Chapter 17: Avnii in Danger

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On one side Kaamini was weaving a web to trap Avnii whereas Neel was planning his future with Avnii. He slowly forgot about Kaamini. Not only that! He forgot about his own birthday!!!
Itna pyaar mei pagal hogaya hai ye banda!!!

Raj: Priya darling! Neel Ka Birthday aa raha hai. Kyun naa Avnii se kuch karaye? Neel ke liye.

Priya: Hmm...idea achcha hai Raj baby! Avni ko Neel Ka Birthday planner banate hai.

Both laugh.

Raj: par Kya  wo maanegi?

Priya: Tum Avnii ko abhi tak nahi pehchaane. Wo asaani se trust nhi karti par Wo Jab kissi se dosti kar leti hai tab wo usse 100 percent nibhaati hai. Abb Neel Ne Avnii Ka dil jeet liya hai. Usse manana bohot easy hoga.

Raj: yaar Apni cutiepie hai hi itni achchi!

Priya: aakhir dost kiski hai...

Raj: dud mat...wo apne mei hi bohot achchi hai. Abb chale??

Priya gives a sad pout and follows Raj. Both go to Avnii's house. Avnii gets surprised. They tell her about Neel's birthday coming and requests her to arrange. To Raj's surprise she agrees in one go but with one condition that no one else except the four will come. Priya and Raj got confused when she said this but nevertheless agreed.

On Neel's birthday,
Avni went to her farmhouse taking permission from her mom. While she was going on her way some scenes triggered her mind. There was one girl and guy walking holding each other's hands.

Avnii thinks: Kitne khush lag rahe hai dono. Bilkul Priya aur Raj ki tarah...par .....ye farmhouse ka rasta kuch jyada hi lamba kyun lag raha hai aaj. Koi nahi main gaana sunn te hue chalti hoon.

The song which played was.....Hogaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajnaa.....

She looks ahead and sees another couple. Her grew wide seeing them.

Avnii: Ye mai kya dekh rahi hoon...mai aur Neel..

She blinks her eyes multiple times...yet she sees the same. Suddenly everything vanishes.

Avnii: Avnii avnii kya hogaya hai tujhe? Ye kya dekh rahi hai?

And the song plays.......

Hogaya hai tujhko to pyaar sajna. Laakh kar le tu inkaar sajna..

Avnii: Ye kya faaltu sochi jaa rahi hoon...Avni concentrate. Neel ke aane se pehle arrangement poora karna hai.

Avnii reaches the farm house and starts with her arrangements occationally dreaming of Neel and slapping her head smiling at the thoughts and dancing around.

The guard  knocks at the door to ask if she needed anything. Avnii opens the door and gets shocked...

Avnii (thinks): Neeeelllllll........

(Rapid heart beat)

And out of the blue she speaks out loudly: Tumm

Guard: Haa bitiya... mei...kyu? Main to pichle paanch saalo se yahan kaam karta hun...

Avnii feels awkward. Her heartbeat slows down and she gets confused ki abb kya bolun...

Avnii: Wo..haan...uncle..wo sorry.

Guard: Bitiya, aapke pitaji pooch rahe the ki aapko kisi cheez ki zaroorat to nahi?

Avnii: Nahii...aap unhe boll dijiye.

The guard leaves and Avnii closes the door behind and sighs closing her eyes.

As soon as she opens her eyes she sees Neel in a teddy bear costume.

Neel: Mujhe miss kar rahi hon???

 Avnii blinks her eyes multiple times....and then realises it was just her teddy bear.

Teddy be like: Lo...abb mujhe bhi Neel samajh rahi hai....Kya hoga iss ladki ka!

Chintaa ke badal Avnii pe mandraane lage...abb kya hoga? Ye kyun ho raha hai? Mujhe bukhaar to nahi hai? Nahi to. Phir chaaro taraf Neel ko kyu dekh rahi hun? He bhagwaan! kuch ishaara to dijiye...

And then she remembers a conversation between her cousin and her mother.

FLASHBACK

Cousin: Chaahi.....ye pyaar jab hota hai tab kaise pata chalta hai???

Avnii mom: Jab pyaar hota hai...tab chaaro aur tumhe wo insaan nazar aane lagta hai... aisa lagta jaise asmaano se phool gir rahe ho...ek achchi si aur alag si hawa mwhsoos hone lagti hai...

END

Avnii: Isska matlab.....nhi Avnii aisa nahi hai...Kuch bhi mat soch.

After some time, Neel is brought in by Raj and Priya reached there before time to help Avnii in the last bit.

As soon as Neel entered, Avnii's heart started beating fast. Neel's eyes met hers. Neel entered his lala land where he dreamt of Avnii coming forward and hugging him ..and Avnii?

