Om niwas
Everyone gathered to celebrate amrit's haldi function
Amrit has been made to seat in the swing
Mogar tried to create a scene by deliberately pushing the thaal Or plate of haldi from raj rani's hand but as usual our randheer beta came on time and save the thaal from touching the ground, how can he let anyone to play with the beautiful smile on her amrit's face
M- trying to cover up her deeds oye rab rab rab iss kudi n bacha liya nhi toh aaj meri pyaari bhatiji k itne shubh din m merese apshagun hi ho jaana tha mainu maaf krdo parjai ji hai aur amrit puttar Tu bhi ha.
R- safely placing the thaal in mogar's hands o ji ab aap n dhyaan s chaliyega agar agli baar galti ho gyi n toh shayad dulhe raja hi aake aapse apni hone wali votti k aansuon ka hisab lene na lag jae
M- oye rab rab rab bohot jubaan chlti h teri toh
R- o ji raanjhan ji ki kahaniyon ko bohot pasand krti hu main aur un hi main s ek m padha h k kudiyon ki aankhon m kade aansun nhi aane chaiye aur yeh bhi k kade bhi kisi ki khushiyon ko jaan bujh kr nazar nhi laga ni chaiye paap lgta h ab aap thode hi yeh paap krna chahti hongi ji
M- hain main kyu paap krne lagi

the rasam started with rajrani applying haldi to amrit
Ra- kinni soni lg rhi h meri bacchi kisi ki nazar n lge teri khushiyon ko
Savita"randheer's mum" (S)- aap chinta mt kijiye samdhan ji hamare baccho ki khushiyon ko kisi ki nazar nhi lagegi aur agar lg bhi gyi n toh "eyeing mogar" jhaadu s maar maar k utaar dungi saari buri nazar
Ra- ji baat bilkul sahi kahi aapne hamare bacchon ko jitna sehna tha seh liya ab toh main bhi kisi ko inki khushiyon k bich nhi aane dungi phir chahe mujhe bhi belan ku n uthana pade
S- o ji yeh ki n aapne savita raizada ki samdhan wali baat
While here our amdheer are like thu thu inki iss jodi ko kisi ki nazar n lge

The rasam continued followed by randheers mum and all the ladies of house finally udheers turn came
R "applying haldi lovingly" Bhagwan aapke chehre ki yeh raunak hamesha aise hi barkaraar rkhe
To raajraani Waise ji maine suna h ki agar hone wali dulhan kisi shaadi shuda aurat ko apne haatho s haldi lagaye toh dulhe aur dulhan ki baaki ki zindagi bohot khushnuma guzarti h toh kya aap mainu laga dengi
Ra- " Caressing randheers ghunghat m band hairs lovingly" itni choti umar m itni vaddi vaddi baatein aur rasmon ka gyaan h tujhe , meri beti de vaaste inna socha tune bhagwan tujhe saari khushiyan de
R- ji shukriya
Ra- amru puttar laga de
A- ji mummyji, to randheer ji aap apna ghunghat uthaiye main lga deti hu
R- ji nhi aap bas mere haathon m laga dijiye agar ghunghat utha diya n toh anarth ho jaega
A- ji thik h
And with that amrit applied a little paste to her to be husbands hands completing the rasam

U- to vashma aap aaj badi sohni lg rhi ho ji yeh thodi haldi aapke khushi s chamakte chehre k naam
Both of then left the place
U- o baal baal bache lekin jo bhi boliye mazaa bohot aaya
Pehli baar auraton ki yeh haldi wali rasam dekhi maine ha shuru m thoda dar jarur lga lekin apni vashma ko jb maine haldi lagayi n toh saara darr chla gya, o ji yeh pal main kbhi nhi bhulunga
R- main bhi nhi aur yeh tumhaare bina bilkul nhi ho pata thank you meri amrit s milne m madad krne k liye
U- o ji yeh thankyou bolke toh aapne mujhe par aaya kr diya
Sach kahun n toh bohot logo ko jaanta hu main ji par apna dost kehne ka haq sirf kuch ko hi deta hu aur aapne yeh haq kamaaya h
Shukriya meri jindagi main ek dost ki kami ko pura krne k liye
R- hugging him tune toh dil jeet liya yaar aaj yeh randheer raizada tujhse pure sacche man s waada krta h ki tera yeh dost cum jija tere saath hmesha khada rhega chahe musibatein choti ho ya badi tum hamesha mujhe apne paas paoge uday sahani
U- vaise jis kaam k liye itna bada khatra mol liya tha ho gya n woh
R- kaha jaise hi amrit s baat krne wala tha vaise hi tumne bula liya
U- ab kya krenge aap
R- tu chinta mt kr dekhta hu, ab chl k pehle apne original avatar m aate h agar kisine hamare baare m zyada puch tach ki toh laalaji maar dalenge hume

