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The scene starts with sharfu miya's tensed face as he's thinking how to save his janaab and bauji from this aafat bibi while the baap beta duo were sweating and shivering like small kittens hiding behind the table

The woman was coming towards them when sharfu miyan got an idea and putting that idea into actions he started producing the sound of a cat
Sh- meow meow meow
The woman jumped on her place and started screaming
The woman- billi billi yaha billi hai
Everyone hurried to her and started pacifying her....after saying amrit to go in her room mumma raizada too went their to look after the matter but got shocked seeing something or should I say seeing someone hiding behind the stairs.... She made a haww face and scanned the whole place with her eyes and got even more shocked seeing a palm behind the table where drinking water has been set up..... She understood the whole matter and to save her family's reputation said to the ladies
Sa- Woh kuch nahi humaare yaha kayi din se ek billi ne naak pe dum machaaya hua hai aap sab hall mai jaiye mai use acche se sabak sikha ke aati hu
The woman- Thik hai aur waise bhi abb toh muh dikhaai ki rasm bhi khatm ho gyi hai hum chalte hai
Sa- "agreeing with them" Ji aaiye mai aap sab ko baahar tak chod du
The ladies along with mumma raizada left the place
While here the baap beta duo heaved a sigh of relief saying
R and Ka "together" Haash chalo balaa tali
And tiptoeing went to papaji's room ignoring sharfu miya royally on the way making him annoyed
He also followed them... The baap beta duo immediately went towards the coffee table and pouring water in two respective glasses started drinking when they saw Mumma raizada's fuming face and they choked on the water feeling horrified

Woh bure haalat mai the par unse buri haalat mai bhi koyi tha... Jo iss toofan se bilkul anjaan tha.... Guys guess kon hai woh??

Ji humare sharfu miyan hi hai he was backfacing mumma raizada and was glaring the baap beta duo and thought that they choked on their water seeing him
Mumma raizada placed her palms on his shoulder to gain his attention.... But an annoyed sharfu miyan jerked it.... Mumma raizada made a haww face while the baap beta duo saw this scene with open mouths.... They were feeling extremely pity on their sharfu miyan.... Mumma raizada again placed her palm on his shoulder and this time an irritated and annoyed sharfu miyan turned around saying
Sh- Arre kon hai
Pairon tale zameen khisak gayi bechaare ki...he got a mini heart attack seeing mumma raizada's fierce eyes and screamed loudly
Sh- aaaaaa
While the baap beta duo closed their ears
....Mumma raizada fumed with anger hearing his scream.... He immediately folded his shivering hands surrendering himself to the lady don
Seeing his antics mumma raizada in a very sweet and sarcastic tone asked
Sa- Sharfu miyan kitni acchi billi ki aawaaz nikaalte hai aap.... Yeh kala abhi aayi hai ki pehle se hi thi bas hume andaaza nhi lagne diya
Sharfu miyan got more nervous and with shivering voice said
Sh- Woh.. O.. Ji mummyji meri galti nahi hai inn dono
He Turned the other side to point the baap-beta duo but got shocked seeing their fake innocent faces.... He made a haww face and immediately went towards them and pulled them and brought them to mumma raizada
Sh- "in a pleading voice" Mummy ji inki bholi surat pe na jaiye andar se shaitaan hai dono waha jaane ka idea bhi inka hi tha "pinching his throat" allah kasam mummy ji mera koi haath nahi hai isme balki mujhe toh jabardasti bali ka bakra banakar khada kar diya tha dono ne.... Maine mana bhi kiya par dono mai se kisine meri baat nahi suni