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Hahaha....Avni abhi bhi apne heart beats control karne ki koshish kar rahi hai. Wo bhul gayi ki cardiac muscles involuntary hai. Wo kisiki nahi sunti 🤣🤣🤣

Okk...So...Neel cuts the cake and he feeds the first piece to Avnii. Avnii stares at him with nil expressions. Bandi ko kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Dono ki heart beats joro se dhak dhak...oopppss!! lubb dub kar rahi thi.

Raj and Priya look at each other and Avneel and smile chupke chupke.

Raj: Yaar Neel...aaj ek gaana to chahiye yaar.

Neel: Bro...birthday mera hai....gaana tum gaoge.

Raj: Bro please....

Raj isharo mei tells Avnii to request ..

Avnii: Neel ek gaane ki hi to baat hai....gaa lo na..

Neel: Ohkay.

He takes the guitar...

Oopss! Main to bhul hi gayi ki ye guitar kisne diya!

Obviously Avuu ne....Ye koi bolne ki baat thodi hai.

Neel starts his song and continuously shares eyecontact with Avnii..... (abb Avnii ki haalat khud sochlo)

Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo
Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo
Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo
Gupchup Gupchup Chup Chup oo

Avnii looks at Neil and get mesmerised by his voice.....

Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke

Neel looks at Avnii while Priya and Raj look at each other and blush. Avnii looks on..

Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Haan Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Khabar Chupke Chupke

Neel goes a round around Avnii while her heart still beating fast. Then he touched his back against her. Raj goes behind Priya and they romance behind the wall.

Ho O O O Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke

Avnii's heart beat and breathing goes on faster like never before. The precious wind...different yet comforting slaps them saying.....abb to confess karlo. Neel turns to look towards Avni and Avni turns to look at Neel. Neel revolves around Avni and Avnii rotates keeping the eyecontact intact.

Sansoon Mein Badi Bekarari
Aankhoon Mein Kehi Rat Jage
Kanbhi Kanhi Lag Jaye Dil To
Kanhi Phir Dil Na Lagey
Apna Dil Main Zara Tham Loon
Jaadu Ka Main Ise Naam Doon

Neel bends towards Avni and whispers the words....

Jaadu Kar Raha Hai
Jaadu Kar Raha Hai
Asar Chupke Chupke

Avnii looks on

Do Dil Mil Rahe hain
Magar Chupke Chupke

Neel peeks at Raj and Priya while they act like nothing had happened..

Aise Bhole Ban Kar Hain Baithe
Jaise Koi Baat Nahin
Sabh Kuch Nazar Aa Raha Hai
Din Hai Yeh Raat Nahin

Priya blushes and Raj too....Neel looks at Avnii

Kya Hai Kuch Bhi Nahin Hai Agar
Hoton Pe Hai Khamoshi Magar
Baateen Kar Rahin Hain
Baateen Kar Rahin Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke

All sit around Neel........

Kahin Aag Lagne Se Pehle
Uthta Hai Aisa Dhuaa
Jaisa Hai Idhar Ka Nazara O O
Vaisa Hi Udhar Ka Samaa
Dil Mein Kaise Kazag Si Jagi
Dono Jaalib Barabar Lagi

Neel raises his eyebrows to Avnii...Avni feels warmth in her cheeks and Neel notices the blush on her fair cheecks...

Dekho To Idhar Sebr Dekho To
Idhar Sebr Udhar Chupke Chupke
Zara Tasveer Se Tu Nikal Ke Saamne Aa
Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Haan Sabhko Ho Rahi Hai
Khabar Chupke Chupke
Ho O O O Do Dil Mil Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Magar Chupke Chupke
Magar Chupke Chupke Um Hum Chupke Chupke
Ah Haa Chupke Chupke

Avnii: lagta hai hogaya...

Priya: Kya hogaya Avnii?

Avnii: Mujhe Neel se pyaar hogaya....agar Neel ko pata chal gaya to wo kya sochega...he bhagwaan! humaari dosti agar toot gayi to...nahi...

Priya: Avnii chilll....yaar kuch nahi hoga.  

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Next day at college... Avnii left her bag and went outside. She came back within a minute and shifted her bag to sit when suddenly something fell from her bag.

Avnii looks at it and gets shocked while others make faces and whispers around. There were two people having two different feelings. One guilty and the other happy.

Avnii hears the boos and become emotional. The professor also entered at that moment and said ill of her. Neel entered at that moment and sees the magazines and Avnii. His eyes move to Kaamini who was smirking. Neel clenched his teeth. Avnii looks at Neel with teary eyes.

Avnii: Sir...I really don't know from where it came from......

