1. sir_ahdartoo

Her Arrogance, His Humbleness
By @Humairah PN

The book title is catchy, its gives out the message the book is supposed to encompass and am kind of okay with the cover.

My biggest set back while reading your book was lack of spacing, proper paragraphing and distinct arrangement of conversations. I literally had to keep my eye on my phone until i reached the end of a paragraph. It was hectic( no offense plz)

There is no unedited book that has no errors so i believe you are going to set that right with a spice of punctuation too.

Your story interested me a lot ( that was what kept me going) but i thought i will see more of the arrogance than what was portrayed. You know, it might add more drama and keep the tittle in play all through till its almost at the end, i mean she was good before we reached chapter 10.

Your description was a little bit shallow but i love the bond between your characters and how you managed to control a large number of them. The spirituality of the book really got to me, it motivates one to help some one in need.

Lastly, i think some people would appreciate the translation of the foreign languages you used.

With all that said, i want to let you know that you have a very interesting story. The love friction and nick naming thing was just awesome. Keep up the good work.

@Humairah PN , i am sorry if by any means you are offended cause i've never done a review like this. Its but to make each others work better.

With love😍✍
@sir_ahdartoo

2. eeesh_
Review: Her Arrogance, His Humbleness.

I like your Title and Cover, they are kinda attracting. They portray what the story is all about.

Your plot is interesting but your description isn't quite catchy.

However, again with the SHOWING and not TELLING. Your narrative mostly tells us and not show us what really is happening in the story. I've spoken about this in my previous review and Rukky Adam's writing tips a few days ago. You might want to check it out and do the corrections.

We were meant to understand that your main character IS arrogant. But you didn't portray portray that satisfactorily. That characteristic waned way too early in the book.

I find some things really ridiculous. Like how your main character and her driver QUICKLY became soo close so much so that he started calling her Pumpkin. To me, there wasn't much rapport between them to equal to him calling her that and eveb discussing personal stuff. For someone she HATES so much.

Finally, your style of writing is kinda discouraging. It lacks proper spacing, paragraphing, punctuations, etc. And conversations aren't properly portrayed.

Other than that, you have an amazing story there. Kudos!

3. @tahmyrah
Her arrogance, His humbleness
By Humylash

The cover I must say is catchy. The conversations were witty, interesting and easy to relate to. One problem I had was the part of the arrogance part of the title, her character didn't really portray that or for better words to say, early in the book she had a serious character change.

As most books that haven't been edited, there a need for editing and I'm sure you know that😊.

The main characters and the main supporting characters that had great influence on the overall outcome of the book were not properly introduced.

All in all, the book was good. Keep it up 👌.

4. AishaUmarYau
Her arrogance, his humbleness

The first chapter started out good, She sounded arrogant and was unapologetic about it. From then on she seemed to sizzle out of xter, she kinda came as another run-of-the-mill brat.

There's lots of telling and less showing e.g in the third chapter where she said 'I find small faults in him." and lots more like that, makes me feel cheated out of the real drama.

The xter change was too sudden and early in the book. We need to see more bonding between them and some self searching on her side, for us to connect to the change she had gone tru.

All in all, u have a very good story idea, which if tweaked in the right places will make for a great read. keep it up.