While mummy ji was keenly listening to sharfu miyan... The baap beta duo gave each other a rasta saaf hai wala look and tiptoeing were going outside the room when rrandheer and papaji hissed in pain as mummyji twisted their ears hardly
Baap-beta- "together" "Trying to save their ears" Mummy ji/ savita ji chodiye plss bohot dard ho raha hai mujhe/mainu..plss na
Still twisting their ears she said
Sa- "in a stern voice" Kya socha yun hi nikal jaenge aap dono meri changul se
Baap-beta - "innocently" lekin humne kiya kya hai
Listening them she twisted their ears more hardly and said
Sa- haiii....kiya kya hai "the baap beta screamed in pain" ek toh chori aur upar se sinaa jori haa
Baap beta- mummyji/savita ji pls chod do na bohot dukh raha hai aage se aisi galti kabhi nhi karenge
Sa- "sternly" Pakka nhi karoge
R- "in a hissing tone" Kabhi nahi abb chod dijiye warna pata chalaa aapke bete ka kaan aapki haatho mai hoga
She immediately left their ears ...the baap beta duo started rubbing their ears cutely
Sa- "strictly" Itni bhi jor se nahi khicha hai jo itne baatein bana raha hai
Ka- "still rubbing his ears" Aapko hosh kaha rehta hai kaan khichte huye bhul gayi kaise shaadi ke baad kaan khiche the mere
Listening his taunts she became raged and in a sarcastic tone with furious eyes said
Sa- Bilkul nahi bhuli hu mai ... Acche se yaad hai mujhe aur yeh bhi yaad hai "shouting" kaise pure ghar mai mujhe badnaam kiya tha bol bolke ki maine aapke kaan ko kitne teji se khicha aur abb bhi kaha baaj aaye hai aap raat din toh kehte rehte hai
Bauji gulped in fear listening her shouts and with shivering tone said
Ka- "in a guilty tone" Maaf kar dijiye na agli baar nahi bolunga aur na aisi gustaakhi karunga
R- "in a guilty tone" Haa mummy ji pakka nahi karenge
Sh- "yelling" Aap dono ko pata bhi hai ki agar aaj aap dono pakde jaate toh meri kitni badi beizzati hoti... aap dono ko toh koi kuch nahi kehta....sab mere aur amru ke jaan ke peeche padd jaate waha.... Mai toh chalo sambhaal bhi leti par meri amru ka toh yeh auratein woh haal karti na pata chala pure din sharmaati hi reh jaati meri bacchi..."pointing to randheer while he made a haww face" Pakka iski hi harkat hogi amrit ko dekhne ke liye kuch zyada hi tadap raha tha
Randheer immediately defended himself saying
R- Mere akele ki nhi thi mummy ji...bauji bhi barabar ke hissedaar the woh bhi aapko naachte huye dekhna chahte the
She got shocked hearing him and angrily asked papaji
Sa- Yeh randheer kya keh raha hai aap bhi
Caressing his nape..... Embarassedly
Ka- Abb mai kya karta aap naachte huye lagti hi itni khubsurat hai "dreamily" bilkul kisi morni ki tarah....
Mummyji blushed
While randheer cleared his throat and gave the couple a teasing smile
They became embarrassed and looked here and there
Getting into his original self he said
Ka- Tujhe amrit ke paas nhi jaana kya abhi toh nazarein nhi hatt rahi thi uss par se savita ji mai toh kehta hu acche se nazar utar dijiyega meri bacchi ki kahi isiki nazar naa lag jaaye
R- "defending himself" Bol toh aap aise rahe hai jaise mai akele dekh raha tha apni patni ko.... "In a complaining tone to his mom" Mummyji nazrein nhi hatt rahi thi inki aap par se
Not wanting to rage his wife further he immediately shouted on him
Ka- Tu jaa raha hai yaha se
Randheer smiled as he knew that it was coming but the next words he heard from his mummyji broke his heart
Sa- Ha nikal yaha se
R- "in a hurt tone" Accha hai very good meri koi izzat hi nahi hai iss ghar mai
He started leaving the room with a hope that they'll apologize to him and he'll hug them tightly and when suddenly papa raizada called him from back.... He became happy and turned around with hopeful eyes. But the words his father said disheartened him greatly

Ka- "eyeing mumma raizada romantically while she was blushing" accha darwaaza band karte huye jaana

Seeing their antics he forgot about his hurt and in a teasing voice asked
R- Accha kyu
Papa raizada immediately snapped at him
Ka- Harr cheez tujhe batana jaruri hai kya tu jaa apni votti ke paas
R- "in a teasing tone" Haa jaata hu enjoy
Ka- Nikal

He made a bad face and slammed the door lightly but became cheerful the other second thinking about his love's blushing face as he'll tease her and will get some good alone time with his wife thinking
R- Chal randheer apni votti ke paas.... Aaj toh unhe pareshaan karne mai bada maza aane wala hai

While here in mummyji-papaji's room
Lost in savita's beautiful face.... Karamchand praised her lovingly
Ka- Aaj aap badi sohni lag rahi thi bilkul pari jaisi
Sa- "Blushingly" Aur aap bhi mujhe bade hi..."pushing him hardly in a taunting tone" chor jaise lage
Karam got shocked to the core and exclaimed
Ka- Haiii
Sa- "shooting dagger with her eyes" Kya haiiii ha......woh toh baccha hai aapki akal ghaas charne gayi thi jo aa gaye itni aurato ke beech
Feeling terrified of her he immediately asked for forgiveness
Ka- Abb maaf bhi kardijiye
Sa- "in a serious tone" Abb iski maafi nhi sajaa milegi
Ka- "in a horrified tone" Sajaa kaisi sajaa
Sa- "in a strict tone" Do din tak iss kamre mai dikhaayi mat dijiyegaa
The ground slipped beneath his feet... He immediately tried to pacify her
Ka- Do din!! Nahi yeh bohot zyada hai....reham khaaiye thoda apne pati pe
Sa- "finally melting" Thik hai ek din
Ka- "greedily" Thoda aur kam kar deti toh
Sa- "innocently" Dhaai din karu??
He got shocked and said
Ka- Nahi ek din thik hai bohot hai ek din
Chal karmeya nikal jaa kamre se
He started leaving the room but turned around and looked at mumma raizada with puppy eyes.....she glared him hard .....making a disheartened face he left the room murmuring
Ka- Yaha teri daal kabhi gali hai jo aaj galegi
He also left the room to attend the guests

An elated Randheer started going to his room.... When to his dismay someone called him from back... He turned around and got shocked seeing his cousin brother and thought
R- "thinking" Aaj toh yakeen ho gaya ki yeh puri kaaynaat mujhe meri amrit ke saath romance karne nhi dena chahti hai.... Pehle hi kya meri biwi kam thi jo yeh sab bhi mere romance ke dushman bane baithe hai
His cousin came happily to him and in an elated tone said
Cousin- Aee toh badi acchi gal hoyi ki tu mil gaya raste mai
Murmuring frustaringly- Correction!!Aapke liye mere liye nhi
His cousin got confused seeing him murmuring and asked
Cousin- Kuch boleya
R- "straightening himself" Nhi ji nhi kuch bhi toh nhi... Tussi kuch bol rahe the
Cousin- Haa toh mai bol raheya si ki aa chal meri thodi madad karade......teri parjaayi bohot saara saaman le aayi hai akele uthaaunga toh kamar akad jaegi meri
R- "murmuring" Woh toh laane se pehle sochna tha na
Cousin- Arre tu phir kho gaya
R- "fake smiling" Ji nhi chaliye chalta hu mai aapke saath