Vashmay's room.
Uday enters in his room, while vashma is busy cleaning haldi applied in her neck and she spots a bangle in his hand
V- oye uday tere haath p yeh chudi kya kr rhi h
U- woh main dekh rha tha k mere haath m yeh chudi kaisi lg rhi thi
V- oye bewakoofiyan apni tarah samjha h mainu h sach sach bol kya kaand kiya h tune aur yeh chudi kaha s aayi
U- vashma tu galat
V- ek second tum dono hone wale saale aur jija aaj saath m gayab the, dono ajeeb harkatein kr rhe ho aur aaj woh do auratein bhi badi ajeeb harkatein kr rhi thi aur unme s ek n mainu haldi bhi lagayi kahi tm dono toh nhi the n
U- nhi nhi hm auratein kaise ban skte h kuch bhi n vashma
V- oye khabardaar jo jhuth bola h tune taange tod denj h maine teri
V- oye randheer n sikhaya tenu acting krna h jldi bol tu bolta h ki
U- main sach keh raha hoon
V- toh khaa meri kasam
U- pehle tu vaada kr shaanti s sunegi aur bilkul nhi chillaegi aur maaregi bhi nhi
V- thik h nhi maarungi lekin Tu sach bolega samjha
Uday narrated the whole story to her..
V- oye dekh randheer kaise pyaar ka izhaar krta h aur tu tujhe toh maine khud apne ghar aane k liye bola tha lekin tune mana kr diya keh ke ki nhi Maine nhi aana h agar bauji ya kisi n dekh liya to have chittar pad jaenge.
U- oye shaant ho jaa meri dil ki sehzaadi aaj aa gya n main aur haldi bhi laga di tenu aur ab Tu bhi gussa chodd aur mainu haldi laga de
V- oye lekin mere paas toh haldi hi nhi h main kaise lagau
U- eyeing the haldi still applied on her neck oye yeh hai n maine caressing her nape sensuously and then kissing that part of her neck isse hi kaam chla lena h
V- feeling weak in her knees u.d.a..y going other side and blushing profusely chodh mainu shaadi wala ghar h kisine dekh liya toh panga ho jaana h
U- making her close to him by holding her bare waist as she's wearing a saree oye jhalliye kisi n dekh bhi liya toh bhi ki ho jaana h apni votti k saath hu kisi dusri aurat k saath nhi
Trying to kiss her Aur ab mainu tujhe pyaar krne de
Ra- loudly from downstairs vashma puttar kithe h chetti aa
V- ji aayi taiji
Ab kr pyaar iss kamre s aur mainu jaane de vadda aaya pyaar krne wala

Shaadi day
Om nivas main gate
A man entered while lalaji was busy instructing the decorations walas
Lalaji(l) oye tu toh wahi jawaan h n jo vashma ki saheli ki diary waapas krne aaya tha
R- ji ji
It's our randheer in the disguise of the famous taange wala
L- aaj kiska saaman wapas krne aaya h huh
R- o ji aaj kuch dene nhi lene aaya hu
L- mtlb ki h tera
R- o ji kaam lene aaya hu suna h aaj aapki beti ki shaadi h aur aap jaise itne bade aadmi k ghar agar thoda kaam mil jata toh badi meherbaani hoti ji aapki
L- accha thik h ruk
Calls bhaanu
Oye puttar isse kuch agar krwana h toh krwa le bhala aadmi h kaam ki talaash m aaya h
Bh- Ji thik h
Bhanu has been explaining him work when vashma entered and randheer n maara mauke pe chauka
R- o ji asaalevalekum
V- ji vaalekumasalam
R- pehchana nhi ji aapne
V- nhi
R- ajji pehchchanengi bhi kaise pure 6 mahine jo ho gye, aapko yaad h pure din baahar khada tha aapki saheli ki diary wapas krne k liye bhul gyi lgta h
V- yaad aaya! Yaad aa gya ji
Bh- vashma Tu janti h ise
V- ji veerji aap nu yaad h 6 mahine pehle yeh banda diary dene itthe aaya tha tayaji n toh bechare ko bohot fatkaar sunayi lekin bechara diary wapas kr k hi gya bada hi sharif aadmi h yeh
Bh- yeh toh badi acchi baat h accha koi kaam h tujhe usse
V- ji praaji amrit k kamre k baahar bohot saare gande gadde pade h isse saaf krwa lete h
Bh- thik h
Verandah in front of amrit's room

