Reviewer: AnnQueen5

Cover: Mysterious, dark, gives readers a sense of excitement for what's to come.

Review: Amazing! This book is everything a good fanfiction is. While I'm still a little confused about the Manan fanfiction world, there is no doubt that this is a really good fanfiction. The writing is paced very well, with not everything happening in the first chapter. The meet up between the two characters is slow, yet built up perfectly. Although I sometimes find it hard to believe that the main characters would meet up in a large city, it is a very simple way to create a story. They do not fall in love immediately, and I like that. A solid work by this author.

Suggestions: Again, not much to say, other than improving use of descriptive writing. Instead of saying, he said, she said over and over again, try to use words such as screamed or whispered. It will give the reader more detail and will make the story just that much more interesting.

Rating: 3.75 out of 5 stars