R- "murmuring frustratingly" Yahi toh kaam hai mera meri biwi ko chod ke sab mujhe yaad kar lete hai
Cousin- Chal chetti
R- Ji

Meanwhile amrit who was sitting in her bed in her room got sad remembering her parents... From the morning she was busy and now when she's free..... Their memories were flooding in her mind.... She wanted to hear them now and thought
A- Bauji ne khaana samay se khaa liya hoga na......chaalees ghante ho gaye baat nhi hui unse....pata nhi kaise honge waha sab aur bauji ne samay pe dawaai khaayi hogi ya nahi..... Kaash mai auda de naal baat kar paati...."just then an idea clicked her mind" Mai abhi mummyji ya randheer ko bolti hu woh abhi hi baat karwa denge meri...."self chiding herself" Oye tu paagal hogyi hai kya niche kitne saare mehmaan hai woh kya sochenge.... "Self realizing" Haa yeh bhi hai par mujhe unki bohot yaad aa rahi hai... Kya karu
And she became sad
Meanwhile here mumma raizada with some clothes went to amdheer's room and seeing amrit's sad face kept the clothes on the bed and immediately went towards her.......caressing her hairs lovingly she asked
Sa- Puttar ki hoya sab thik haina Tu itni udaas kyu lag rahi hai
She immediately plastered a fake smile and said
A- Woh mummyji kuch nhi
Mummyji looked at her with stern yet loving eyes seeing which she couldn't control her emotions more and hugging her from waist sobbed
A- Woh mainu lahore ki yaad aa rahi hai dhed din ho gye aawaaz nhi suni hai maine kisi ki
Caressing her hairs while in hug mummyji said lovingly
Sa- Arre bas itni choti si gal aur mai bhi na gadhi hu puri kaam mai itna magan ho gyi ki dhyaan hi nahi aaya ki abhi tak teri baat nhi huyi hai tere maayke walon se.....woh log bhi kya soch rahe honge na mere baare mai ki humaari beti ko humse durr kar diya
In between the sobs she cutely said
A- Koi kuch nhi soch raha hoga waha aur aap aise khudko gadhi na bulaao.... Aap iss duniya ki sabse acchi insaan ho
She smiled and to lift his daughter's mood teasingly asked
Sa- Accha tere randheer se bhi acchi
A- "innocently" Haa unse bhi acchi tabhi toh woh itne acche hai
Sa- "teasingly" Waah ghum phirke taareef kar hi leti hai tu apne pati ki
She blushed hearing her and said
A- "blushingly" Abb woh hai hi itne acche
Sa- "teasingly" Accha bada accha hai tera "emphasizing on "woh""  woh... Mujhe bhi toh bata ki kitna accha hai tera woh
She blushed hard and said
A- Mummyji please na
Mummyji got all awe on her and warding off evil sights said
Sa- Haaye amru Tu sach mai bada pyaara sharmaati hai... Meri pyaari bacchi nazar na lage.."Amrit smiled and felt blessed as well as loved" Accha abb chal mere naal mai baat karaati hu teri tere maayke walon se
Excited mummy ji started leaving the room when amrit held her hand and said
A- Par mummyji neeche itne saare mehmaan hai woh kya sochenge
Sa- "assuring her" Oo koi kuch nahi sochega aur waise bhi sab bas jaa hi rahe hai
Just then she remembered something and slapping her own forehead said
Sa- Accha!!! yaad aaya mujhe ki mai yaha kyu aayi thi
A- Ji kahiye na
Giving the clothes to amrit lovingly
Sa- Yeh le yeh tere liye kuch suit silwaaye the Maine inme se abhi kuch pehen le
A- "in a confused tone" Par mummyji mai kaise shaadi ke baad
Sa- "lovingly...cupping her face" Puttar humaare ghar mai tujhe kisi tarah ki koi bandish na hai aur naa kabhi hogi. .. Tu iss ghar ki bahu nahi beti hai samjhi... Tujhe jo pehenne ka mann ho woh pehen.... Mujhe pata hai tu saree mai comfortable feel nhi karti.... Nhi karti na
"She nodded in a no cutely seeing which mummy ji smiled brightly" Mai bhi nahi karti thi tujhe pata hai shuruaat mai toh aisa lagta tha jaise abhi bas girr hi jaungi mai.... Tujhe toh phir bhi saarre pehenni aati hai mujhe toh utna bhi nahi aata tha.... Kitne mahino tak toh subah uthte hi daant milti thi mujhe
A- "confused" Kyu??
Sa- "giggling" Arre roz meri saasu maa ko saara kaam kaaj chod ke mujhe saaree pehnaane jo aana padta tha..."complaining about her sasu maa" Uff kitna daanti thi woh.....Mujhe toh lagta hai ki woh jo Germany mai woh hitler hai na usse bhi zyada khatarnaak thi woh... Aaj bhi woh din yaad aate hai na toh rongte khade ho jaate hai mere.. .unki yeh harkatein dekh kar na maine pehle hi faisla kar liya tha ki .mai kabhi bhi apni beti ya bahu par aisi bandishein nahi lagaungi unhe jo peheneka mann hoga jaisa pehenne ka mann hoga....mai unhe pura support karungi...aur abb tu jaldi se change kar le
She started leaving the room when amrit called her from back
A- Mummy ji
Sa- "lovingly" Ha puttar
A- "in a pleading tone" Mai yeh mehmaano ke chale jaane ke baad pehen lu.... Mai nhi chahti ki koyi humaare ghar ke baare mai bura bole
Sa- " Trying to make her understand " Par puttar unke saamne kyu nahi maine kaha tha na
She interrupted her and lovingly said
A- Maa mai jaanti hu aap kya kehna chahti hai par mai nhi chahti ki koi bhi humare ghar ke baare mai kuch bura bhala kahe aur waise bhi mere kuch der aur yeh saree pehene rehne se agar yeh rukk sakta hai toh kyu na karu
Savita felt blessed to get such a selfless girl as her daughter in law and said
Sa- Kinna sochti hai na tu humare ghar ke baare mai "sternly" par yaad rahe sirf aaj mai teri yeh marzi chalne de rahi hu agli baar logo ke liye khud ko takleef pohochane ki sochi bhi na toh yeh maa apni saas ka woh hitler wala roop le legi
A- "denying her cutely" Nahi nahi inke baare mai toh sunke hi rooh kaanp jaati hai...."hugging her lovingly from waist" Mujhe toh meri maa hi chahiye aur woh bhi humesha humesha ke liye
Savita smiled brightly and caressing her hairs said
Sa- Aur mujhe meri pyaari aur khush beti
Breaking the hug she said urgently
Sa- Accha chal ab chetti pehle hi itna intezaar karwa diya hai maine tere maaykewalon ko ab aur ek pal bhi intezaar nahi karaaungi... Chal ab chetti

