the birthday would make sense as to what impact it had on her. Was she too young? Or old enough to understand the gravity of the situation? The chapter needs a proof-reading for grammatical errors and punctuation. It's feel kinda strange that they lived in the same village but never met her grandmother. Instead you could add that they don't meet often. Or specify the various reasons as to why they never met. I think that would give more shape to the story. Think from grandmother's point of view: there are rumors of her daughter's death, and she hasn't tried to confirm? Give a thought to that.
You can divide the last para into 2-3 paragraphs. The story concept was great. The story had my full attention. I loved how it was thought provoking. The language is good, though you can edit it. You can add more tags (preferably with short words). I think that's all the things I could point out for the constructive feedback. These are from my point of view, but surely it's up to you what you do with it. In the end if I've hurt you with any comment, I'm sorry. (I have individually marked all these points in the story as comments, do refer for exact location).

Destiny united us (https://my.w.tt/P4Ue2yNglcb)
Shandy2416
Title : 5/5
Blurb : 4/5
First chapter: 7/10
Plot: 9/10
Grammar : 8/10
Writing skills: 8/10
Engagement: 7/10
Total = 48/60
Review: The blurb can be rewritten. Story needs editing for grammatical errors. The vocabulary was normal, but you can improve. The first incident that night showcased well - the struggles of being an orphan. A great start to the little love story.

5. What's this feeling (https://my.w.tt/PrZbQUOglcb)
SnFusion
Title: 4/5
Blurb: 3/5
First chapter: 6/10
Plot: 5/10
Grammar: 6/10
Writing skills: 6/10
Enjoyment: 7/10
Total = 37/60
Review : The Blurb gave away the character traits that the readers are supposed to find in the story, this makes her more pridictable. If you want to mention those, you can subtly, in a way that's not direct and does not describe her completely.

Your selection of words is not really apt to the situation, so I would recommend you to keep editing it in every few months. (When you grow, you absorb everything around you, in a few months you start seeing the mistakes you made sometime ago which you didn't see it back then, that's the time you have to edit). Grammatically, you are mixing present with past tense. You can use more words from your vocabulary. You are jumping one month ahead after every chapter which gets a lil annoying to digest. The story was nostalgic, the behavior of the main character completely matched the life of a sixth-grader (which is a plus). I have highlighted and commented advises throughout the first few chapters I've read, so check them out for a detailed feedback. In the end, if any of my comments have hurt you, I'm sorry, but this is my point of view.

Book : Their Insecure Sub by jiyarani

Title:4 /5
Blurb: 3.5/5
First chapter:7 /10
Plot: 7/10
Grammar: 8/10
Writing skill:8 /1Title: /5
Blurb: /5
First chapter: /10
Plot: /10
Grammar: /10
Writing skill: /10
Enjoyment while reading: /10
Total:43.5/60
This story is really new and the title is very mush suitable. Work on some spellings and grammar. And it’ll be good

Book : A Whimsical at Mussoorie by Confused_Soul_Kriya

Title:4.5 /5
Blurb:4 /5
First chapter:7 /10
Plot: 7/10
Grammar:7 /10
Writing skill:8 /10
Enjoyment while reading: 7/10
Total=44.5 /60
This is a lovely story that’s inspired from YJHD. That’s an awesome movie. And so is your story. You need to present it well. Align it well.

Book : The Curse Of a Prima Ballerina  starringastraea

Title:4.5 /5
Blurb: 4/5
First chapter:9 /10
Plot: 8.5/10
Grammar:8 /10
Writing skill:8.5 /10
Enjoyment while reading: 8.5/10
Total= 51/60

This is my most favourite. You have used amazing words here and it emotionally conveys the MC’s  love for ballet dance. I really enjoyed it a lot. It’s superb. You can try to evolve it into a novel tho. I really loved it.

Scores in first round:

#1 Lypophrenia by JessieZhu
Title:5 /5
Blurb:5/5
Ist Chapter:10/10
Plot:10/10
Grammar:10/10
Writing Skill:9.5/10
Enjoyment:9/10

TOTAL: 58.5/60
Review: The first chapter was awesome and the writing skills were amazing but a few typos here and there could have been taken care of. Plot is something not a lot of people look up to for writing about. So a very nice try.

#2 Pebbles:A collection of Short stories by 0liviaRose436
Title:5 /5
Blurb:4/5
Ist Chapter:10/10
Plot:10/10
Grammar:10/10
Writing Skill:10/10
Enjoyment:10/10

TOTAL: 59/60
Review: This one actually should go to wattys. And if it did, it would nail all the rest of peoples'. The first story, 'Seven Sisters' got me hooked and I felt like I was reading the work of a 19th century writer. Amazing work. But the blurb could have been better.

#3 Tum nahi samjhogi by Rikara_sk
Title:4.5/5
Blurb:3/5
Ist Chapter:10/10
Plot:10/10
Grammar:10/10
Writing Skill:9.5/10
Enjoyment:10/10

TOTAL: 57/60
Review: Very well written. I could actually relate to the things from the show and I loved it. Yes I was also a hardcore Rikara and Shivika fan. But you need to update the blurb. It needs to give people an idea of what they are about to find. And Hindi parts were just like Gauri and Omi would have said. Good Job.

#4 Wings: Collection of short stories by omlata18
Title:5/5
Blurb:4/5
Ist Chapter:9/10
Plot:10/10
Grammar:9/10
Writing Skill:9/10
Enjoyment:9/10

TOTAL: 55/60
Review: The writing could've been better and grammar errors could have been taken care of. But the plot and title are definitely amazing.

#5
Title:5 /5
Blurb:4.5/5
Ist Chapter:9/10
Plot:9/10
Grammar:10/10
Writing Skill:9/10
Enjoyment:9/10

TOTAL: 55.5/60
Review: Blurb could've been better. There were a bit typos and grammatical errors and it was confusing. I liked that you tried writing like a 19 th century English writer but it turned to a bit confusing in the end.

Now announcing the 1st 2nd n 3rd places
3rd place -
Why did she cry?
B

y Unknownverse123
Scoring 46.5/60 In final round

2nd place-
The Curse of Prima Ballerina
By starringastraea
Scoring 51/60 in final round.

1st place-
The knock on the walls
By almightycreator123
Scoring 53.5/60 in final round

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