Book: Beyond The Barrier

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Reviewer: june_berrin

Thank you so much for giving me the chance to review your story. It was a great story and I enjoyed it.

❥ Title: 9/10

The title is creative and went well with the story plot.

❥ Cover: 9/10

The cover is beautiful and gives off a fantasy and magical vibe. The colors well went together, and the cover will surely draw some attention. The subtitle is not that readable, and I suggest you write it near the title or change the font in which it is written. Overall a very beautiful cover.

❥ Blurb: 10/10

A well-written blurb that gives off just the right amount from the plot and leaves the readers enticed to read the story. Great choice of words, which are well put together. The grammar was on point. Overall, A attractive blurb.

❥ Storyline: 13/15

The story idea is not common and is very unique. I love how you choose rare names which went well with the story theme. Reading the prologue itself, really sparked my interest already. There are no plot holes found and the flashbacks are written greatly that there was no confusion. Each chapter ended perfectly with using just the right amount of cliffhangers. All chapters had great and proper content.

❥ Characters: 13/15

All characters are well developed and portrayed. The author has failed a bit in certain parts of the book to capture the emotion of the characters well. The characters are given unique and their own personalities with proper flaws. Overall, well-developed characters.

❥ Grammar and punctuations: 16/20

Typos were not found, but in some places, while writing you have made mistakes with tenses while writing, which could be corrected with some proofreading. I have spotted a lack of punctuation and also overuse of punctuation. Even though you have written very well using beautiful words to describe, you have made grammatical mistakes which can also be corrected with proofreading. I suggest you read the books of other amazing Wattpad writers which will help your writing very much.

❥ Flow of the Story: 10/10

The story is written at a perfect pace, not too slow and not too fast.

❥ Overall enjoyment: 10/10

The story is really enjoyable. It was written very well.

❥ Conclusions: This book has a lot of potentials and I could see that you have worked hard on this story. You deserve a round of applause for your amazing writing style. You have described everything perfectly helping the reader visualize the story better. Overall, good job.

Total: 90/100

Best Wishes