A- "in a teasing voice" Ji sasu maa
Sa- "teasing tone" Ji Chaliye bahurani
They giggled lightly and left for hall

Amrit thanked God as most of the guests have already left while some of them were leaving.....she can talk freely with her family as No one's there with her except her mummy ji
Standing in front of the telephone she excitedly dialled om nivas's number and it got answered in the first ring itself as her bauji was sitting beside the phone only....he wanted to hear his laado's voice as soon as she calls him..... Her heart signalled that it's her bauji only and with longing voice she said
A- Bauji
As soon as the words left her mouth then the treacherous tears started flowing from her eyes... Seeing this mumma raizada immediately went to her and taking her in a side hug started caressing her hairs.....while here on the other side Peace ran down in her bauji's veins hearing his daughter's voice after a long gap of 40 hours... Which indeed felt like 40 years to him... With trembling voice he answered
La- Puttar
A- "sobbing" Bauji
La- "with moist eyes....lovingly" Puttar kaan taras gaye the tere piyo ke teri meethi si aawaaz sunne ko
A- "in between her sobs" Mere bhi bauji
Lalaji controlled his tears for her sake and trying his best to speak as normally as he can..he said lovingly
La- Accha rona band kar "she immediately wiped her tears" aur mainu yeh bata tu khush hai na puttar koi takleef kuch bhi nahi hai na tujhe
Hearing his words she smilingly looked at mummyji and said
A- Nahi bauji mai bohot khush hu bohot zyada bas aap logo ki yaad "she started crying with hiccups"  yaad aati hai bohot aati hai
Hearing her cries.... He also started crying a little.... Just then he felt his wife's hands caressing her shoulders... He smiled amidst the cries and said
La- Hume bhi puttar bohot aati hai ......teri aawaaz sun li na tere iss piyo nu chain aa gaya...."in a concern-filled voice" Accha yeh bata sab tujhe acche se rakhte hai na waha
She chuckled amid her cries hearing his question and said blissfully with a tint of proudness
A- Acche se nahi bauji mere saath yaha sab bohot acche se rehte hai.....bauji toh mainu bilkul aapke jitna pyaar dete hai aur mummy ji.... Woh toh bilkul bhi baaki saas ki tarah nahi hai bohot pyaar karti hai mainu....bilkul mummy ji ke jitna pyaar deti hai mujhe
Ka- "in an elated tone" Yeh toh badi acchi gal hai puttar... Dil khush ho gaya sunke.... Waise toh pata tha ki tu waha khush hi hogi pher bhi tere muh se sunke dil ko thandak peh gayi
She smiled but then again her emotions overpowered her and in a sobbing tone she asked
A- Aap kaise ho bauji
Trying hard to sound as normal as he can
La- Bilkul changa mainu ki hona hai
Listening his voice she understood that her bauji is lying for her sake and in a crying and displeased tone said
A- Jhuth bol rahe ho mere naal
Listening her voice he knew that theirs no use in hiding his emotions from her as his daughter knew him better than his own self.... And in a crying tone said
La- Oye kaisa ho sakta hu tere binaa... Teri yaad din raat aati hai mainu
A- "sobbing" Mainu bhii... Bauji mainu bohot bohot yaad aati hai aapki.. Aap sab ki
Rajrani who was getting anxious to talk to her daughter wasn't able to control herself anymore and taking the phone Or should I say snatching the phone from her husband she said
Ra- Mainu bhi gal karne do saadi bacchi de naal
La- Haa
Ra- "in a motherly concerned tone" Amru kaisi hai bacche... Tu thik hai na... Sab acche se hai na tere saath... Koi dukh... Koi takleef kuch toh nahi hai na tujhe... "Getting no answer from her daughter she snapped" Bolti kyu nahi hai
Amrit smiled listening her mother's concern but she was not letting her speak as she's firing her questions one after another and not getting any answer she snapped at her....amrit  cutely complained
A- Aap bolne hi nahi de rahe ho mainu
Listening her words rajrani got embarrassed and said
Ra- Accha abb das kaisi hai tu
A- "smiling" Bohot badhiya
Ra- "in a concerned tone" Khaana khaaya
A- Ji
Ra- Saare rasm acche se ho gye
A- Ji bohot acche se ho gye aur "happily" papa ji ki bua ji ne mainu inaam ke taur pe khaandaani haar bhi diye... Unhe mere haath ki rasoi badi changi lagi sab bohot khush huye aur bohot taareef bhi ki meri
Ra- "in a proud and elated tone" Yeh toh badi changi gal sunaayi puttar tune.... "In a concern filled voice" Accha daamad ji kaise hai tere naal
Amrit smiled and remembered how randheer takes care of her and blissfully said
A- Bohot acche... Mera bohot khyaal rakhte hai woh
La- "in a contented tone " Sunke vada changa laga puttar
A- "concernedly" Accha mummyji ghar mai sab kaise hai
Ra- "sadly" Kaise honge tere bina...tere bauji ka toh tere bina mann hi nahi lagda hai... Aaj toh vashma ne zabardasti khaana khilaa dita warna toh khaana hi nahi tha inhone
Listening her mummy ji amrit became tensed and said
A- Aap zara bauji nu phone do
Passing the phone to lalaji she said
ra- Baat karna chahti hai saadi bacchi taude naal
La- "denying like a small boy whose gonna get punishment from his mother or teacher" Na mainu pata hai tune meri shikaayat lagaayi hai aur abb woh shikshikaa bankar mujhe daantegi
