So guys, what is the most overused cliches when it comes to harem MCs? Wait, i wanna list down the things i have first.

-the MC must a bland white knight who can never be remotely relatable to the reader.

-MC must be a mary/gary sue.

-it takes little-to-no effort to make even the most improbable and aromatic chicks to become horny for them when it makes almost no sense.

-the MC will get easily stronger and/or overpowered with a short amount of no real training.

-MC is an edgelord for the sake of his idol sasuke-sama.

But I'm not gonna leave it just there, so I'm just gonna elaborate on the third point. Ok? Ok then.

I'm not trying to tell you how to write your stories, but I'm trying to tell you how to write your stories.

How many times have you seen relationships between MC and any girl develope to where they would actually have good development to where the girl would consider dating? 5, 3, None? Well shit, man Me too!

In most books, you don't even need to know them for a few days for them to fall in love with you. Hell, you can just use two mere minutes to make them super horny for you by just doing absolutely nothing!

Unless it's a lemon book, then go ahead, but if it's not. Try not to overboard with it. I know it's anime, but even i don't think 50+ girls are willing to share one guy like a community dildo.

You'll either be real lucky if you manage to NOT catch anything for fucking all those chickss or that's the work of plot convenience.

Then there's micromanagement. Are you really that dedicated to so many girls? Do you really want so little time to yourself just by having to date each and everyone of them? I may or may not be criticizing/kamikaze-ing myself here, but whatever.

If you want an example of how most relationships start, then here's one.

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Girl: I'm a character who has no particular interest in anyone and I'm probably a bit aromatic or even lesbian.

MC: *walks in the room and takes a deep breath* hey random person I've never seen before.

Girl:

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I know i do mostly harem stories and all, but i try and avoid cliches. Here's a few examples of the characters in my current books.

the MC of The Weakest Dragon is an almost relatively relatable and slightly perverted teen even though i haven't spent much on drawing the characters out, but I'll draw them out later on. Plus, he's actually pretty weak compared to most characters at the moment.

No Place For The Strongest has one where the MC isn't a hero or an edgelord, he's just a powerful dude who just doesn't want to deal with anyone's bullshit and just sleep or whatever, though he does care about those close to him.

I only done one chapter witb An Amnesiac In Hell, but i guarantee he won't be so cliched as the story progresses.

Whatever criticism you have, i can read it and we could talk over it. So don't spare my shriveled feelings.

Well that's all i have for now, but i will make a part 2 of my RWBY parody in the next part, aswell as making a new chapter of my dxd book.

So how was this?