R- trying to tease her waise yaad h n aapko kaise aapne hamara gala daboch diya tha jb ap mere tonga m baithi thi
V- seeing him with narrowed eyes ji vaddi changi tarah s yaad h aur yeh bhi yaad h ki woh tonga wala kon tha toh ab mudde p aate h jis kaam s aap yaha aaye h n uss kaam ko krne m sirf main hi aapki madad kr skti hu lekin uske badle main kimat chukani padegi
R- trying to impress her with his words ji aap toh bas hukum kijiye yeh randheer raizada apni ek lauti saali k liye kuch bhi krega aakhir aapki hi wajah s toh meri prem kahaani safal ho paayi h reminiscing the day he was able to hear his amrit's acceptance for their love only because of this girl in front of him for which he'll always be grateful to her agar aapne uss din amrit k dil ki baat mujhe nhi sunayi hoti toh shayad aaj n shaadi ho rhi hoti aur n main yun aa paata
V- ab bas kijiye aur andar jaiye sirf 15 minute h aapke paas jo krna h kr lijiye yaha pr main pehradaari krti hu
Amrit's room

Like every other girl our amru is reminiscing all the moments she has lived in her maternal home

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2TZvDD-QW9Y

Amrit's thoughts
Ek kamra jo subah ki angdaai k saath hi mehak jaaya krta tha

Ek aangan joh paanv padte hi chehak jaaya krta tha
Ek maa jisse lipat k main ghanto ro skti thi
Ek god jispe sar rkh ke main barso so skti thi
Chuth rhi thi
Ek aaina jo chup rehke bhi mujhse bohot kuch kehta tha
Ek chaand jo raat hote hi mere khidki p chla aata tha
Ek taanga jo do aane main mujhe puri lahore ki sair krata tha
Chuth rha tha
Randheer enters while our amrit is in her own family land
R-Kya soch rhi h meri amrit
Kyu h meri amrit itni pareshaan
A- Aisa lg rha h jaise main apni pehchaan
Yaha chodh k jaa rhi hu
R- Agar main kahun ki abhi toh aapki mulaakat aapki asli pehchaan s hone wali h toh? ?
Amrit main aapse waada krta hu ki iss aazad ho rhe hindustaan me main aapko har uss baat ki aazaadi dilaunga jiski aap hakdaar h
Aur sbse pehle toh main puri duniya ko cheekh cheekh k bataunga ki aap hi woh raanjhan h joh hazaaro ladkiyon k sapne apni kahaniyon main itni khubsurti s boonti h
Aur uske baad main aapke har uss sapne ko pura krunga joh aap dekhne s darti aayi h
Amrit main aapko itna pyaar dunga itna pyaar dunga k aapko khud se jalan hone lagegi
A- randheer yeh sb toh theek h lekin aap yaha kaise aaye aap jaao agar kisiko pata chl gya n toh aafat aa jaani h
R- aisa kuch nhi hoga kyuki baahar meri saali saahiba meri Pehradaari kr rhi h aur rhi baat kisiko pata chlne ki toh proudly ji iss tangewale ka itihaas bohot kam hi log jaante h aur holding her arms khush kismati s dono meri madad kr rhi h

R- making her seat in her swing aur ab aap zara baithiye, kuch dena h aapko
A- haa lekin ki
R- making her seat comfortably while he settled in the ground by keeping his one knee on the ground Aree aap Bethiye toh sahi yeh dena h aapko