Raj rani smiled seeing his antics and persuading him to talk with their daughter said
Ra- Arre kar lijiye na baat bada mann hai bacchi ka
La- "taking the phone" Thik hai laa de ..... Hello
A- "strictly" Bauji ae ki gal huyi aap khaana kyu nahi khaa rahe ho samay se
La- "complaining" Oo puttar yeh teri maa na khaama khaa kuch bhi bol rahi hai maine toh samay se khaana khaa liya
A- "sternly" Aap nu nahi lagda ki aaj aap kuch zyada hi jhuth bol rahe ho mere naal
La- "in an appologizing tone" Accha thik hai maaf karde... Maaf karde apne piyo nu
A- "in a demanding tone" Sirf maafi maangne se kaam nahi chalega waada chahiye mainu... Waada kariye ki abb se aap aisa kadde nahi karenge
La- Waada
A- "in a demanding tone" Amru wala waada
La- "smiling" Amru wala waada
She smiled brightly amidst her tears and sternly said
A- Accha thik hai aur je agli vaari aapne aisa kuch karne ki sochi na toh maine bhi yaha khaana peena chod de na hai
La- "cutely" Mera dimaag kharab ho gaya hai ki aisa karunga....."in a teasing voice" pata chala tera pati mujhe khaana khilaane lahore chala aaya bolte huye
"Mimicking randheer" Ki bauji mai aapko khaana khilaaye bina kahi nahi jaunga... Aapki wajah se meri amrit bhukhi hai.... "In his original tone yet teasing tone" Pata chala tere hisse ki daant bhi na wohi laga dega mainu
She blushed hard hearing him and changing the topic said
A- "lovingly" Aap apna khyal rakho acche se
La- Hmm aur waise bhi parso toh tu aa hi rahi hai na
A- ji bauji
An anxious Vashma who was trying hard to get the phone from tayaji couldn't handle more and anxiously said
Va- Tayaji mainu bhi gal karan do na
Everyone smiled seeing her excitement and lalaji said to amrit
La- Accha yeh le baat kar le apni vashma se kab se tadap rahi hai tujhse baat karne ke liye
A- "excited" Haa
Lalaji passed the phone to vashma...vashrit's heartbeats started increasing..... An excited  vashma with her heart thumping loudly asked
V- oye kaisi hai tu
Hearing her voice amrit was in the verge of the years but controlling said
A- mai mai toh bohot acchi hu....
The same was the case with vashma she tried hard to control her tears.... Everyone left her as they want to give these two pakki sahelis some alone time
V- haa mai bhi bohot khush hu tu nahi hai na yaha toh akele pure ghar ka saara pyaar loot rahi hu
Both giggled lightly amidst tears... Amrit in a competitive tone said
A- haa toh loot le mai bhi yaha apni mummy ji aur papaji ka dher saara pyaar loot rahi hu
V- "in a teasing voice" haa toh loot na maine bhi aaraam se tere jhule pe baithke apna kaam karna hai aur woh jo tere kitaabein shitaabein hai na usme kuch naye kartab bhi dikhaungi
A- "sternly" Dekh tu aisa kuch nahi kar rahi hai samjhi
Va- "in a determined tone" Mai toh aisa hi karungi
A- "waringly" Agar tune aisa kiya na toh.. Toh
Vashma interrupted her with a chuckle and said
Va- "in a teasing tone" Toh kya apne ghar mai ghusne nahi degi....."naughtily" Ya apne pyaare randheer se kehke daant lagwaayegi mainu
Amrit blushed but then controlling herself said in a teasing voice
A- Maine tujhe bhi apne saath yahi le aana hai wapas
Va- "in a stubborn tone" Aur je mai na aayi toh
A- "retalaiating" Aise kaise nahi aaegi rassiyon se baandh ke le aaungi mai tujhe
Va- "in a duhh tone" Tere veerji na unhi rassiyon se teri dhulaai kar denge
A- "in a teasing tone" Nahi karenge unke liye toh musibat kam ho jaegi na
V- "angrily" Oye musibat kise bola tune
A- "teasingly" Tujhe aur kise din raat mere bhole bhaale veerji nu pareshaan karti rehti hai
Va- "explaining herself" Oye mai nahi karti tera veer karta hai mainu pareshaan aur "sadly" ab toh mai acche se uski buraai bhi nahi kar paati "cutely" tujhe pata bhi hai kinni saari buraaiyan karni hai mainu uski
A- "sadly" Mujhe bhi kinna kuch batana hai
Feeling that her best friend is getting sad she controlled her tears and jovially said
Va- "in a jovial tone" Ha toh bata liyo kal aa rhi hu na mai tujhe lene
A- "excitedly" Haa maine na tujhe pura ghar dikhaana hai pata hai humaara kamra na vadda hi anokha hai woh jo London mai kamre hote hai na waisa hai
Va- "excitedly" Haaye sacchi.... Mujhse toh abb intezaar nahi ho raha... Kal pohochte hi na maine tera pura ghar ghumna hai aur bohot saari baatein karni hai tere naal
A- Mainu bhi
Va- "chirply" Accha yeh sab chod mai toh tujhe batana hi bhul gyi Maine na apni peeli salma sitara wali salwar kameez daal li hai kl na mai wahi pehnugi aur tu bhi na apni woh peeli wali gotapatti ki salwar kameez hi pehenna
A- "confused" Par kyu
Va- "slapping her own forehead and in a disbelief tone" Arre gadhi bhul gayi kya humne kya socha tha karachi mai samundar kinaare
Amrit interrupted her as she remembered the thing
A- "excitedly" Haa yaad hai na
Va- "happily" Haa toh bas dono saheliyan ek hi rang ke kapde pehen ke jaenge ghumne
A- "in a thrilled voice" haa aur hum na woh oot par bhi baithenge tujhe yaad hai humari pados ki didi ne kaha tha ki yaha ke ret mai utt chala karte hai
V- "enthusiastically" haa haa yaad hai na .... Kasam se bada maza aane wala hai
A- "excitedly" haa aakhirkaar humara woh sapna pura jo hone wala hai
V and a together- "dreamily" samandar kinaare ghoomte badalon ke beech hum chaaron

