Tethered Souls by Lily Mitchell (OnceUponALily)

DELIVERY
If I'm honest, I do think the original blurb is already very good. I tried to put a theme to it and remake it. I also went ahead and put a short summary. I am not sure about how many years since the death of Luna's ex-boyfriend or where she lives (sorry, it's been a while since I've read this first chapter). I have also included a summary based off the original blurb. Over all, I'd say I've failed at this attempt but I appreciate you allowing me to give it a shot.

SHORT SUMMARY (new blurb)

Amir Khan, a geneticist in Pakistan, and Luna Carlyle, a photographer in America lead separate lives. Their souls are tethered, granting them teleportation, however, and a clandestine organization hellbent on harnessing their powers has other plans for them.

NEW BLURB

Normal is good. Normal is safe. Normal...is a lie.

Amir Khan, a geneticist living in Pakistan, discovers he is far from normal. His job dictates his life and his family dictates his aspirations, but a rare genetic anomaly dictates that his soul belongs elsewhere. The day he agrees to marry the woman his parents arranged for him, he blacks out and awakens to find he's been dragged across the globe to Georgia, USA to an entirely different woman.

Luna Carlyle has no idea what it means to have her soul tethered to Amir's. Three years after the horrific death of her daughter's father, she's starting over with a new fiancé. She's finally in a good place. Sparks fly when she and Amir are together, but their circumstances and obligations force them to ignore their powers along with their feelings.

Quickly, they come to realize, however, they aren't the first tethered souls. A clandestine organization picks them off one by one. Now, Amir and Luna's tethering is known and all semblance of normalcy is out the window. They must run for their lives.

SHORT SUMMARY (original blurb)

She has a fiancé and he an arranged marriage. Their souls are tethered, granting them teleportation to one another but obligations keep them apart. When a secret organization starts hunting them for their powers, however, sticking together becomes a matter of necessity.

ORIGINAL BLURB

Luna Carlyle, a young American photographer, is no stranger to tragedy. While trying to rebuild her life after her daughter's father was killed in a horrific accident, she's finally in a good place. Luna's new fiancé has been nothing but loving and supportive and has helped raise her daughter as his own. Still, Luna feels that something is missing from her life.

Amir Khan is a geneticist and devout Muslim from Pakistan. He wants to respect his family's wishes and marry the woman they have arranged for him. Though, when his cousin shares a secret with him about his lineage, Amir dedicates his life to finding the truth about those like him.

After making a life-changing discovery, Amir and Luna learn what it means to be tethered to another. Sparks fly when they're together, but their circumstances keep them apart. Just when they think their current relationships and cultural differences will be their biggest hurdle, more secrets unravel, and these two tethered souls must embark on a journey in which their very lives are at stake.