1. Jidderh_K

A bride for Istanbul

   I want to begin by praising you for a job well done. I love your writing style and technique 👌🏽 it's close to perfect.

    I love your cover but I feel like the woman there is very different from Samirah. The picture sends a different message from who Samirah really is.

   I love your characters but I think their development was really poor especially Najwa's and her daughter's. I had to read chapter 16 over again to understand who was actually who.

   I love the relationship between Samirah and Ahlan, it was really fun reading their part 🤪. I also like Auntie Haphsie's character.
     Can you also try and translate the Turkish please? Not all of us understand it and it's kinda challenging since you have no idea what it is you read.

   I enjoyed reading every part of this book and I'm looking forward to reading more of it.

2. sir_ahdartoo

A BRIDE FOR ISTANBUL
@Khadija Oyanki PN

Starting with the book cover i think its a little out of place because it doesn't depict your main character and you might want to include your name or user ID on it.

I loved the short and brief chapters, it makes one want to see what is coming up next but i must say the first few chapters were jumbled up. A great deal of line spacing should do and spice it up for us with the translation ( i felt a bit unworthy).

Carrying a large family along is really hectic but you pulled through though you might want to add a little elaboration on some.

Finally, i would like to say you have found a big fan in me, and i look forward to more updates.

#withlove😍✍

3. @khamylarh

A BRIDE FOR INSTANBUL

@Khadija Oyanki PN

I love your writing skills and technique, it's a job well done, Almost perfect.👍🏻

Your cover is good, but it doesn't match with Samira or the story in full. It's a different message from who Samira is.

I love your characters,your characters are much and you couldn't manage them well, try to improve on your characters speech,sometimes it is hard for me to know who is speaking. In general your characters are almost perfect. Really😄

Oh Alhaan and samira's relationship, it's perfect👍🏻😍well done girl. The Turkish though, please try to translate the Turkish, since most of us don't understand it.

I enjoyed reading 'A BRIDE FOR INSTANBUL' I'm already hooked😅, looking forward for an update soon.

4. Halima_tafarki
A BRIDE FOR ISTANBUL

I love your job.

Your cover is good but not perfect for the story because I think samira’s story doesn’t match the cover.

I love the relationship between samira and Ahlan and can you please try to translate the Turkish because it’s not really nice to read something you don’t understand.

I enjoyed the book a lot I’m looking forward for more chapters.

5. eeesh_

REVIEW

KhadijahAdam: A Bride for Istanbul.

You could use some paragraphing

Indicate your A/N in italics or Bold.

How Ahlan magically transformed into the ideal husband when she had cramps was just out of the ordinary

Your chapters are short tbh. And I think that has got to do with the little detail

You hide great happenings in simple conversations, as if they do not matter. Like when Sammy learnt of WHY she was married to Ahlan, and Ahlan, from his Baba or something. We all have been waiting to know. And when you did tell us, it didn't feel like a big deal! Even the characters didn't really react to it!!

I keep hearing of Maria Maria Maria up until Chp6, I don't know who she is and you didnt tell us!

You dont translate that lang! (I'm guessing it's Turkish but oh well)