A- "in a thrilled voice" haaye mujhe toh soch ke hi itni khushi ho rhi hai na ki mai bata nhi sakti
V- "excitedly" mujhe bhi mann kar raha hai ke bass abhi udd ke tere paas aa jaau...."sadly" Tujhe pata bhi hai yaha tere bina kitna khaali khaali lagta hai mujhe
A- "sadly" toh tujhe kya lagta hai mujhe teri yaad nahi aati hai
V- "in a fake sad tone" sach bolu na toh mujhe nahi lagta ki tujhe humaari raddi bhar bhi yaad aati hogi
A- "dramatically" aur aisa kyu lagta hai tujhe
V- "in a teasing tone" isiliye lagta hai kyuki waha tere mann ko behlaane ke liye hai na tere woh... Tere saanjhan ji.... Bade hi alag alag tareeke se tere dil ko behlaate honge nahi
She blushed hard as she reminisced how randheer takes care of her makes her blush
A- "dreamily" haa woh toh hai hi.... Apni jaan se zyada mera khyaal rakhte hai woh
V- "in a teasing tone" dekh nikal gaya na tere muh se "emphasizing on woh" woh...shaadi ke pehle toh bada kehti thi ki mai randheer ko "woh" kehke nahi bulaungi sirf randheer bulaungi
Amrit blushed hard
A- "trying hard to control her blush" Arre mai toh aise hi bol rahi thi
V- "in a fun way" rehne de rehne de sab jaanti hu mai aakhir shaadi ka laddoo Maine tujhse pehele chakha hai...."excitedly" Tu aa toh sahi bohot saari gallaan karni hai humne aur keh de na "teasingly" apne unse ki ek hafte ke pehle maine waapas nhi jaane dena hai tujhe
A- "excitedly" haa toh maine konsa aana hai ek hafte ke pehle....
Just then she saw randheer and was going to call him but before that only he with a disheartened face went away.... Amrit can feel his sadness and wanted to run to him but just then vashma shouted from the other side of the phone
Va- Oye kaha kho gayi
Still wondering about randheer's sad face she just answered normally
A- Kahi nahi
Vashma was going to say something but before that she made an excuse to go to her randheer
A- "urgently" Accha maa bula rahi hai mai tujhse baad mai baat karti hu
Vashma could sense the urgency in her voice thus agreed to her
Va- Haa thik hai hum jab niklenge na toh tujhe phone kar denge
A- Haa thik hai
Va- Chal thik hai

Randheer went to the garden of his room which is now glowing more in the dusky dawn. . .. The smell of the flowers wafting in the environment making the ambience more romantic and peaceful.... He with a sad face was thinking about something 

before knowing what he's thinking let's first make you guys aware of what happened downstairs..... So here's the flashback
Flashback starts
After helping all the guests randheer was going to his room when he heard amrit's excited voice and felt happy.... He started going towards her but he got stiffened as he heard that she's going tomorrow and that too for a week.... Yeah he knew that before also but realising that she's going tomorrow only.... He got disheartened and came to his garden to get some peace....
Flashback ends
Now have a look on what he's thinking so deeply
R- "thinking" Mujhe... Mujhe itna bura kyu lag raha hai balki mujhe toh khush hona chahiye... Meri amrit kitni khush hai unhe kitni yaad aa rahi thi sabki....aur mai yaha aise kitna bura hu mai... Unki khushi mai khush nahi hu chahta hu ki woh na jaaye kahi bhi....itna selfish hu sirf apne baare mai dekh raha hu unke baare mai toh soch hi nahi raha... "Self questioning" Par tu reh paega unke bina.."self answering" Haa kyu nhi... Yaha pe sab hai.. "Self questioning in a hurt tone" Par woh thodi hogi.. ... "Self-assuring" Pehle bhi toh rehta tha na.... "Self doubting" Haa par che mahino mai ek baar bhi nahi raha hu... "Self chiding" Haa toh kya woh tere liye apne parivaar walo ke paas bhi nahi jaayengi.... "Self realising" Haa woh toh hai... "Excited" Mai ek kaam karta hu mai bhi unke saath chala jaata hu.... "Self-chiding" Accha aur jo office mai kaam pade hai unka kya.. Che mahino se office nahi gaya hai tu.... Yaha pe sabko teri zarurat hai... "Self answering" Haa toh mujhe bhi toh meri amrit ki zarurat hai na..."self chiding" Haa toh unki bhi apni ek zindagi hai na.. Kitni saari baatein unhe bataani hongi waha... Tere rehte kaise bataayengi.. "Self answering" Thik hai mai nahi jaaunga khush.... "Sadly" Khush kya dukhi hi hu abb woh nahi rahengi toh rang bhi toh nahi rahenge na teri zindagi mai... And he stood there with a sad face lost in her thoughts

