The Dark Between Dreams by H. Kelle (HKelle)

DELIVERY

I wrote this blurb based on the questions you've answered. I'm not sure about the end but I guess you'd know better than I. 

NEW BLURB

Skye is dead. With death, all semblance of living fades, including her memories. Now, there is only After, a makeshift city of souls, surrounded by infinite darkness. She's forbidden to leave and eventually becomes a scavenger--a ghost that searches the wasteland that is the afterlife for lost and buried relics carried over from Earth.

While all other ghosts slowly lose their emotions and begrudgingly accept the eternity of darkness ahead of them, Skye [finds a fragile chance at love with a female ghost named Vale. This is not enough. Skye] longs to find a reason to persist in a world without light.

She risks her existence and leaves the walled city of After in search of the truth. Venturing into the black reveals monsters that tear ghosts apart, but that's not all. The darkness ... and the monsters themselves, are guarding something...

[ ] --> the extra bit of romance added after the fact.

ORIGINAL BLURB

Current Blurb: Skye has just died. She doesn't remember how or why. All she knows is that she's now stuck in After, a makeshift city of souls, a place surrounded by the treacherous Dark.

But while Skye struggles to cope with letting go of her previous life, she realizes that she wants more than to just wait out eternity in a decrepit city of death. She knows there has to be more in this strange, lightless world. There has to be more haunting the Dark that surrounds After than just monsters...

...Right?