A New Kind Of Happiness

Author: awriterthatwrites

••O2L--Samuel "Sam" John Pottorff/O2L••

My Opinion:

This was actually really cute but really eventful. There was so much that went on that it was crazy. I really liked it but there needed to be a tad less going on at one time. There was too much going on at one time and it kind of threw it off. Overall it was good but needed to be less cheesy and more realistic. I think that Sam is a sweetheart so this needs to be less nasty and deceiving and more fluff between the two main characters. They needed to be more faithful and less unfaithful. It throws it off. This also made Jc look really rude and Connor be more awkward than he really is. Trevor is really weird but still a kid. Kian is made too be really flirty but also mean at one part. Now I know I don't know much about him but, Ricardo is made out to be a horrible person. Kian looks like he has anger issues and that's not really a good thing but it make the whole thing thrown off.

Listening To:

Carnival-Ghost Town