Soon He felt a pair of hands crawling his torso and it didn't took a moment for him to identify those hands as his love's hands..... His life's hands... His amrit backhugged him and rested her forehead on his back soaking the serenity of this place..... He felt at home and taking her hands in his kissed them.she blushed..... Meanwhile He smiled as he could feel her blush... The red hue which would've definitely appeared on her beautiful wife's face adding more to her beauty
Still in that position amrit said
A- "lovingly" Kitna khubsurat lag raha hai na yeh sab.... Yeh shaam.....yeh phool aur hum saath
R- "gloomily" Hmm khubsurat toh hai par shaayad kl iss shaam ko mujhe akele hi bitana hoga aapse durr
She understood what's the problem and lovingly said
A- Amrit kabhi apne randheer se durr jaa sakti hai bhalaa
R- "gloomily" Jaa hi rahi hai aap kal ek hafte ke liye
A- "in an assuring tone" Hmm jaa rahi hu par aapse durr nahi
R- "confused" Matlab
She smiled and breaking the hug said
A- Matlab aaiye samjhaati hu
she pulled him with her and made him sit on the swing of their garden and herself settled beside her
A- "lovingly" Abb aap meri godd pe sarr rakh ke let jaiye
Randheer looked at her with confused eyes... She chuckled and demanded
A- Letiye na mai samjhaati hu
R- Thik hai
He laid down on the swing keeping his head on her lap.... She started caressing his silky soft hairs with her fingers feeling which he closed his eyes in pure bliss ... Amrit smiled and continuing caressing his hairs said
A- "pointing to the moon" Woh dekhiye uss chaand ko kinna sohna dikh raha hai na
R- "in a flirty tone" Hmm par aapke aage bilkul phika sa hai
She blushed hard at his comment but knowing him well that if won't stop he'll continue his teasings she in a stern tone said
A- Randheer
R- "in a defeated tone" Accha nhi bolta
A- "lovingly asked" Hmm toh aapko uss chaand mai kiska chehra dikhaayi de raha hai??
R- "confused" Amrit yeh kaisa sawaal hai
She smiled seeing his confused face and again said
A- Aap bas Dhyaan se dekhiye .. "dreamily" mummyji humesha kehti hai hum jinhe sacche mann se chahte hai hume unka chehra chaand mai saaf dikhaai deta hai
He smiled and looked closely at the moon.... His lips curved into a big smile as he saw his life's picture in it and enthralled he said
R- Ek bohot hi khubsurat chehra dikh raha hai jiski chavi mere dil ke harr hisse mai kaid hai
She blushed hearing his compliments and stared at his handsome face while randheer without shifting his gaze from the moon he said
R- "lovingly" Aur abb woh chehra pura laal ho chuka hai sharm ke maare.... Unke gaal bilkul maano gulaab se ho gye hai aur unka roop chaand ki roshni mai aur bhi gehra ho chuka hai.... Aisa lag raha hai jaise maano Aasmaan se ek pari utar aayi ho....."now looking deeply in her eyes" Meri zindagi sawaarne
Amrit wasn't able to look into his dark eyes for more than five seconds as she blushed hard and gazing at the moon asked
A- Aur aap nahi jaanna chahenge ki mujhe kiska chehra dikh raha hai
R- Nahi jaanna
A- "confused" Kyu
Holding her chin and making her look at himself
R- "teasingly" Agar aapne uss raibahadur tongewale ka naam le liya toh aapke iss pati ka toh dil hi toot jaayega
A- "lovingly ...looking deep into his eyes" Chinta mat kariye mujhe iss chaand mai toh kya harr jagah sirf ek hi chehra dikhta hai aur woh chehra bilkul mere sapnon ke rajkumaar se milta hai...
R- "teasingly" Accha bilkul waisa hi na gora lamba gabru jawaan jaisa hai na
A- Hmm
R- "in a fake confused tone" Accha waise woh hai kaha
A- "lovingly" Philhaal toh meri god pe lete mere saath chaand ko nihaar rahe hai....aur mai bohot khushkismat hu ki mujhe woh mere jeevan saathi ke roop mai mile hai
He smiled hearing her pure confession and lovingly said
R- Khush toh mai zyada hu kyuki chaand mai dikhne wali woh ladki abb sirf mera pyaar hi nahi rahi hai balki meri begum bhi ban chuki hai meri jaan ban chuki hai
She smiled and lovingly asked
A- Abb hum durr kaise huye ek dusre se bataaiye..... Mujhe jab bhi aapki yaad aaegi na mai "pointing to the moon with her eyes" iss chaand mai aapko dekh ke apne mann ki saari baatein kar lungi "looking deep in his eyes" aur aap bhi aisa hi kariyega ...mujhe pura bharosa hai woh humari baatein ek dusre ko pohocha hi dega
R- "in a sad tone" Hmm
Amrit could feel the sadness in his eyes and thus asked
A- Aap abb bhi udaas hai na
Not looking into her eyes
R- Nhi
Amrit cupped his cheeks and made him face herself and said
A- Randheer plss mujhse jhuth na kahiye
Randheer knew that now his Sherlock Holmes won't leave him so without further thinking he opened his heart to her
R- Nahi amrit mai udaas nahi hu par aapse durr jaane ke liye mera mann taiyaar nahi hai bilkul bhi...."with moist eyes" mai aapke bina kaise jeeyunga... Yeh chhe mahine hum bhale hi saath ek kamre mai na rehte ho ya itni der tak ek dusre ke paas na rahe ho par hum ek dusre ke saath the roj raat ko sone se pehle aapka chehra dekhna aur subah aapke chehre ko apne paas paana jaise aadat si ban gyi hai meri.... Aapki meethi aawaaz ko sune bina mujhe samajh nhi aa rha mai kaise rahunga