Prof: Do I look a fool to you? You will such emotional drama and I will leave hain?

Neel: Sir, ek baar Avnii ki baat to sunn lijiye...

Prof: Just shut up...abb tum mujhe bataoge mujhe kya karna chahiye...

Neel: Sir, Avnii aisa nahi kar sakti aap chahe kisi se bhi pooch sakte hon.

Suddenly spoke from behind: Sir Neel sahi kehe raha hai....ye magazines Avnii ki nahi...Kaamini ki hai.

Everyones face turn towards Kaamini...

Avnii (whispers): Nandini...

Kaamini: Yeh kya bol rahi hon.....Sabne dekha ki ye Avnii ke bag se gira  to tum mujh par illzaam kaise laga sakti ho? Saboot kya hai tumhaare pass....

Nandini: Sabne parde mei dikhaya gaya wo dekha....aur maine parde ke peeche ka. Sir, maine Avnii ko bahar jaate dekha aur tabhi Kaamini andar aayi...aur uske haath mei ye magazines the. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki ye larki ye sab karne waali thi

Prof: Proof kya hai?

Nandini: Yeh

Nandini hands over a photo she clicked on her cell phone from behind. She had done that to gossip with her group but anjaane mei wo kaam aagaya.

Kaamini clenches her teeth. Professor leaves. AVnii weeps badly and Neel hugs her to comfort her...

Ruhi was about to leave when Nandini pulled her aside

Nandini: Kyun kiya tumne yeh? Tumhe kya laga mujhe pata nahi....

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Next evening.

Priya: Neel....helloo....Neel

Neel: haan Priya bolo.....

Priya: Wo...Avnii........

Neel (panicking): Kya hua Avnii ko?

Priya: Avv...Avnii nahi mil rahi kya....

Neel: Kyaaa?

Neel takes his car and looks here and there asking people about Avnii....but no one knows. He stops his car and comes out and bangs his hand on the car

He traces his finger with his hair and says....: kahan gayab hogayi hon Avnii.....

Suddenly a voice comes from behind........: Gayab hui nahi.....gayab karwaya gaya hai.

It was Nandini with Ruhi. She pulls Ruhi and brings her in front of Neel. Ruhi bows her head with guilt.

Ruhi and Nandini tells everything to Neel. Neel couldn't control homself and slapped Ruhi. Ruhi was weeping badly....

Ruhi: Nee...Neel...mujhe pata hai Avnii kahan hai...

Neel looks at her with red teary eyes...Ruhi tells the address.

Neel reaches the place and searches for Avnii. He found some goons in the godown. He sneaked in from behind the boxes and reached a room where she found Avnii unconscious and tied upp.

Neel: Avnii...Avnii...aankhein kholo...Avnii

Avnii: Ne..Ne..Neel? 

Neel: Haan Avniii mei...chalo humein yahan se bhaagna hai...time nahi hai humaare pass.

Neel removes the ropes and both move out from the window. One of the goon saw them and calls his gang... They take there truck and follow Avneel. Avneel enter the jungle. The goons leave the truck and ran after them. 

Avneel had bad luck hovering over them. They reached the end of the cliff and the goons were at their tail. Neel fights against some goons but he alone couldn't. Two goons held Avnii. 

Avnii: Neel....

Her call alerted neel . He was  about to kick the goon holding Avnii but two others held him behind. While struggling and fighting he tried to save Avnii. His shirt was torn. One goon pulled her behind towards the cliff and suddenly..........

Avnii's leg slips and she falls down the cliff screaming....Neeeeeellllllllll...........

Neel: Avniiiiiiiiii.............

Neel kicks the side guys and walks down throwing off his torn shirt..........

(the cliff was in a deserted area...and land below....not like that in the serial)

Neel searches here and there and finally finds Avnii lying down unconscious...

Neel: Avniiiiii....aankhein kholo Avniii....please aankhein kholo.

He sits down and takes her in his lap........

Neel: Avnii aankhein kholo Avnii....kuch toh bolo... Tum Neel se baat nahi karogi....Avnii Avni kuch toh bolo.....

He places her head on his lap and as soon as he takes his hand out after resting her head....he sees his hand filled with blood..

Neel: Avvnnniiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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That's it for today. 

I hope you liked it. 

Sorry that I took the whole thing in a fast track. Actually I wanted to write the whole concept in detail and in this chapter only...........par mujhe daant padd jaayegi. Already bohot baar band karne boll diya hai. Isliye couldn't write this chappy tomorrow on Zain's bday.

What do you think? Is this the end ?

Bbyee till the next chappy. Votes comments karna mat bhulna...

Loads of love,

Nibu.



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