Natasha's Grade:

Natasha, while I can see that you put a lot of effort in this project, I am afraid that I can not give you a full score due to the fact that you didn't follow my instructions. I asked you to describe a room. Instead, you gave me your opinion on the room. I liked the metaphors you used in the description, but that's simply not what I was asking for. I'm sorry but I'm going to have to give you a B.

Amethyst's Grade:

Amethyst, your room description was wonderful. Not only did it have an amazing flow, you followed my instructions exactly, managing to describe a room without adding much of your own opinion. This way, readers will be able to picture exactly what you're describing without your personal thoughts about the room clouding their brain. I could easily tell that you were describing the creative writing room. Good job on your A+!

Ohmygosh I'm so sorry ya'll! I meant to post this much earlier but I've had so much to do this past week...an announcement is going to go up on my message board in a couple minutes extending this A/N but I just wanted to say I'm so sorry for this incredibly late posting!!!