Amrit felt sad hearing him and with a heavy heart said
A- aap chinta mat kijiye randheer Agar aap nahi chahte hai toh mai kahi nahi jaungi
He got shocked listening her and sternly said
R- Amrit meri yeh baat na acche se sun lijiye ki yeh aapki zindagi hai aur isme faisle bhi aapke hi hone chahiye.... Pls humesha iss baat ka dhyaan rakhiega ki aap free hai aapko jo karna hai aap kar sakti hai......"forwarding his palm in front of her" Waada kariye ki kabhi bhi kisi ki bhi khushi ke liye khaas kar meri khushi ke liye aap apni khushiyon ko qurbaan karne ka nahi sochengi.... Aapki khushi mai hi humesha meri khushi hai aur rahegi
Amrit felt blessed to have such a life partner but then trying to make him understand his importance in her life she said
A- Aur aapki khushi mai meri aur "in a complaining tone" kaisi baatein kar rahe hai aap ha ki mai aapke liye kuch qurbaan na karu...."cupping her cheeks...in a loving tone" Randheer aap sirf mere pati hi nahi hai mere sab kuch hai mera pyaar mere rab sab kuch aur mai aapko yeh vaada nhi kar sakti kyuki meri zindagi mai aap sabse upar aate hai mai aapse khudse bhi zyada pyaar karti hu aur isiliye aapke vaaste yeh duniya toh kya apna pura jahaan bhi qurbaan kar sakti hu phir chahe aapke badle marna
He immediately placed his palm on her lips and In a stern tone said
R- Shh yeh kaisi baatein kar rahi hai aap ha ..... Aapko kya lagta hai aapke bina aapka yeh randheer ji paega......."with love and honesty dripping in his every syllable" haa saansein  chal sakti hai iss shareer mai par na isme rooh reh jaegi aur na hi koi dhadkan kyuki aap sirf iss randheer raizada ka pyaar hi nahi hai uski rooh bhi hai.... Woh harr dhadkan hai jo mai leta hu aur "sternly" aainda kabhi aisi baat ki na toh mai aapse baat nahi karunga
She got overwhelmed hearing his words and cutely said
A- Accha nahi karungi
R- Pakka
A- Haa pakka
R- "in a cute demanding voice" Amru wala waada
A- "smilingly" Haa Amru wala waada
Feeling overwhelmed with emotions she kissed his forehead and while doing so her forehead came in contact with his lips... Randheer kissed her forehead lovingly.... It was a blissful moment for both of them.... The two of them assuring each other that they'll always be their for each other no matter how far they'll be no matter how much they're yearning for each other
They remained like this for few seconds lost in each other ......soon getting back into her senses Amrit blushed hard realising their closeness and sat upright and looked everywhere other than randheer
To gain his attention randheer in a teasing tone said
R- Waise woh aurat bilkul sahi keh rahi thi ki meri votti ko surkhi lagaane ki jarurat hi nahi hai... Mujhe dekhte hi woh sharm se khud ba khud laal ho jaati hai
At first amrit blushed hard at his comment but then she soon realised that she heard this sentence downstairs from a woman and reminisced that he also used the word aurat... In a shocked voice she asked him
A- Randheer yeh toh mujhe unn auraton mai se ek ne boleya tha....
Randheer sensing danger immediately sat upright and maintained a safe distance from her while seeing his antics her doubts got cleared and in a shocked yet angry voice she asked
A- Mtlab aap... Aap the waha pe
Randheer nodded in a yes cutely making her more raged.... She started charging towards him and Seeing her charging towards him with an angry expression he ran and amrit started chasing him... They ran around the whole garden....plucking and Showering flowers on each other at the process
And while running amrit's feet got slipped and she was about to fall hard on the floor when randheer grabbed her bare waist and jerked her towards himself taking the support of the fountain's boundary.....they took a sigh of relief but then got astonished as Their faces were so close to each other that they could feel each other's breathes on their faces....especially their lips......

Just imagine this fountain placed in the center of their big garden and randheer taking support of it

Randheer's heart started beating faster seeing her alluring face which was glowing more under the moonlight making her look like a goddess and in anticipation his hands started caressing her bare soft waist... While amrit wriggled under his hold as she felt a tingling sensation when his rough hands caressed her bare waist.....she felt something extraordinary in his heart....a feeling she can't name....Goosebumps started arousing all over her body and she felt like she'll explode with such indescribable emotions.....They can feel the tension arising in their bodies....an enthralled amrit looked deep into his eyes...while randheer's desires started taking a toll on his sane mind and finally giving into his desires Randheer slowly leaned his face towards her..... Their noses touched each other and
And with trembling lips he was going to take her lips in a kiss when they heard a loud voice of mumma raizada and they came back to their senses and looked here and there

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Priti