Showing her the payal
A- yeh paayal
R- ji yeh paayal ,kehne ko toh sirf ek khanakti hui chiz h lekin mere liye humesha apka pratiroop rahi h jb aap muskurati toh din bhar iss payal ko dekh k muskurata rehta tha, jb bhi aap gussa ho jaati thi toh iss payal s aapki shikaayat krke apne man ko halka kr leta tha main, aur jb bhi aap mujse door chli jaati toh iss payal ko dekh k aapko paane ki umeed ko duguna kr leta tha, yeh woh payal h amrit jisne hmesha aapke liye mujhe chuna bhale hi hamara safar kaisa bhi ho hamesha aapko mere aur kareeb leke aayi h yeh paayal
Taking her ankletless foot on his knee Aaj main aapko yeh paayal isiliye de rha hu kyuki main chahta hu ki meri dulhan hamare iss pyaar ki nishaani ko apne saath hamare sabse bade din m pehne aur ise bhi saath pheron k saath hamare saath jod le
Making her wear the paayals lovingly

waise bhi aaj s toh yeh paayal aur iss paayal ko pehenne wali ko hamesha hamesha k liye mera ho jaana h
A- adoring him and feeling ecstatic yeh sb bilkul ek sapne jaisa lg rha h nhi jis ladki ko khwaab dekhne ki azaadi tk nhi thi aaj uski shaadi uske sapnon k randheer raizada s hone wali h
R in tangewala accent
Ajji maine sache mann s dua maangi thi ki raanjhan aur randheer raizada ek ho jaye toh rab ji n toh pura krna hi tha
Waise kl haldi ki rasam m kaafi sundar lg rhi thi aap
A- ha pr aapne kaise
R- in a woman accent o ji itni jldi kaise bhul gyi aap ji
Kl kamre s lene bhi toh main hi aayi thi n
A- astonishingly aap woh ghunghat wali aurat banke aaye the
R- putting his fingers on her lips shh itni jor s mt boliye warna koi sun lega
Seeing her getting embarrassed he spilled the beans Waise ankhein bandh thi meri.
Randheer wanted to tease her seeing her her cheeks as red as a rose but decided against it as he very well knows that her innocent love will not be able to handle more
Vashma knocks the door and enters
V- ab jaana hoga aapko hone wale jijaji lekin koi baat nhi aaj raat pure haq k saath meri saheli ko apni votti banane aa jaiegaaur aaj k baad toh aap dono hamesha k liye ek ho hi jaenge
R- taking back steps ji thik h aaj amrit sahni ko hamesha hamesha k liye amrit randheer raizada banane zarur aaunga
Eyeing amrit lovingly
Mera intezaar lijiega
Amrit is blushing all the time
Seeing amrit's blushed face
V- oye hoye hoye Kya sharma rhi h Tu aisa ki kitta tere randheer raizada n ki tera sharmana hi nhi ruk rha h
Kahi kuch aisa vaisa toh nhi kiya n usne
A- with blushed face and lowered eyes woh vashma kl subah woh mainu kamre s lene aaye the ghunghat wali aurat bankar
V- casually haa woh toh mainu pta h
A- interrogatively pata h mtlb
V- haa uday n mainu sb bata diya
A- oye woh kl n unhone covering her face with her hands meri blouse ki dori baandhi thi
V- shocked hain yeh kaise hua then amrit narrated her the whole thing
A- main ab nazrein kaise milaungi unse
V- teasingly Aree abhi toh dekh aur ki ki hota h kahi shaadi k baad usse baat krne ki hi himmat n bache tujhme
Mujhme toh nhi hui thi
A- curiously aisa ki kitta tune
V- blushingly maine kaha tere veerji n kiya tha
A- irritated by her friend oye tu saaf saaf bol paheliyaan n bujha
V- shaking her chin lovingly oye meri bholi amrit suhaag raat m
Rajrani calls her
V- yelling loudly Ji aayi taiji
A- oye vashma bl k jaa
V- apne randheer s hi puch liyo
Precap
Amdheer's wedding and bidaai and entry of a badass relative

I really need help for edits I tried a lot to add payal scenes, I wanted to add gifs of the video which I posted followed with amrit's thoughts, I also wanted to add a clear picture of amrit's paayal and I feel that my ff is not complete with all these
Pls help me..

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